Crystals of Empire Trilogy

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ACTION ADVENTURE DRAMA EPIC FANTASY RELIGIOUS POLITICAL

17th Century or Earlier

M. Poyhonen

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Logline

Kazi Boku is born to live a life of epic responsibility. Destiny initiates his training by a loving family and community, while adversity and loss direct his path to restoring the harmony of nature.

Genre

Action,Adventure,Drama,Epic,Fantasy,Religious,Political

Short Summary

Tyrus has created crystals of power capable of healing any wound or curing any disease. He employs his crystals to create new forms of creatures. He wants to give occupied land, where the Boku family lives, to his minions and when his created bears fail, he sends mercenaries.


Angus Town is growing and Kazi Boku's inn is successful but Tyrus Hammersvold, The High Priest of Kaal, wants to test his created Bragetti and orders them to destroy the new village. They succeed in their ordered destruction but are defeated by the Duke's forces. Kazi is sent to find the Bragetti.

Setting

Fantasy world of Starn

Based on a True Story

No

Plot - Premise

Overcoming Monster/Villain,Tragedy,Internal Journey/Rebirth,Other

Plot - Other Elements

Coming of Age,Philosophical Questions,Twist,Other

Mature Audience Themes

Extreme Violence

Main Character Details

Name: Kazi Boku

Age: 20

Gender: Male

Role: Protagonist

Key Traits: Aspiring,Adventurous,Charming,Complex,Decisive,Religious,Engaging,Faithful,Heroic,Honorable,Naive,Romantic,Skillful

Additional Character Details

Name: Tyrus Hammesvold

Age: 400

Gender: Male

Role: Protagonist

Key Traits: Badass,Aggressive,Villainous,Narcisstic,Masculine,Complex,Secretive,Power Hungry,Educated,Leader,Manipulative,Unapologetic,Visionary,Gracious,Confident

Additional Character Details

Name: Tsian Po

Age: 20

Gender: Male

Role: sidekick

Key Traits: Adventurous,Charming,Complex,Confident,Selfless,Engaging,Faithful,Flexible,Honorable,Unapologetic,Skillful,Masculine,Empathetic

Additional Character Details

Name: Deborah

Age: 70

Gender: Female

Role: tempter

Key Traits: Badass,Charming,Aggressive,Narcisstic,Sexy,Criminal,Engaging,Power Hungry,Skillful,Faithful,Greedy,Romantic,Seductive,Manipulative,Unapologetic,Villainous,Complex

Development Pitch

Tyrus has created Crystals that can heal any illness or injury. The crystals must be charged with the entire lifeforce of any creature and when used, the charge distributes some of the qualities of that lifeforce to the one being healed. Humans to bears, bears to humans, or any animals can be mixed and, over time a new species can be created. People can be also 'recharged' to live forever. Tyrus also creates a religion, The Temple of Kaal, based on healing and plans to control the world by ruling Kings and Dukes from behind the façade of his religious enterprise. Miraculous healing requires a life and using such power for self gain has unforeseen consequences. Tyrus' creature creations do not go unnoticed by the Cosmic and Kazi Boku is born to put a stop to Tyrus' constructs. Kazi has no knowledge of his prescribed destiny and only wants to live a happy life, farming, getting married, and perhaps, becoming an innkeeper. Unfortunately, his path constantly intersects with Tyrus's plans for world domination. The village where he grew up is desired by Tyrus and mercenaries are sent to remove the occupants. The school he attends is attacked by Tryus assassins. His wife is murdered by Temple of Kaal mercenaries and the new village, Angus Town, is beset by Tyrus's Bragetti. Kazi's losses grow each time he survives the inroads of Tyrus's plans. This story would make an excellent series lasting several seasons. Unique characters with interesting subplots.

About The Author

Mark's insatiable curiosity concerning the nature of reality led to decades of study, mystery schooling, and meditation. He has worked many space projects, including STS-4. Enlightened mentors provided extraordinary experiences that are often exposed in subtle and sometimes, not so subtle, occurrences within his storytelling. Today, he is a retired systems engineer living in the north woods of Wisconsin.

Target Audiences

Age: 18-34

Target Gender: Universal

Group Specific

Information not completed

Publishing Details

Status: Yes: self-published

Publisher: Amazon.com

Year Published: 2020

Hard Copy Available

No

ISBN

Information not completed

Genre

ACTION, WAR, FANTASY, DRAMA

Brief

Kazi Boku and his best friend Tsian lose everything but each other when raiders pillage their family's village. Kazi tries to start a new life, but the Temple of Kaal and the troubles they bring prevent him from happiness. The leaders of the Temple, the masterminds behind the attacks, ensure that Kazi does not learn of their plot by sending the very soldiers Kazi would need as witnesses as his next target practice.

Overall Rating

GOOD

Point of View

THIRD PERSON

Narrative Elements

Authors Writing Style: GOOD

Characterization: EXCELLENT

Commerciality: GOOD

Franchise Potential: EXCELLENT

Pace: GOOD

Premise: GOOD

Structure: GOOD

Theme: GOOD

Accuracy of Book Profile

Yes the book fairly reflects the profile; aside from that, Deborah seems to have a bigger antagonist role than Tyrus. Although he is the leader, she seems to be more present and influential as the narrative progresses.

Draw of Story

The dynamic between the village families is very charming and relatable, and then suddenly almost all the beloved characters are taken away.

Possible Drawbacks

The women for the most part seem to be stuck in caretaker roles. While Deborah as the priestess seems to have a bit more to do, she too is still subservient to Tyrus. By giving women more central roles with greater variation in agency, the diversity of the cast will shine.

Use of Special Effects

THE STORY RELIES HEAVILY ON SPECIAL EFFECTS

Primary Hook of Story

The hook is that Kazi Boku is just trying to lead a normal life and his dream is to be an innkeeper, but supernatural forces looking to take over the world keep trying to kill him and he keeps thwarting their plans.

Fanbase Potential

This could have a medium fanbase for those who like the fantasy action genre as there is mostly action and the magic is simple to understand.

Awards Potential

Fantasy genre films do not tend to win many awards. While similar to a historical piece the focus on action over emotional range is unlikely to garner acting notice, though the film might win for sound mixing or special effects of the battles.

Envisioned Budget

LARGE BUDGET

Similar Films/TV Series

THE GREAT WALL, THE LORD OF THE RINGS, THE WITCHER, ROBIN HOOD (BBC SERIES), AVATAR THE LAST AIRBENDER, XENA: WARRIOR PRINCESS

What’s New About the Story

What is original and unique is Kazi Boku's lack of supernatural powers, but his ability to fight the Temple through sheer skill. He is a reluctant fighter and fierce friend who uses creativity and heart to fight and only fights when he has to.

Lead Characters

The friendship between Kazi and Tsian is very heartwarming and that they start a new life even through Tsian doesn't have hands and their town was massacred is credit to their strength and determination.

Uniqueness of Story

This could be a rare gem with a few tweaks. The world-building takes a while to be established which slows down the pacing of Kazi embarking on the hero's journey. Kazi does not face much loss until far into the first couple chapters which does not catalyst him to move about in the world as he is content beforehand. By speeding up when Kazi is forced to fight the Temple as revenge, the momentum of the dramatic narrative will be more suspenseful and intense.

Possible Formats

Film - Indie, Film - Studio, Film - Streaming

Analyst Recommendation

CONSIDER

Justification

It has excellent action sequences especially involving bears a la The Revenant and the charming characters although pursued by evil are not hellbent on a revenge plot rather they are trying to escape the destruction of death and lead a normal life.