Luminuz - O Reino da Aliança

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YOUNG ADULT FANTASY ADVENTURE

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GIOVANNA VIEIRA FERNANDES

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Logline

Uma adolescente sem memória. Uma vida sem sentido. Um objetivo: recuperar sua identidade. Para isso, uma aventura será vivida em um lugar que, para ela, não é real: Luminuz - O Reino da Aliança.

Genre

Young Adult,Fantasy,Adventure

Short Summary

A história começa com a protagonista sem memória. Ela é abordada por três meninas que insistem em levá-la de volta para sua casa, o Reino de Luminuz. Porém, ela não se recorda de nada. Mas, se vê obrigada a retornar a Luminuz ao lado das meninas quando um cavaleiro negro a aborda e a persegue.


A protagonista recupera sua memória e descobre que ela era bem diferente do que imagina ser. A par disso, o cavaleiro negro, o vilão da historia, que age realmente como antagonista da protagonista, aprende a importância do arrependimento e sua história de vida dá um reviravolta.

Setting

Em outro Sistema Solar

Based on a True Story

No

Plot - Premise

Other

Plot - Other Elements

Happy Ending

Mature Audience Themes

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Main Character Details

Name: Luminuz

Age: Sim. 4 livros

Gender: Other

Role: Antagonist

Key Traits: Adventurous

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Development Pitch

Uma história que alcança desde adolescentes a adultos. É uma fantasia que se inicia com o Reino de Luminuz, mas que tem uma mitologia por trás, sem que ninguém perceba isso, todos se prenderão à história que se mostra logo de início. O telespectador só começará a perceber que há algo por trás com o desenrolar da saga, o que certamente fisgará sua atenção, já que são várias as tramas e personagens envolvidos na história. Além disso, o telespectador pensará que o vilão da história é um personagem, entretanto, o verdadeiro vilão está por trás de tudo, sem aparecer, e fazendo todos brigarem e acreditarem em outros vilões. Tudo isso, o ajudará conquistar sozinho o Planeta Zebec, que faz parte do Sistema Caracol de Luz, e que sofreu uma queda inicial e, assim, pretende a sua redenção. Durante essa aventura, as pessoas compreenderão a importância do arrependimento e da obediência. Tudo isso de forma suave, sem que os personagens precisem falar sobre isso. A própria história se encarrega disso, porque fará todos pensarem sobre valores que andam esquecidos pela humanidade. Tudo isso de forma fantasiosa, leve e cheia de aventuras, de fato, novas.

About The Author

GIOVANNA VIEIRA FERNANDES é bacharel em Direito e servidora pública do Tribunal de Justiça do Distrito Federal. Professora e autora do Livro o "Reverso da Moeda".

Target Audiences

Age: 13-17,18-34,35-54,55+

Target Gender: Other

Group Specific

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Publishing Details

Status: Yes: self-published

Publisher: Giovanna Vieira Fernandes

Year Published: 2020

Hard Copy Available

No

ISBN

Luminuz - O Reino da Aliança

Genre

FANTASY, ACTION

Brief

Sabina is an apparently ordinary girl, but she doesn't know that she is part of a fantastic universe in which characters from short stories come to life and experience their own adventures. She will discover everything about her backstory and save this fantastic place from the controls of the villain.

Overall Rating

GOOD

Point of View

THIRD PERSON

Narrative Elements

Authors Writing Style: GOOD

Characterization: FAIR

Commerciality: FAIR

Franchise Potential: GOOD

Pace: FAIR

Premise: FAIR

Structure: FAIR

Theme: FAIR

Accuracy of Book Profile

It is not accurate. The information was entered in Portuguese, and the author left relevant fields blank, such as characters. The information added in "main character" is also incorrect. To achieve more visibility, it would be interesting to type the information in English and add the characters' profiles.

Draw of Story

The author writes engagingly. The narrative flows well, drawing our attention to little Sabina's adventure.

Possible Drawbacks

Some actions are a little tiring, and the amount of characters leaves the story a little confusing, but in general, it is entertaining, and the resolutions to the conflicts- a little childish- match with the age range of the target audience.

Use of Special Effects

THE STORY RELIES HEAVILY ON SPECIAL EFFECTS

Primary Hook of Story

An ordinary girl living a fantastic adventure is not an original story, but it is quite interesting. The expectation of entering this magical world is the hook.

Fanbase Potential

The story is quite interesting in its elements, and if properly developed, Sabina's character could attract a broader fanbase.

Awards Potential

This narrative would have the potential for more technical awards, linked to visual effects, editing... As for the plot itself, it would need a more striking dramatic appeal.

Envisioned Budget

LARGE BUDGET

Similar Films/TV Series

THE CHRONICLES OF NARNIA: SOME KIDS GO THROUGH A PORTAL AND END UP IN A MAGICAL WORLD WHERE THEY NEED TO DEFEAT THE VILLAIN. JUPITER ASCENDING: AN ORDINARY GIRL WHO CLEANS BATHROOMS ON EARTH IS THE HEIR TO THE POST OF THE UNIVERSE'S QUEEN.

What’s New About the Story

This fantastic world's citizens create tales with characters that come to life and experiences their own narratives inside the books.

Lead Characters

The fantastic characters give an exotic air to the plot, but I think Sabina could be more likable, more complex, more remarkable as a protagonist.

Uniqueness of Story

Not a rare gem, but it could become part of a charming series if the rules and conflicts of this fantastic universe could be adequately developed and defined.

Possible Formats

Film - Streaming, TV Series - Streaming, TV Series - Limited Run / Mini-Series, Film - Studio

Analyst Recommendation

WORK IN PROGRESS

Justification

While the story has many positive points, it has room for improvement (see possible paths below). If you can't change the story at this point, my suggestion is using your notes as a guide to highlight the best aspects of it when taking the next steps, either putting a pitch page together, a treatment, or a presentation.

Tips for Improvement

The plot in which people create stories and characters live in books is quite interesting, but here, close to the central plot, it sounds like an add-on, not very necessary. It gives us the feeling that we are reading two different books. One in which a girl from a fantastic world is taken from that world to Earth, as a result of the antagonist's villainy, and a second book in which the protagonist wrote a story, and so conflicts started to happen. Both are interesting and appealing, but together they seem disconnected. If one of them gained more visibility and more strength, the story might sound more cohesive. The protagonist is an ordinary girl who gets to know her role in the fantastic world little by little. It is as if the protagonist herself opens a memoir book and discovers who she is. This is quite interesting, but I think she could have more defined goals. As she remembers who she is little by little, the goals she used to have and cannot remember anymore sound outdated since we are following the human Sabina now. This Sabina could go on creating her own wishes through her discoveries about her identity. I also think that a heavier dramatic load would be fundamental in this book. Sabina is suddenly thrown into another world and discovers a parallel life that she did not even know existed. This should have a deeper impact on her. The fact that the villain redeems himself, in the end, is great because it deconstructs this image of the immutable villain who ends the story imprisoned or killed. Here he realizes where he is wrong and has the chance to change. However, the final sequences lack strength. With better-determined goals, the arrival at the objective would sound more impactful. It is a well-written story with good ideas, but it would need extra treatment in the plot, subplots, dialogues, and structure, mainly.