Thirds

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SCI-FI EPIC ACTION ADVENTURE APOCALYPTIC FAMILY YOUNG ADULT

The Future

JONNY Newell

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An adventure of 3 cloned sisters in near future with over-population. All three Thirds are told at an early age that they will meet for the first time a week before their 18th birthday in a controlled testing center (one of the many, worldwide), to sit through exams of all genres, before being sedated without any knowledge or revealing of the final results. The tested must face off to all sorts of challenges. The downside is that there is only room for one confident winning Third to take their place in our controlled society! The two remaining failed Thirds will then be terminated humanely and immediately by the World Convention (Big Brother). Follow the life journey of Thirds -Sam, Asher and River, with the family sacrifices and journey made to ensure they survive as sisters -not Thirds, away from the World Convention's control in a tropical commune set in India. But is life as easy as it should be?

Genre

Sci-Fi, Epic, Action, Adventure, Apocalyptic, Family, Young Adult,

Short Summary

3 Thirds are born at same time, raised separately, tested at 18. Only 1 survivor. Sisterhood found as Sam & Asher refuse to accept their destined fate. Life Journey to freedom. Family Sacrifice, New Sisterhood in an adventure and life journey to find and fight for freedom.


The 3 Thirds sisters are reunited with a new life in a secluded commune. A battle has been won between the commune and the pirates (people smugglers). Sam the leader accepts she must go back now to The City because of love. Final scene is her on sea, hearing her father's ghost.

Setting

The City of a near futuristic city and also in a secret Tropical Rain-forest set in India

Based on a True Story

No

Plot - Premise

Internal Journey/Rebirth

Plot - Other Elements

Coming of Age, Happy Ending, Meaningful Message

Mature Audience Themes

Language/Profanity, Nudity, Sexual Abuse

Main Character Details

Name: Sam Rivers is a Third and we follow her journey first. In a controlled world raised by adoptee parents. Sam is more creative and carefree and not like most other Thirds who are regimented and emotionless. Sam loves tigers in a world where animals are now extinct. We follow her life from innocent girl to strong commune leader and big sister.

Age: 20

Gender: Female

Role: Mentor

Key Traits: Faithful, Insecure, Aggressive, Leader, Perseverance, Heroic, Beautiful, Confident, Decisive, Naive, Romantic, Secretive, Selfless, Adventurous, Badass, Outspoken, Underdog, Aspiring

Additional Character Details

Name: Asher - Sam's identical Thirds she meets by chance as a young girl. Asher is more regimental than Sam. As she matures we find her personality develop and soften.

Age: 20

Gender: Female

Role: Logical

Key Traits: Romantic, Selfless, Badass, Faithful, Heroic, Naive, Outspoken, Perseverance, Strong Moral Code, Crazy, Funny, Insecure, Adventurous, Decisive, Aspiring, Beautiful, Honorable

Additional Character Details

Name: Pig-beast is my villain of the story. A pirate people smuggler captain that they endure on his ship to their so-called freedom. He makes them spend their trip in a shipping container with others , he is disgusting and why they nick-name him that. a war between him and Sam happens later in story. He cannot be trusted!

Age: 40

Gender: Male

Role: Antagonist

Key Traits: Aggressive, Manipulative, Power-hungry, Sarcastic, Villainous, Unapologetic, Badass, Blunt, Criminal, Greedy, Leader

Additional Character Details

Name: River - Sam and Asher 3rd Third sister that we at first believe is dead but her family had her in hiding in a bunker searching for a way out. River is reunited with her sisters and completes the jigsaw.

Age: 20

Gender: Female

Role: Emotional

Key Traits: Extraordinary Powers and Abilities, Funny, Gracious, Heroic, Naive, Perseverance, Adventurous, Beautiful, Badass, Charming

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About The Author

Target Audiences

Age: 18-34

Target Gender: Universal

Group Specific

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Publishing Details

Status: Yes: self-published

Year Published: 2018

Hard Copy Available

No

ISBN

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Supplemental Materials

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