SAME TIME, YESTERYEAR - The Ballad of Sylvia & Mickey
ACTION ADVENTURE FANTASY FAMILY FOLKTALE ROMANCE
1940s & '50s
C. D. Lawson
TaleFlick Pick!
Submision Type
book
Logline
A family friendly, fantasy romance about a dying woman who gets a second chance to travel back in time to Halloween 1959 and save the life of her true love, the soul of his killer and their hometown from eternal extinction. This timeless tale is ‘Peggy Sue Got Married’ meets ‘The Wonder Years’.
Genre
Action,Adventure,Fantasy,Family,Folktale,Romance
Short Summary
Sylvia is a world renowned actress and dying. On the night of her final stage performance her childhood true love ,Mickey, appears and leads her back in time where she will get the chance to right the wrongs of the past by navigating her thirteen year old body with her sixty three year old mind.
Setting
Hickory Springs, the Jewel of Americana, at the crossroads of Route 66 and the Majestic Iron Railroad
Based on a True Story
No
Plot - Premise
Overcoming Monster/Villain,Internal Journey/Rebirth
Plot - Other Elements
Coming of Age,Happy Ending,Meaningful Message,Philosophical Questions
Mature Audience Themes
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Main Character Details
Name: Sylvia Woods
Age: 13 year old body with a 63 year old mind
Gender: Female
Role: Protagonist
Key Traits: Adventurous,Charming,Clumsy,Complex,Confident,Decisive,Desperate,Faithful,Heroic,Flexible,Honorable,Patriotic,Blunt,Selfless,Outspoken,Skillful,Funny,Romantic,Secretive,Strong Moral Code
Additional Character Details
Name: Mickey Calhoun
Age: 13 years old
Gender: Male
Role: Sidekick
Key Traits: Adventurous,Aspiring,Aggressive,Charming,Clumsy,Confident,Decisive,Engaging,Faithful,Flexible,Gracious,Heroic,Honorable,Leader,Unapologetic,Strong Moral Code,Romantic,Funny,Skillful,Outspoken,Selfless,Patriotic,Masculine,Underdog
Additional Character Details
Name: Cancer
Age: 20
Gender: Male
Role: antagonist
Key Traits: Adventurous,Badass,Complex,Underdog,Skillful,Outspoken,Aggressive,Confident,Crazy,Criminal,Insecure,Lone Wolf,Manipulative,Unapologetic,Sarcastic,Blunt,Villainous
Additional Character Details
Name: Iron Rose
Age: 18 years old
Gender: Female
Role: mentor
Key Traits: Adventurous,Aspiring,Badass,Charming,Clumsy,Complex,Confident,Decisive,Engaging,Faithful,Gracious,Heroic,Educated,Honorable,Leader,Unapologetic,Romantic,Funny,Skillful,Outspoken,Selfless,Underdog
Genre
DRAMA, ROMANCE
Brief
Sylvia has cancer and is looking back at her life. She thinks back about her first love , Mickey, who died in a fire while being trapped in the trunk of a car. She is offered the chance to go back into her 13 year old body to save Mickey. While she changes the events to leading up to Mickey in the trunk, he ends up there anyways and Sylvia fights to save him.
Overall Rating
GOOD
Narrative Elements
Authors Writing Style: GOOD
Characterization: GOOD
Commerciality: GOOD
Franchise Potential: GOOD
Pace: GOOD
Premise: GOOD
Structure: GOOD
Theme: GOOD
Accuracy of Book Profile
The book profile does not accurately reflect the book. Sylvia goes back to save her first love but not the soul of his killer or their hometown from eternal extinction. The bad guy needed to be defeated and there was no threat to the town.
Draw of Story
The story has the voice of a bold woman at the end of her life. She has a flare for the dramatic and a love for old movies and pop culture. She is funny and lively even as she is facing the end.
Possible Drawbacks
The characters seem too young for the story. Sylvia goes back to her 13 year old body to save 13 year old Mickey. There are some playful and tender moments with them that are more suited for people in their late teens or early 20's. The story would feel more appropriate with characters at least 16 years old.
Use of Special Effects
THE STORY DOES NOT RELY ON SPECIAL EFFECTS
Primary Hook of Story
The hook is that Sylvia is given the chance to change her future by saving a friend from the past. She is a 63 year old woman sent back to her 13 year old self to save her first love from a horrible death. This movie would be an interesting watch, seeing Sylvia get that second chance and wondering if she will accomplish her goal.
Fanbase Potential
This could have a large fanbase. It is a story that would appeal to a wide audience. It could be categorized as a family film. There are a lot of sentimental moments and it ends with the good guys winning. Sylvia saves Mickey and they live life together.
Awards Potential
This does not have awards potential. This is not a gripping story with compelling characters. It is entertaining but doesn't break any molds.
Envisioned Budget
MEDIUM BUDGET
Similar Films/TV Series
ABOUT TIME, BACK TO THE FUTURE, EDGE OF TOMORROW, X-MEN: DAYS OF FUTURE'S PAST
What’s New About the Story
Sylvia travels back into her younger self with all the knowledge of her 63 year old self. That perspective hasn't been done very much, especially with that age gap and maturity level. It is not done in a comedic way but a thoughtful, reflective way.
Lead Characters
The lead character is a lively lady with a sassy personality. There aren't many characters like that as leads and in stories such as this.
Uniqueness of Story
This is an average film that is still entertaining considering it is not very original. It could be more unique if how she was able to go back in time were explored more. This is not science fiction, but leads more towards fantasy with explaining the reason she gets the second chance.
Possible Formats
Film - Studio, Film - Streaming, Film - Indie, TV Series - Streaming
Analyst Recommendation
CONSIDER
Justification
This is a consider because it is a well thought out, well written story. The characters are interesting if a little 2 dimensional. Time traveling back into one's younger self hasn't been done much before. There is a strong female lead who saves the guy instead of the damsel in distress scenario. It also deals with themes of reaching one's dreams, life's realities and living the life you want.