SAME TIME, YESTERYEAR - The Ballad of Sylvia & Mickey

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ACTION ADVENTURE FANTASY FAMILY FOLKTALE ROMANCE

1940s & '50s

C. D. Lawson

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Logline

A family friendly, fantasy romance about a dying woman who gets a second chance to travel back in time to Halloween 1959 and save the life of her true love, the soul of his killer and their hometown from eternal extinction. This timeless tale is ‘Peggy Sue Got Married’ meets ‘The Wonder Years’.

Genre

Action,Adventure,Fantasy,Family,Folktale,Romance

Short Summary

Sylvia is a world renowned actress and dying. On the night of her final stage performance her childhood true love ,Mickey, appears and leads her back in time where she will get the chance to right the wrongs of the past by navigating her thirteen year old body with her sixty three year old mind.

Setting

Hickory Springs, the Jewel of Americana, at the crossroads of Route 66 and the Majestic Iron Railroad

Based on a True Story

No

Plot - Premise

Overcoming Monster/Villain,Internal Journey/Rebirth

Plot - Other Elements

Coming of Age,Happy Ending,Meaningful Message,Philosophical Questions

Mature Audience Themes

Information not completed

Main Character Details

Name: Sylvia Woods

Age: 13 year old body with a 63 year old mind

Gender: Female

Role: Protagonist

Key Traits: Adventurous,Charming,Clumsy,Complex,Confident,Decisive,Desperate,Faithful,Heroic,Flexible,Honorable,Patriotic,Blunt,Selfless,Outspoken,Skillful,Funny,Romantic,Secretive,Strong Moral Code

Additional Character Details

Name: Mickey Calhoun

Age: 13 years old

Gender: Male

Role: Sidekick

Key Traits: Adventurous,Aspiring,Aggressive,Charming,Clumsy,Confident,Decisive,Engaging,Faithful,Flexible,Gracious,Heroic,Honorable,Leader,Unapologetic,Strong Moral Code,Romantic,Funny,Skillful,Outspoken,Selfless,Patriotic,Masculine,Underdog

Additional Character Details

Name: Cancer

Age: 20

Gender: Male

Role: antagonist

Key Traits: Adventurous,Badass,Complex,Underdog,Skillful,Outspoken,Aggressive,Confident,Crazy,Criminal,Insecure,Lone Wolf,Manipulative,Unapologetic,Sarcastic,Blunt,Villainous

Additional Character Details

Name: Iron Rose

Age: 18 years old

Gender: Female

Role: mentor

Key Traits: Adventurous,Aspiring,Badass,Charming,Clumsy,Complex,Confident,Decisive,Engaging,Faithful,Gracious,Heroic,Educated,Honorable,Leader,Unapologetic,Romantic,Funny,Skillful,Outspoken,Selfless,Underdog

About The Author

C. D. was conceived and born in the backseat of a ‘55 Chevy while the radio poured the sounds of the Kings and Queens of rock and roll. At three he was greasing his hair. By five he was wearing shades and at seven he was smoking unfiltered cigarettes. That’s what he tells people. But don’t let the shaved head and handle bar mustache fool you because beneath the buckled boots, black jeans and muscle shirts lurks a dreamer who desires nothing more than to deliver a one-two punch of heart and soul into every tale he tells. While C.D. didn’t have much patience for a formal higher education, it was the romance in the school of life that appealed to his nomadic nature. Growing up cruising the valley streets of California to exploring the small towns in the foothills of the Sierra Nevada gave birth to the characters and places in his work. It was the idea that your perfect world could lie beyond the mist of the ocean, the bend in the river or through the tunnel down the railroad tracks that captivated C. D.’s imagination. You will find the influences of Rod Serling, Ray Bradbury and Stephen King wrapped in the nostalgia of television shows like The Twilight Zone, The Wonder Years and Mad Men. You will see nods to films such as American Graffiti, Somewhere In Time and La La Land. Now in the autumn of his life, C. D. has taken his years as an accomplished actor, screenwriter and train enthusiast and applied them to the Hickory Springs and Railways West Novels. He has settled into life in the Pacific Northwest with his lovely wife and daughter where he hosts a weekly YouTube radio show featuring the news from Hickory Springs. You can still catch him waxing that old ‘55 Chevy with his two dogs down at the Bee-Hive Diner. If you see him, tell him I sent you. He’ll most likely buy you a shake and tell you a tale or two from yesteryear.

Target Audiences

Age: 35-54,55+

Target Gender: Universal

Group Specific

Information not completed

Publishing Details

Status: Yes: self-published

Publisher: Back of the Moon Publishing

Year Published: 2018

Hard Copy Available

Yes

ISBN

978-0-692-10066-0

Genre

DRAMA, ROMANCE

Brief

Sylvia has cancer and is looking back at her life. She thinks back about her first love , Mickey, who died in a fire while being trapped in the trunk of a car. She is offered the chance to go back into her 13 year old body to save Mickey. While she changes the events to leading up to Mickey in the trunk, he ends up there anyways and Sylvia fights to save him.

Overall Rating

GOOD

Point of View

FIRST PERSON

Narrative Elements

Authors Writing Style: GOOD

Characterization: GOOD

Commerciality: GOOD

Franchise Potential: GOOD

Pace: GOOD

Premise: GOOD

Structure: GOOD

Theme: GOOD

Accuracy of Book Profile

The book profile does not accurately reflect the book. Sylvia goes back to save her first love but not the soul of his killer or their hometown from eternal extinction. The bad guy needed to be defeated and there was no threat to the town.

Draw of Story

The story has the voice of a bold woman at the end of her life. She has a flare for the dramatic and a love for old movies and pop culture. She is funny and lively even as she is facing the end.

Possible Drawbacks

The characters seem too young for the story. Sylvia goes back to her 13 year old body to save 13 year old Mickey. There are some playful and tender moments with them that are more suited for people in their late teens or early 20's. The story would feel more appropriate with characters at least 16 years old.

Use of Special Effects

THE STORY DOES NOT RELY ON SPECIAL EFFECTS

Primary Hook of Story

The hook is that Sylvia is given the chance to change her future by saving a friend from the past. She is a 63 year old woman sent back to her 13 year old self to save her first love from a horrible death. This movie would be an interesting watch, seeing Sylvia get that second chance and wondering if she will accomplish her goal.

Fanbase Potential

This could have a large fanbase. It is a story that would appeal to a wide audience. It could be categorized as a family film. There are a lot of sentimental moments and it ends with the good guys winning. Sylvia saves Mickey and they live life together.

Awards Potential

This does not have awards potential. This is not a gripping story with compelling characters. It is entertaining but doesn't break any molds.

Envisioned Budget

MEDIUM BUDGET

Similar Films/TV Series

ABOUT TIME, BACK TO THE FUTURE, EDGE OF TOMORROW, X-MEN: DAYS OF FUTURE'S PAST

What’s New About the Story

Sylvia travels back into her younger self with all the knowledge of her 63 year old self. That perspective hasn't been done very much, especially with that age gap and maturity level. It is not done in a comedic way but a thoughtful, reflective way.

Lead Characters

The lead character is a lively lady with a sassy personality. There aren't many characters like that as leads and in stories such as this.

Uniqueness of Story

This is an average film that is still entertaining considering it is not very original. It could be more unique if how she was able to go back in time were explored more. This is not science fiction, but leads more towards fantasy with explaining the reason she gets the second chance.

Possible Formats

Film - Studio, Film - Streaming, Film - Indie, TV Series - Streaming

Analyst Recommendation

CONSIDER

Justification

This is a consider because it is a well thought out, well written story. The characters are interesting if a little 2 dimensional. Time traveling back into one's younger self hasn't been done much before. There is a strong female lead who saves the guy instead of the damsel in distress scenario. It also deals with themes of reaching one's dreams, life's realities and living the life you want.