The Civil War at Home

Dustin McKissen

Book Cover

GENRE

POLITICAL CRIME FAMILY DRAMA

    Core Theme

    JUDGMENT LEADS TO A LACK OF EMPATHY.

    TIME PERIOD

    Contemporary

    COMPARABLE TITLES

    A SIMPLE MAN, THE AFFAIR, HATFIELD AND THE MCCOYS.

    CHARACTER LIST

    • KEVIN: 35. LEAD. LIBERAL. STRONG MORAL CODE, BLUNT, EDUCATED.
    • MARINA: 35. LEAD. KEVIN’S WIFE. CONFIDENT, BADASS.
    • RICK: 50. LEAD. WORKING CLASS MAN. RELIGIOUS, OUTSPOKEN, PATRIOTIC.
    • KATE: 50. LEAD. RICK’S WIFE. ENGAGING, RELIGIOUS, SELFLESS"

    Logline

    In the suburbs of middle America, two men engage in a growing political and social media fight. Their passionate disagreement, though superficially focused on politics, is fed by assumptions about class, economics, immigration, race, and the legacy of a horrific sexual crime. Ultimately the feud leads to violence and tragedy for both families.

    Target Audiences

    Age: 35-54

    Target Gender: Female leaning

    Setting

    Midwestern America

    Based on a True Story

    No

    Publishing Details

    Status: Yes: with a Publisher

    Publisher: Working Class Books (A publisher I own)

    Year Published: 2018

    Starting Description

    The husbands of one liberal family and one conservative family engage in a growing feud based on politics. The assumptions they make about class, race, and politics play out on social media, ultimately leading to tragedy.

    Ending Description

    The husbands end up killing each other, creating a unique bond between their wives.

    Group Specific

    Information not completed

    Hard Copy Available

    No

    ISBN

    Information not completed

    Mature Audience Themes

    Incest, Language/Profanity, Sexual Abuse

    Plot - Other Elements

    Meaningful Message

    Plot - Premise

    Tragedy

    Main Character Details

    Name: The story is told in the voice of four main characters: Kevin (a liberal marketing consultant), his wife Marina (a hispanic former single mom), Rick (a conservative working class male), and his wife Kate (a teacher). But Kevin is the primary character.

    Age: 35

    Gender: Male

    Role: Antagonist

    Key Traits: Aggressive, Complex, Insecure, Narcissistic, Perseverance, Strong Moral Code, Blunt, Educated, Masculine, Power-hungry

    Additional Character Details

    Name: Marina

    Age: 35

    Gender: Female

    Role: Protagonist

    Key Traits: Confident, Seductive, Badass, Beautiful, Charming, Complex

    Additional Character Details

    Name: Rick

    Age: 50

    Gender: Male

    Role: Protagonist

    Key Traits: Religious, Complex, Educated, Empathetic, Outspoken, Patriotic

    Additional Character Details

    Name: Kate

    Age: 50

    Gender: Female

    Role: Protagonist

    Key Traits: Honorable, Modest, Patriotic, Charming, Educated, Empathetic, Engaging, Religious, Selfless

    Brief

    In the suburbs of middle America, two couples engage in a growing political and social media fight.
    Their passionate disagreement, though superficially focused on politics, is fed by assumptions about
    class, economics, immigration, and race.

    What We Liked

    - Poignant, topical story;
    - Small cast and contained production - even with big message;
    - Character driven arcs that allow for award potential;
    - Each chapter has a different point of view, including those of strong female characters;
    - Timely plot about polarization and divisiveness;
    - Suspense and engaging pace until the tragic end. The Civil War At Home is a political
    statement that starts with snarky comments and ends with murder.

    Synopsis

    Anytown, USA. Kevin, mid 30s, is a successful marketing consultant who appears to have it all. A
    gorgeous Hispanic wife named Marina, good kids, a new car every year. He is a liberal, incredibly
    educated man. Rick, late 40s, is a conservative working-class man who appears to be quite simple,
    both in mind and body. A stable wife named Kate, who has been supportive through even the
    toughest of times. Rick is a toilet paper salesman and loves Sean Hannity almost as much as Jesus.
    Kevin had an incredibly difficult upbringing. His mom suffered from depression, and his father was in
    recovery after battling an 8-year meth addiction. He harbors the opposite childhood from one what
    would expect given his outward appearance. Rick’s family is a staple in town. They have been there
    for generations, and they even have streets named after their family. They might not have money, but
    they were in fact born into a sense of belonging.
    The Trump audio scandal hits the presidential election. Rick and Kevin double down on where they
    stand politically, and they both become incredibly outward with their support or hate for the politician.
    The confusion also involves Kate and Marina.
    TRUMP IS ELECTED. Kevin writes a blog post that goes viral on the topic of teaching his children to
    love and not hate. It goes viral, setting into motion a twisted set of back and forth between the men.
    That is when Marina says “enough is enough” and invites the couple over for dinner. At dinner, Kate
    becomes jealous of Marina when she catches her husband staring at the beautiful woman. Everyone
    is now unraveling.
    One final facebook post sets the finale into motion. From calling Rick a Nazi to quips about Kevin’s
    new career as a writer, it seems like the twister has spun out of control. Rick responds by putting a
    sign saying “If you want to stay out of jail, do not come into the country”, which Marina sees as a
    direct jab at her. She texts Rick asking if “we could talk” and “can we meet tomorrow morning” at the
    local coffee shop. Kate reads the text and assumes it was about a secret affair the two are entangled
    in. She grabs a butcher knife, immediately walks across the street, and kills Marina’s dog - then she
    notices the sign her husband had put up earlier that day. But it’s too late. Rick is off his meds and
    takes a gun that was meant for him and aims at Kevin, Kevin aims at Rick, and the two are dead
    before the women knew what to do.

    About The Author

    Dustin McKissen is a a two-time ""Top Voice"" on LinkedIn, where his columns have been read by more than 15 million people. He is also a columnist or contributor at Inc, CNBC, Venturebeat, CNN, and Entrepreneur Quarterly.