Moe Fields - the special bond between fathers and sons

Stuart Z Goldstein

Book Cover

GENRE

MEMOIR BIOGRAPHICAL FAMILY RELIGIOUS

    Core Theme

    THE LIFE OF A YOUNG JEWISH MAN WHO FINDS MEANING IN BOXING BEFORE BUILDING A LIFE, A FAMILY AND A LEGACY.

    TIME PERIOD

    1920s & '30s,1940s & '50s,1960s & '70s,1980s & '90s,20th Century (multiple decades)

    COMPARABLE TITLES

    RAGING BULL, CINDERELLA MAN, STARS IN THE RING: JEWISH CHAMPIONS IN THE GOLDEN AGE OF BOXING

    CHARACTER LIST

    MORRIS GOLDMAN (MOE FIELDS): 14 TO 61. LEAD. STRONG AND CONFIDENT.

    FRANNIE GOLDMAN: 17-85.
    MURRAY'S WIFE AND LIFE PARTNER.

    ALAN GOLDMAN: FROM BIRTH TO ADULTHOOD. MURRAY'S FIRST SON.

    ZACH GOLDMAN: FROM BIRTH TO ADULTHOOD. MURRAY'S SECOND SON.

    GARY GOLDMAN: FROM BIRTH TO ADULTHOOD. MURRAY'S THIRD SON.

    ISAAC GOLDMAN: 50+. MURRAY'S FATHER.

    Logline

    The story is a tribute to a dad’s fighting spirit and determination to protect his family and inspire his three sons to succeed in their careers—and as fathers. The author’s father’s early career as a boxer sets the tone for the story--in the 1932 Golden Gloves tournament and later as a bootleg f

    Target Audiences

    Age: 18-34,35-54,55+

    Target Gender: Universal

    Setting

    Brooklyn New York, WWII France, Italy, Paramus New Jersey

    Based on a True Story

    Yes

    Publishing Details

    Status: Yes: with a Publisher

    Publisher: Pen Paper Press (small indie)

    Year Published: 2021

    Starting Description

    The book, Moe Fields – the special bond between fathers and sons, starts with a brutal boxing match during the Depression. What would you do for your family? Fight back? Across five decades, Moe’s story will inspire you...and leave indelible mark. He will become a part of you. It's about legacy.

    Ending Description

    Moe fights to recover from a brain tumor, later helps his wife who at 44 is crippled by drunk driver; fighting back is what he knows; to grow his plumbing business & secure his family. He dies prematurely, but his sons are driven to go on & succeed by their father's grit and fighting spirit.

    Group Specific

    Information not completed

    Hard Copy Available

    Yes

    ISBN

    978-1-7366322-2-2

    Mature Audience Themes

    Nudity, Language/Profanity

    Plot - Other Elements

    Meaningful Message,Happy Ending,Coming of Age

    Plot - Premise

    Quest,Internal Journey/Rebirth,Rags to Riches,Voyage and Return,Tragedy

    Main Character Details

    Name: Morris Goldman (aka Moe Fields)

    Age: from 15 to 61

    Gender: Male

    Role: Protagonist

    Key Traits: Adventurous,Masculine,Aggressive,Charming,Complex,Confident,Decisive,Engaging,Faithful,Heroic,Honorable,Leader,Underdog,Religious,Patriotic,Selfless,Funny,Visionary,Badass,Blunt,Strong Moral Code,Unapologetic

    Additional Character Details

    Name: Frannie Goldman

    Age: 17-85

    Gender: Female

    Role: Protagonist

    Key Traits: Adventurous,Aspiring,Aggressive,Charming,Confident,Decisive,Empathetic,Faithful,Gracious,Honorable,Underdog,Modest,Religious,Selfless,Outspoken,Funny,Romantic,Strong Moral Code,Sarcastic,Unapologetic

    Additional Character Details

    Name: Alan, Zach & Gary (sons)

    Age: over several decades

    Gender: Male

    Role: emotional

    Key Traits: Adventurous,Underdog,Aspiring,Masculine,Modest,Badass,Aggressive,Charming,Obedient,Complex,Confident,Religious,Decisive,Blunt,Empathetic,Selfless,Engaging,Outspoken,Faithful,Skillful,Funny,Heroic,Educated,Honorable,Leader,Strong Moral Code

    Additional Character Details

    Name: three sons

    Age: 10-37

    Gender: Male

    Role: sidekick

    Key Traits: Adventurous,Underdog,Aspiring,Modest,Aggressive,Charming,Complex,Confident,Decisive,Empathetic,Engaging,Faithful,Funny

    Genre

    DRAMA, RELIGION

    Brief

    A man grows up during the great depression and finds in boxing the first meaning to his life. It's the fighting spirit developed during his time as a boxer that makes him persevere after going to war, building his own business, surviving two brain tumors, and serving as an example to his sons.

    Overall Rating

    FAIR

    Point of View

    THIRD PERSON

    Narrative Elements

    Authors Writing Style: FAIR

    Characterization: FAIR

    Commerciality: FAIR

    Franchise Potential: FAIR

    Pace: FAIR

    Premise: GOOD

    Structure: FAIR

    Theme: GOOD

    Accuracy of Book Profile

    The profile focuses too much on what Murray means to his children and too little on what he has done to be this inspirational. He is for sure a very interesting character, but the book profile lacks objectivity and good selling arguments.

    Draw of Story

    The fights, for sure! This book writing and narrative potential reveal themselves during the fighting scenes. They're very well written and offer a good amount of action, serving also as a good metaphor for Murray's life struggles. But, like everything else, they are very disconnected from the narrative.

    Possible Drawbacks

    The book lacks in concision. There is a lot of unnecessary details about Murray's life. All the WWII part could be summarized in one or two chapters, the same could be made with his life going back to normal after the war. Even this being based on a real story, some details simply don't need to be fully explained.

    Use of Special Effects

    THE STORY DOES NOT RELY ON SPECIAL EFFECTS

    Primary Hook of Story

    The historical context, Murray can be seen as a real-life Forrest Gump, with his trajectory showing how life in America changed during the 20th century. A young Jewish man who discovered himself in boxing whose used the strength developed in the rings to persevere in life and face all sorts of struggles while building a family and a legacy.

    Fanbase Potential

    There is some potential if the adaptation focuses on the parallels between his early and late lives. There is some engaging drama in Murray's struggles when he is still understanding what he wants for the future and in the fight against cancer while building a family.

    Awards Potential

    Murray is equally complex in his early and late lives. With a more concise story and good actors playing his role during life, I think this adaptation can have the potential to win Awards.

    Envisioned Budget

    LOW BUDGET

    Similar Films/TV Series

    RAGING BULL, CINDERELLA MAN, STAR IN THE RING: JEWISH CHAMPIONS IN THE GOLDEN AGE OF BOXING

    What’s New About the Story

    I don't remember many other biographical stories about the Jewish golden age of boxing and how this was important for this community while they persevered in America. Focusing more on this as parallel to Murray's life struggles can make his story even more unique.

    Lead Characters

    The look at different Historical moments with Murray's eyes certainly stands out to me. He is not an observer per se, but the way the world changes are influent over his life and how he confronts them even when all the odds are against him, as much as his perseverance is a powerful inspiration to how his wife and children confront their own struggles makes Murray a compelling character.

    Uniqueness of Story

    It's not a rare gem, but can be improved by making the story more concise and focusing on the parallels between his young and old lives.

    Possible Formats

    Film: Studio, Indie, Streaming

    Analyst Recommendation

    WORK IN PROGRESS

    Justification

    This book needs to be more concise in the story it wants to tell. There is a lot of unnecessary events which would need only one paragraph or even a sentence, not an entire chapter. There are clear focal points in Murray's life lost in all these tiny details that don't work in fiction. His father's gambling problem doesn't need this much attention, neither the moments when he stayed in a boat during WWII. This may be important to his life as a whole, but not to this narrative.

    Tips for Improvement

    Focusing more on the boxing part and how this, in some ways, turned Murray into the man he became. How much his vocation as a boxer paved the way he confronted all the life struggles he faced. Then telling how Murray as a formed man became an example to be followed by his children.

    Brief

    A man grows up during the great depression and finds in boxing the first meaning to his life. It's the fighting spirit developed during his time as a boxer that makes him persevere after going to war, building his own business, surviving two brain tumors, and serving as an example to his sons.

    What We Liked

    We pinpoint the moment when Murray makes a living as a boxer. The boxing scene during the 1930s, the Depression context, and how difficult it was for him to help his family while trying to make a future for himself. It's fascinating how Murray finds new meanings when life is hard, such as his love for Franny or the objective of building a business for himself.

    Film: Besides the book's length, an excellent one-and-a-half-hour drama is waiting to be adapted here. This coming-of-age story looks to the simple people to tell the story of 20th century America from the Great Depression to the recovery after WWII. The historical backdrop that influences these characters' life can make this a unique and thrilling movie.

    TV: Murray's life could work very well as a period story, first about the Golden Age of boxing in the 1930s and last about how was America's reconstruction after the war. How ordinary people build a life in this world resonates with Murray's children. The story can be developed gradually during the episodes, maybe with the Author himself narrating Murray's story and the season being divided into two: young and old Murray.

    Key points:
    1. Interesting setting during the Great Depression and the after war's America;
    2. The boxing scene during the 1930s;
    3. The inspirational life-lessons from the main character;
    4. Low budget;
    5. The self-made man has a prosperous life, even with many struggles.

    Synopsis

    Young MURRAY, the oldest son of ISAAC and TONIA GOLDMAN., lives on the fourth floor of a tenement building with his parents and three siblings. ISAAC is a good man with a gambling addiction, which he justifies by saying that this is a way to bring home more money even with him losing much more than winning. This is the 1930s America during the Great Depression when raising a family was an even more difficult task for the poor.

    Specific day, the adolescent MURRAY follows his father and sees ISAAC being attacked by two men because of gambling debts. MURRAY then intervenes and beats the attackers to save his dad. This makes his father leave home, forcing TONIA to ask a brother for help. She sends MURRAY to this brother's house so they can save money to afford to feed the other children and the rent. With time, MURRAY's uncle starts to mistreat him and the boy, making him run away from the new home to Philadelphia, where MURRAY joins a circus at 16. There he works as a handyman, among other things. In the chaos, MURRAY also knows his first love: Mariana. A woman of 26 years old who doesn't see a future with the boy she thinks has 18. She never breaks up with MURRAY but disappears when the circus arrives in Chicago. MURRAY saves LOUIE, a friend from the chaos, from being beaten. And LOUIE takes MURRAY to watch his first boxing match as a way of thanking him. When the boy meets Mariana again, she is with another man. MURRAY has his first heartbreak. He then decides it's time to go back home.

    In Brooklyn, MURRAY meets ALVIN, who introduces him to boxing. Don't take long before he fights for the first time, winning easily. This makes him compete in boxing tournaments, but in secret, because he fears his family won't approve. With time, MURRAY sees his career growing, adopting the ring name of Moe Fields to keep this side of his life secret. Registered in the Golden Gloves tournament, MURRAY is punished after being seen at the gym with his brothers lifting weights, something forbidden to the competitors after the registration is made. He ends up being honest and admits to breaking the rules.

    MURRAY can't be away from boxing for much time. In one visit to Rosie's bar, he hears a clandestine boxing tournament happening in the back. There is a man known as BULLDOG MULLOBY who is the current champion. The announcer asks for challengers offering money to whoever wins the fight. Seeing the opportunity, MURRAY steps up and starts a career as a clandestine brawler.

    One of MURRAY's sisters, BERTA, asks for his company on a double date with ZIGGY, a local boy. He denies it at first. By this time, MURRAY also works at Limberg's bakery, and, on his way there, he sees again a girl he met years ago, her name is FRANNY, and she is now a beautiful woman. She constantly challenged him to handball matches when they were kids, and MURRAY never accepted. This time he decides to take the challenge. This proves to be a hard match, and even with MURRAY making FRANNY fall to the ground, she wins. Two weeks later, MURRAY accepts the double date invitation. He goes as a company to BERTA date's sister: FRANNY. They start to become close, but this doesn't develop because FRANNY is part of an all-women traveling band as a saxophonist.

    Don't take too long for MURRAY and FRANNY to meet again. He still loves her, but she is in love with another man called JERRY. MURRAY can't stand seeing them both together and starts intervening in their relationship, even letting JERRY attack him one time without fighting back. For some reason, this makes FRANNY think about MURRAY more and more until she decides to break up with JERRY to be with MURRAY. After a car accident and a good time dating, MURRAY asks FRANNY in marriage. They married in the fall of 1938.

    FRANNY gets pregnant for the first time after WWII started. This makes the couple want to move to another place, like New Jersey or California. During the fourth month of pregnancy, she has her first miscarriage. As long as the war keeps going, the fear of being called up as a foot soldier grows inside MURRAY. He then follows a friend called ARTIE and enlists to the Navy, expecting this way he can be designated to some ship that'll never go to war. MURRAY is assigned to the USS Catoctin. The boat is dispatched to fight but never participates in any significant conflict. There MURRAY knows the king of Britain and the president of the United States.

    Back home, MURRAY starts working on plumbing again, with a big pay raise. He and FRANNY still want to have kids, so they try another two times, ending in other miscarriages. One year after this, FRANNY is pregnant again from the couple's first son: ALAN GOLDMAN. They soon have another two kids: ZACH and GARY. With a family to raise, MURRAY starts his own plumbing business. In this meantime, he discovers a head tumor -- needing to have surgery to remove it. He then sees his family break after his father dies. ISAAC leaves 300,000 dollars as a heritage to its children, which causes a fight between them.

    At 43, MURRAY sees his plumbing business reach one million a year in revenues, becoming an influential man. Attending a plumbers' event in Atlantic City, MURRAY and FRANNY"s are involved in a car accident caused by a drunk driver. This makes them go to a hospital for almost two months, leaving their children alone. MURRAY survives but has problems for the rest of his life, while FRANNY needs to be in a wheelchair for years before she starts to recover the movements of her legs. They persevered, even after all of this and another brain tumor to MURRAY's count. He dies in his 60s, but not after living an inspirational and eventful life.

    About The Author

    Stuart Z. Goldstein was one of the longest-serving spokespersons on Wall Street. He is also a very proud and loving son of a great man and wants to see this story being told.