John's Pond
DRAMA HISTORICAL FICTION ROMANCE ACTION ADVENTURE
1960s & '70s
Donna Lynch
TaleFlick Top Pick!
Logline
John's Pond is a story of a young Wampanoag man and white girl from opposite sides of town who seek acceptance in their hostile village.
Genre
Drama, Historical Fiction, Romance, Action, Adventure,
Short Summary
Tobin, a Wampanoag man is shot by a local cop in his town. Six months earlier, in Boston Federal Court Tobin is captivated by a beautiful white girl seated across the room. Their relationship develops amid controversy and prejudice on both sides.
Setting
Mashpee, Massachusetts (Cape Cod)
Based on a True Story
No
Plot - Premise
,Loving amid hatred & Prejudice
Plot - Other Elements
Meaningful Message, Twist, Happy Ending
Mature Audience Themes
Extreme Violence
Main Character Details
Name: Tobin Horvarth
Age: 20
Gender: Male
Role: Protagonist
Key Traits: Educated, Aggressive, Aspiring, Honorable, Leader, Confident, Adventurous, Heroic, Engaging, Faithful, Obedient
Additional Character Details
Name: Laurie Matthews
Age: 18
Gender: Female
Role: Protagonist
Key Traits: Aspiring, Adventurous, Confident, Faithful, Empathetic, Educated
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Genre
DRAMA, ROMANCE
Brief
Tobin is a young Native American boy who has had a few run ins with the law. His tribe is continually harassed by police and are generally unaccepted by the locals. He meets Laurie and falls in love with her. There town is unwelcoming to the native tribe, but Laurie and Tobin's love prevails.
Overall Rating
GOOD
Narrative Elements
Authors Writing Style: EXCELLENT
Characterization: GOOD
Commerciality: EXCELLENT
Franchise Potential: GOOD
Pace: EXCELLENT
Premise: EXCELLENT
Structure: EXCELLENT
Theme: EXCELLENT
Accuracy of Book Profile
Yes, the book profile accurately reflects the book.
Draw of Story
The book begins with a major event in the story; Tobin's encounter with the police, ending with him being shot. There is also a trial occurring over the land that rightfully belongs to the Wampanoag tribe. There are few stories that show the point of view of a modern Native American tribe fighting against progress by white Americans. It was interesting and unique.
Possible Drawbacks
The book emphasizes the trial over the Wampanoag people needing to prove they are a tribe to then prove the land belongs to them. That storyline was more interesting than Tobin and Laurie falling in love. It turned into a typical romance with a hint of cultural strife. If the love story became secondary to the trial and instead, examined the tribe and its' relationship to the other townsfolks, it would be a more interesting film.
Use of Special Effects
THE STORY DOES NOT RELY ON SPECIAL EFFECTS
Primary Hook of Story
The hook is that a young Wampanoag boy falls for a local girl. I would watch this film for the Native American element. There are few films that place Native Americans as the main characters. I also believe the narrative surrounding native people is important and should be brought to light, correctly.
Fanbase Potential
This could have a large fanbase as a period romance drama. It also tackles social issues but has a happy ending.
Awards Potential
This does have awards potential if there were more focus on the tribe and the trial. Tobin gets arrested for standing up for his rights and people, ending up in jail. There are many dramatic events that could be given more gravity that would give this awards potential. The romance would need to accompany the other events instead of taking precedence.
Envisioned Budget
MEDIUM BUDGET
Similar Films/TV Series
THE NOTEBOOK, GUESS WHO'S COMING TO DINNER, BELLE
What’s New About the Story
The story is original because it sheds light on the problems facing native communities. There lands are being taken for the sake of progress. It could be more unique if it focused on the trial that would help determine if the tribe kept their lands.
Lead Characters
The lead characters stands out because he isn't afraid to speak up for his people. He knows the injustices occurring, but he doesn't accept it quietly. He is shot for this very reason.
Uniqueness of Story
This is not a rare gem but does have elements that make it unique and welcoming, especially at this time. The call for representation is growing and that conversation does not always include the native people of the world. It is important that there story is also heard.
Possible Formats
Film - Indie, Film - Streaming, Film - Studio, TV Series - Cable, TV Series - Network, TV Series - Streaming
Analyst Recommendation
RECOMMEND
Justification
This is a recommend because stories involving native people and their struggles need to be told. The structure of the story is familiar to audiences but this would expose the problems native cultures face. There is also a sweet romance that reinforces that humans are all the same, and that love is love.