Rosalind - Book 1 of the Four Sisters Series. A Regency Romance.
GENRE
HISTORICAL FICTION ROMANCE DRAMA
Core Theme
LOVE
TIME PERIOD
19th Century
COMPARABLE TITLES
PRIDE AND PREJUDICE, BELGRAVIA, PERSUASION, EMMA
CHARACTER LIST
• ROSALIND: 20’S. STRONG, CARING, GRACIOUS
• PETER: 20S, NOBLE, RESPONSIBLE, THOUGHTFUL, ROSALIND’S HUSBAND
• ANNIE: 20S, SWEET, INNOCENT, DOWNS SYNDROME, PETER’S SISTER
• ANNABELLE: 20S, HAPPY, CURIOUS, ROSALIND’S SISTER
• LADY JOAN: 20S, BITTER, MEAN-SPIRITED, A FAMILY ACQUAINTANCE
• MRS. ADAMS: 50S, SAGE, WELCOMING, ANNIE’S GODMOTHER/ROSALIND’S FRIEND AND CONFIDANT
Logline
Four daughters of a 'cit', being married off to titles of the aristocracy by a father determined to buy his daughters respectability. An arranged marriage, a Down's Syndrome woman, a compromising situation, a claim to the title and a developing love story, all keep the gripping story fast-paced.
Target Audiences
Age: 55+,35-54,18-34
Target Gender: Female Leaning
Setting
North West of England
Based on a True Story
No
Publishing Details
Status: Yes: self-published
Publisher: Self-published
Year Published: 2015
Starting Description
An arranged marriage of the daughter of a 'cit' - a man in trade - to a Duke who needs a huge amount of money to save his home, his sister's future and secure the title.
Ending Description
Peter wishes his family line will die out, but in love with his wife, she becomes pregnant, her sister is compromised by an Earl and there is a claim on Peter's title from a woman claiming her son is his dead brother's heir. There is resolution in the story, but it leads threads open for book 2.
Group Specific
Information not completed
Hard Copy Available
No
ISBN
9781512313628
Mature Audience Themes
Information not completed
Plot - Other Elements
Happy Ending,Twist
Plot - Premise
Rebellion Against 'The One'
Main Character Details
Name: Rosalind Johnson
Age: 25
Gender: Female
Role: Protagonist
Key Traits: Charming,Confident,Empathetic,Engaging,Faithful,Gracious,Educated,Selfless,Outspoken,Funny,Romantic
Additional Character Details
Name: Peter Gilbert, Duke of Sudworth
Age: 29
Gender: Male
Role: Protagonist
Key Traits: Complex,Heartthrob,Honorable,Insecure,Masculine,Selfless
Additional Character Details
Name: Mrs Adams
Age: 60
Gender: Female
Role: sidekick
Key Traits: Engaging,Blunt,Outspoken,Funny,Sarcastic
Additional Character Details
Name: Mrs Adams
Age: 60
Gender: Female
Role: mentor
Key Traits: Blunt,Outspoken,Funny,Sarcastic
Genre
ROMANCE, DRAMA
Brief
An affluent father, wishing to gain a title for his eldest daughter, marries her off to a poor aristocrat in need of her large dowry . What starts out as an arranged marriage turns into a love story as the newlyweds navigate the tricky waters of aristocratic society and family matters.
Overall Rating
GOOD
Narrative Elements
Authors Writing Style: GOOD
Characterization: GOOD
Commerciality: FAIR
Franchise Potential: EXCELLENT
Pace: GOOD
Premise: GOOD
Structure: GOOD
Theme: GOOD
Accuracy of Book Profile
The book profile is accurate.
Draw of Story
The old fashioned European setting during the aristocratic past is interesting.
Possible Drawbacks
Nothing really made me want to put the book down. It moves at a good pace and keeps the reader's interest.
Use of Special Effects
THE STORY DOES NOT RELY ON SPECIAL EFFECTS
Primary Hook of Story
The intimate peak into the ins and outs old European society is the hook.
Fanbase Potential
Costumed dramas may be somewhat of an acquired taste. The audience would probably be a limited older and more sophisticated crowd.
Awards Potential
Though there is an opportunity for strong acting roles, this is probably not large scale enough to be an awards contender.
Envisioned Budget
MEDIUM BUDGET
Similar Films/TV Series
GOSFORD PARK, THE DUCHESS, DOWNTON ABBEY
What’s New About the Story
The story is pretty original but adding more insight and details into the lives of Rosalind and her sisters before she is married off to the aristocracy would be welcome.
Lead Characters
Rosalind is a noble, well-grounded and admirable character.
Uniqueness of Story
This is a good start for the first part of the story. It would be more effective to lengthen the book to include the stories of the other 3 sisters to created the a complete story arc.
Possible Formats
Film - Studio, Film - Streaming, Film - Indie, TV Series - Network, TV Series - Cable, TV Series - Limited Run / Mini-Series, TV Series - Streaming
Analyst Recommendation
CONSIDER
Justification
The story has a lot appeal and building it out to include the storylines of the remaining sisters would make for a well-rounded and integrated project.
Brief
An affluent father, wishing to gain a title for his eldest daughter, marries her off to a poor aristocrat in need of her large dowry. What starts out as an arranged marriage turns into a love story as the newlyweds navigate the tricky waters of aristocratic society and family matters.
What We Liked
- There are strong characters who are empathetic and relatable. The costumed era of this drama/romance is well researched and executed.
- Film: A feature adaptation of the story would be compelling. Adding the stories of the other three sisters would add drama and conflict providing more of an epic feel to the project that would have a broader appeal.
- TV: Adapting this into a limited television series on a higher end subscription based network or a streaming platform would be well received. Building the story out to include the other sisters would lend itself nicely to the television format and would keep the audience interested.
- Key points: Strong female lead; Romantic; Historical accuracy; Franchise potential.
Synopsis
Rosalind is the oldest of four sisters. Her family is extremely wealthy but they are commoners. Rosalind’s father wants his daughters all to have titles so he decides to marry Rosalind off to Peter, a broke aristocrat who needs to marry an heiress in order to maintain his family estate.
She is unhappy at this prospect, but agrees when her father tells her that this is the only way that her sisters will stand a chance of marrying into a title. Rosalind vows to help ensure that her sisters will be able to marry for love. After Peter and Rosalind are married, he explains to her that he doesn’t intend to share a marriage bed with her and that he is not interested in producing children. Rosalind feels relief on one hand and disappointment on the other. When they arrive at Peter’s country estate, he introduces Rosalind to his sister, Annie, who suffers from Downs Syndrome. Rosalind and Annie soon become fast friends which makes Peter eternally grateful.
Rosalind is not treated well by some of the society ladies, but she does make friends with Annie’s godmother, Mrs. Adams. Peter and Rosalind begin to fall in love and have a traditional marriage. Rosalind sends for her sister Annabelle to visit. At a ball given in her honor, Annabelle is caught kissing, Lord Stannage, alone in a darkened room. They are caught by Peter and a society gossip. In order to save Annabelle’s reputation, the couple is forced to marry. Lord Stannage is taken with Annabelle and she finds him amenable enough to take as a husband. Rosalind is ultimately forced to accept this as her sister’s fate.
It is soon revealed that Peter’s deceased older brother, Robert, produced a legitimate heir before his death. This jeopardizes Peter’s arrangement with Rosalind’s father. Rosalind discovers that she is pregnant and is worried that Peter will reject her. When she confides in Mrs. Adams, she helps bring the news to Peter. After some contemplating, Peter realizes that he is delighted to become a father. He and Rosalind reconcile.
Since Rosalind never cared about having a title, she is content to leave the estate behind to live with Peter and Annie on a newly purchased farm as they await the arrival their first child.