Hello Virginia

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COMEDY ROMANCE

2000s

Jack Batcher

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Hello Virginia, is a story about Rob and Lauren. On their one-year anniversary everything changes, when Lauren receives a promotion at her job to bank manager. The problem is, that the new position is in another state, and she will have to move immediately. Lauren doesn’t want to lose the relationship with Rob, but she is going to take the new opportunity. She asks Rob to move down to Virginia with her. Rob wants Lauren to take the new position, and believes his career as a Wealth Management Coach and self-help book author, will be able to transfer down south with them. Rob decides to move with Lauren, because sometimes life gives you opportunities, in which you have to act quickly on them, or lose them. They are excited that they have decided to live together, and move forward in life together. So, on Labor Day weekend they pack up and move from Long Island to Virginia Beach. In their first week there they experience Pine Beetles, F-16’s, unexpected guest, a bar fight, Shag Dancing, Pastafarianism, bad sunburn, and much, much more. In this romantic comedy you will see how Rob and Lauren handle the ups and downs of living together, and learning to let life flow.

Genre

Comedy, Romance,

Short Summary

In Rob & Lauren’s first week living in Virginia Beach. They experience Pine Beetles, deafening jet noise, unexpected guest, a bar fight, Shag Dancing, Pastafarianism, & much more. In this romantic comedy you will see how they handle the ups & downs of living together, and learn how to let life flow.


The story ends with Rob purposing to Lauren at a Kenny Neal concert on the beach. Her reaction interrupts the show. Ends with the performer congratulating them.

Setting

Bay Shore, New York. Virginia Beach, Virginia

Based on a True Story

No

Plot - Premise

Internal Journey/Rebirth

Plot - Other Elements

Happy Ending, Meaningful Message

Mature Audience Themes

Nudity, Language/Profanity

Main Character Details

Name: Robert Jackson

Age: 32

Gender: Male

Role: Protagonist

Key Traits: Engaging, Educated, Complex, Faithful, Funny, Gracious, Selfless, Skillful

Additional Character Details

Name: Lauren Langorelli

Age: 29

Gender: Female

Role: Protagonist

Key Traits: Clumsy, Educated, Empathetic, Modest, Romantic, Beautiful, Complex, Faithful, Funny, Gracious, Naive

Additional Character Details

Name: Suella "Evil Sue" Langorelli

Age: 25

Gender: Female

Role: Tempter

Key Traits: Complex, Crazy, Seductive, Adventurous, Manipulative, Sexy, Funny, Heartthrob, Naive, Secretive, Beautiful, Blunt, Flexible, Aggressive, Uneducated

Additional Character Details

Name: Jim "Big Jim" Langorelli

Age: 57

Gender: Male

Role: Antagonist

Key Traits: Sarcastic, Unapologetic, Blunt, Funny, Manipulative, Obedient, Outspoken

Development Pitch

About The Author

Target Audiences

Age: 18-34

Target Gender: Universal

Group Specific

Information not completed

Publishing Details

Status: Yes: self-published

Year Published: 2016

Hard Copy Available

No

ISBN

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