Lost Long; Book I of the Freyr Chronicles

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ROMANCE FANTASY ADVENTURE YOUNG ADULT

2000s,Contemporary

Rochelle L. Wilcox

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Submision Type

book

Logline

The god Freyr, living secretly among humans, is attacked by his brother Loki, who allows a human, Lia, to see the attack. Freyr resolves to save Lia's life and takes her to his sister's house to protect her. Loki finds them, forcing Freyr and the others to travel to Asgard to bargain for Lia's life.

Genre

Romance,Fantasy,Adventure,Young Adult

Short Summary

Loki attacks Freyr on a rainy Los Angeles morning, exposing to the human Lia some of the abilities the gods are required to hide from humanity. Loki decides Lia's life is forfeit and so Freyr kidnaps Lia to take her to his sister's house, where he will wipe Lia's memories, which would save her life.

Setting

Los Angeles and other parts of U.S.; Stockholm; worlds in Norse mythology

Based on a True Story

No

Plot - Premise

Quest,Overcoming Monster/Villain

Plot - Other Elements

Happy Ending

Mature Audience Themes

Information not completed

Main Character Details

Name: Freyr

Age: He appears to be 35, but has been alive for millennia

Gender: Male

Role: Protagonist

Key Traits: Adventurous,Charming,Complex,Confident,Decisive,Masculine,Sexy,Selfless,Empathetic,Strong Moral Code,Sophisticated,Romantic,Leader,Honorable,Heroic

Additional Character Details

Name: Ailia Leng

Age: 28

Gender: Female

Role: Protagonist

Key Traits: Charming,Confident,Empathetic,Engaging,Gracious,Adventurous,Badass,Sexy,Romantic,Educated,Strong Moral Code,Sophisticated

Additional Character Details

Name: Freyja

Age: She appears to be 35 but has been alive for millennia

Gender: Female

Role: sidekick

Key Traits: Adventurous,Charming,Badass,Complex,Funny,Sexy,Decisive,Empathetic,Engaging,Selfless,Gracious,Romantic,Seductive,Heroic,Honorable,Sophisticated,Strong Moral Code

Additional Character Details

Name: Will

Age: He appears to be 35 but has been alive for about 100 years.

Gender: Male

Role: sidekick

Key Traits: Adventurous,Badass,Complex,Sexy,Confident,Decisive,Selfless,Engaging,Funny,Skillful,Gracious,Heroic,Romantic,Strong Moral Code,Sophisticated,Faithful,Flexible,Heartthrob,Honorable,Leader,Masculine,Modest

About The Author

Rochelle Wilcox was born and raised in Las Vegas, where she learned at an early age the value of fantasy and escape. Raised by a single mom — one of the first women trained to deal poker in the early 70's — Rochelle spent more time in casinos than most adults. She and her husband decided to leave the desert behind and raise their sons in Northern California, where they spend as much time on the water as they can. Despite her lifelong passion for story-telling, Rochelle's path took her to law school and then to a practice focused on media law and appeals. But her love of writing wasn't sated with briefs bound by legal principles and a fealty to facts. And so she started to tell the story that had been playing in her mind for years, based on the Norse mythology she loved as a child and built around her favorite character — the Norse God of Love, Freyr. Books I, II and III are complete and she's editing Book IV, the final book in the Freyr Chronicles.

Target Audiences

Age: 13-17,18-34,35-54,55+

Target Gender: Female Leaning

Group Specific

Information not completed

Publishing Details

Status: Yes: self-published

Publisher: Amazon

Year Published: 2012

Hard Copy Available

No

ISBN

Information not completed

Genre

FANTASY, ACTION, ROMANCE

Brief

After a human woman ends up witnessing a fight between the Norse gods Freyr and Loki, Freyr is forced to save her from a lethal fate. They end up falling in love in the process, but in the end, he has to erase her memories to save her life.

Overall Rating

GOOD

Point of View

THIRD PERSON

Narrative Elements

Authors Writing Style: GOOD

Characterization: GOOD

Commerciality: GOOD

Franchise Potential: EXCELLENT

Pace: GOOD

Premise: FAIR

Structure: GOOD

Theme: FAIR

Accuracy of Book Profile

Yes, it does, even though the conclusion doesn't exactly count as a happy ending.

Draw of Story

The story starts right in the middle of the action and gets you to know more about the characters later, which is a great strategy to get you involved in the narrative quickly.

Possible Drawbacks

The story is very well structured and full of compelling events, so I didn't want to stop reading at all.

Use of Special Effects

THE STORY RELIES HEAVILY ON SPECIAL EFFECTS

Primary Hook of Story

The main hook is the existence of Norse gods, virtually forgotten, still living among us.

Fanbase Potential

The characters have the same origins as some Marvel heroes/villains, but with very different personalities and backgrounds. While it may sound confusing to the audience, the story has a chance to generate greater interest in Norse mythology and form a large fanbase.

Awards Potential

It would have good chances in specific Awards aimed at the fantastic cinema.

Envisioned Budget

LARGE BUDGET

Similar Films/TV Series

THOR - MARVEL'S SUPERHERO MOVIE SHOWS THE STORY OF THOR, SON OF ODIN, WHO DESCENDS AND CONTINUES HIS ETERNAL FIGHT WITH HIS BROTHER LOKI. AMERICAN GODS - AS IN THE BOOK, THE SERIES TELLS THE STORY OF THE STRUGGLE BETWEEN ANCIENT AND MODERN GODS WHO LIVE AMONG HUMAN BEINGS AND DEPEND ON THEIR WORSHIP.

What’s New About the Story

The story itself is not very original. Other similar narratives, involving gods and humans, have been created before, but the book makes up for it through the charisma of the characters and the action, which is very well written and engaging. To be more original, the book could go a bit out of the ordinary, especially deviating from tropes and creating more unexpected relationships between these characters.

Lead Characters

They are brave, morally upright, and come from very different worlds, which creates an interesting atmosphere for the romance that begins to brew between them.

Uniqueness of Story

It's not a rare gem, but it's a very good book. With a little more originality, it could end up becoming a rare gem.

Possible Formats

Film: Studio, Streaming

Analyst Recommendation

CONSIDER

Justification

For starters, the author's writing is very good and engaging. Although many of the things that are going to happen are predictable from the start, she manages to maintain a very rousing pace that makes it difficult to give up reading. Also, the actions themselves are well structured and timed, especially the fight scenes or the ones of battles against mythological monsters. Even characters who are against the protagonists gain some depth and aren't just described as big bad villains. At the heart of this entire narrative, the love story between a god and a human is gradually developed, allowing the reader to engage with this relationship, even though it was quite predictable from the start. Dealing with Norse mythology while there are already well-known film versions of gods like Thor and Loki could be problematic, but the focus on another lesser-known deity, which is Freyr, makes it clear that this is a very different adaptation of that mythology. There is a very interesting background of exploration of this mythological universe, which shows that the author has great interest and knowledge in this area. What's missing is a little more originality and unique characteristics that make this story even more different and allow it to survive in the public's memory. And, as the ending makes clear, if the adaptation is successful, there's plenty of room for other sequels and even a franchise.