HoloBall
Logline
Two murders in Pittsburgh, Pa. fifty-three years apart are solved by supernatural means.
Genre
Biographical,,Action,Detective,Mystery
Short Summary
The story is told in first-person and the narrator is Jacob Johnson, a Homicide Detective out of Zone 3. It starts on Dec. 23rd, 1995 and two crimes have been committed in that area; one in 1995 and one in 1949. In the fictional part, a young lady has been raped and brutally murdered on a bike trail
Jake finds and brings Eva's murdered to justice. That night, her ghost goes and lives with Jake. She will help him in further cases.
Setting
Pittsburgh, Pennsylvania
Based on a True Story
Yes
Plot - Premise
Internal Journey/Rebirth,,Overcoming Monster/Villain
Plot - Other Elements
Twist,,Happy Ending
Mature Audience Themes
Language/Profanity
Main Character Details
Name: Jacob Johnson
Age: 35
Gender: Male
Role: Protagonist
Key Traits: Adventurous, Visionary,Blunt,Lone Wolf
Additional Character Details
Name: Vinnie Falbo
Age: 50
Gender: Male
Role: Mentor
Key Traits: Extraordinary Powers and Abilities, Leader, Badass, Funny, Confident,Badass,Masculine,Confident,Faithful,Engaging
Additional Character Details
Name: Eva Koppel Rinkes
Age: Forever twenty-two
Gender: Female
Role: mentor
Key Traits: Leader,Gracious,Engaging,Decisive,Sexy
Additional Character Details
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Development Pitch
Jake Johnson stumbles onto a forty six yer old suicide/ murder of a young German war bride. While investigating that an another murder in 1995 Jake and his partner, Vinnie Falbo, solve both cases with help from a German physic and the ghost of the war bride, named Eva. In the end , Eva goes and lives with Jake who's a bachelor.