The Eagle and the Dragon, a Novel of Rome and China

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ACTION ADVENTURE EPIC HISTORICAL FICTION ADVENTURE EPIC HISTORICAL FICTION

17th Century or Earlier,Across Centuries

Lewis F. McIntyre

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Two thousand years ago a hundred Roman ships a year plied the open Indian Ocean, seeking their fortunes in the Indian trade. In 100AD, three continued on to Han China … and the adventure began!

Genre

Action, Adventure, Epic, Historical Fiction,,Adventure,Epic,Historical Fiction

Short Summary

300 Roman soldiers, survivors of Carrhae, awaiting execution, when rescued by mysterious Eastern soldiers who persuade the Parthians to release them, to be marched east to some unknown destination.

Setting

Rome, Egypt, the Indian Ocean, China, Central Asia, 2000 years ago.

Based on a True Story

No

Plot - Premise

Quest

Plot - Other Elements

Happy Ending, Meaningful Message, Philosophical Questions, Twist

Mature Audience Themes

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Main Character Details

Name: Aulus Aemilius Galba

Age: 50

Gender: Male

Role: Protagonist

Key Traits: Adventurous, Complex, Decisive, Educated, Honorable, Leader, Strong Moral Code,Charming,Confident,Complex,Decisive,Leader

Additional Character Details

Name: Antonius Aristides

Age: 40

Gender: Male

Role: Sidekick

Key Traits: Aggressive, Complex, Confident, Honorable, Masculine, Perseverance, Strong Moral Code, Adventurous, Decisive, Educated, Empathetic, Leader,Adventurous,Badass,Complex,Confident,Leader

Additional Character Details

Name: Marcia Lucia

Age: 22

Gender: Female

Role: emotional

Key Traits: Beautiful, Charming, Complex, Perseverance, Underdog,Underdog,Charming,Complex,Empathetic,Heartthrob

Additional Character Details

Name: Ibrahim bin Yusuf

Age: 60

Gender: Male

Role: Antagonist

Key Traits: Aggressive, Badass, Empathetic, Decisive, Unapologetic, Villainous, Criminal, Educated, Engaging, Heroic, Honorable, Leader, Strong Moral Code, Blunt, Charming, Complex, Gracious, Secretive, Skillful,Adventurous,Badass,Charming,Complex,Confident,Leader

About The Author

Lewis McIntyre graduated from the US Naval Academy, and served twenty years in the Navy as a Naval Aviator, visiting many of the locations in this story. He also did open-source intelligence work for the Army after 9/11, preparing weekly reports that included insights into the culture and history of Central Asia. He lives in La Plata, Maryland with Karen, his wife of four decades, and two cats. When not writing, Lewis enjoys running, biking, hunting and amateur radio

Target Audiences

Age: 13-17,18-34,35-54

Target Gender: Universal

Group Specific

Information not completed

Publishing Details

Status: Yes: self-published

Publisher: Lew and Karen McIntyre Authors LLC

Year Published: 2017

Hard Copy Available

Yes

ISBN

978-0692820803

Genre

POLITICS, DRAMA, ROMANCE

Brief

Two high-ranking Romans are chosen for a trip to an Asian village in search of political alliances. A sequence of events tests their decision-making power and ends with both being publicly recognized by Emperor Trajan.

Overall Rating

GOOD

Point of View

THIRD PERSON

Narrative Elements

Authors Writing Style: GOOD

Characterization: GOOD

Commerciality: GOOD

Franchise Potential: GOOD

Pace: GOOD

Premise: GOOD

Structure: GOOD

Theme: GOOD

Accuracy of Book Profile

It is accurate, but Ibrahim is not precisely an antagonist. He is initially portrayed as a bad man, but we discover he is not the enemy.

Draw of Story

The book already begins in a tense moment, with soldiers walking to their death. The first chapter narrates a kind of backstory that quickly tells the relationship between Romans and Asians.

Possible Drawbacks

It is quite long, but the sequence of events is able to keep the reader attached to the narrative.

Use of Special Effects

THE STORY RELIES HEAVILY ON SPECIAL EFFECTS

Primary Hook of Story

The story takes place at a very attractive time in history: ancient Rome and its alliances and territorial conquests. Despite being a fictional story, the whole old environment presents exciting elements to attract the audience. This relation between Romans and Chinese is also an interesting starting point.

Fanbase Potential

The story may draw the attention, right away, of a fanbase attracted by ancient civilizations' stories. The successful development of the narrative (a good main story, nice characters) can attract other audiences too.

Awards Potential

The story has potential for awards, mainly for the expected grandiosity of its scenes. However, the narrative could grow a little more climactic, displaying more internal conflicts.

Envisioned Budget

LARGE BUDGET

Similar Films/TV Series

CENTURION: THE ROMAN EMPIRE FACES AN ENEMY THAT DISTURBS THEIR EXPANSION PLANS. ROME: TWO ROMAN SOLDIERS BECOME HEROES FOR THEIR ACHIEVEMENTS.

What’s New About the Story

I believe that the Rome-China relationship is a plus for the story. If the book was only based on Roman daily life and some battles, the result would be similar to previous films. However, this connection with this Asian civilization brings a different look to a worn-out plot.

Lead Characters

Since the book is long, we can get to know the characters little by little, which is good. However, the main characters could show their personalities a little more. At times it isn't easy to know who is talking since some characters are quite similar.

Uniqueness of Story

It is not a rare gem because we have seen quite similar Roman soldiers' stories on imperial missions. However, this book brings an engaging narrative fluency that makes it easy to follow the story, even with its large number of characters.

Possible Formats

Film - Studio, TV Series - Cable, TV Series - Limited Run / Mini-Series, TV Series - Streaming

Analyst Recommendation

CONSIDER

Justification

The book is well written and has a well-developed narrative. It is easy to follow, and it is entertaining. The characters are attractive and, despite taking place in an environment entirely different from ours, we manage to understand each one's reasons and desires on this journey. Many characters look and sound too similar, but this is adjustable. Although long, the story has a good sequence of events that hold us attached to it. It would definitely not be a cheap audiovisual production due to the need to recreate the Roman and Chinese empires. However, the final result of these two aesthetically diverse civilizations could be fascinating. Despite the historical grandeur (even if fictional), the book portrays individuals, which engage us more easily. The author maintains the narrative very well, without letting the expectation and tension drop over the more than 500 pages. It would be a suitable story for a series due to the number of elements inserted into it. However, even if it is fiction, it would be essential to hire a specialist in ancient history to guide the production and ensure that the narrative, tone, characters, and scenarios were credible. In general, the book is good. However, it would still need adjustments to make its conflicts more dramatic and its characters more attractive.