The Commandment

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ACTION APOCALYPTIC DRAMA POLITICAL ROMANCE SCI-FI RELIGIOUS SUSPENSE / THRILLER

The Future

Anna Kittrell

Logline

An eighteen-year-old woman faces extermination when her body rejects a mandatory God-erasing vaccine.

Genre

Action, Apocalyptic, Drama, Political, Romance, Sci-Fi, Religious, Suspense / Thriller

Target Audiences

Age: 18-34

Target Gender: Universal

Setting

Oklahoma, Nevada, Montana

Based on a True Story

No

Publishing Details

Status: Yes: with a Publisher

Publisher: Pelican Ventures LLC

Year Published: 2018

Starting Description

Ten years ago, Briar’s body rejected a government mandated vaccine to erase God from the mind. Days from her eighteenth birthday, she remains nonresponsive to the injections. By order of the Commandment, adulthood means institutionalization and death unless she becomes a laboratory test subject.

Ending Description

Briar is flown to the laboratory of Lukas Stone to become the test subject for a serum that permanently dissolves God from the brain. But instead of freeing Briar's mind from a prison of religious lies, Lukas finds himself turning to a god he never believed existed, to save the woman he now loves.

Group Specific

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Hard Copy Available

No

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Mature Audience Themes

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Plot - Other Elements

Philosophical Questions, Coming of Age, Meaningful Message, Twist, Happy Ending

Plot - Premise

Overcoming Monster/Villain

Main Character Details

Name: Briar Lee

Age: 18

Gender: Female

Role: Protagonist

Key Traits: Strong Moral Code, Underdog, Aspiring, Engaging, Insecure, Religious, Selfless, Charming, Decisive, Empathetic, Faithful, Honorable

Additional Character Details

Name: Lukas Stone

Age: 24

Gender: Male

Role: Logical

Key Traits: Complex, Educated, Leader, Skillful, Visionary, Sophisticated, Strong Moral Code, Aspiring, Confident, Decisive, Honorable, Perseverance

Additional Character Details

Name: Reid Laughlin

Age: 25

Gender: Female

Role: Antagonist

Key Traits: Blunt, Narcissistic, Secretive, Aggressive, Crazy, Decisive, Greedy, Manipulative, Power-hungry, Seductive, Beautiful, Desperate, Outspoken, Sophisticated, Adventurous, Charming, Confident, Educated, Sarcastic, Sexy, Skillful, Unapologetic, Villainous

Additional Character Details

Name: Caster Stone

Age: 29

Gender: Male

Role: Antagonist

Key Traits: Aggressive, Manipulative, Narcissistic, Unapologetic, Confident, Educated, Power-hungry, Secretive, Blunt, Criminal, Desperate, Villainous, Sophisticated, Complex, Crazy, Decisive, Greedy, Masculine, Outspoken

Logline

An eighteen-year-old woman faces extermination when her body rejects a mandatory God-erasing vaccine.

Short Summary

Ten years ago, Briar’s body rejected a government mandated vaccine to erase God from the mind. Days from her eighteenth birthday, she remains nonresponsive to the injections. By order of the Commandment, adulthood means institutionalization and death unless she becomes a laboratory test subject.


Briar is flown to the laboratory of Lukas Stone to become the test subject for a serum that permanently dissolves God from the brain. But instead of freeing Briar's mind from a prison of religious lies, Lukas finds himself turning to a god he never believed existed, to save the woman he now loves.

Development Pitch

About The Author

Core Theme

Overcoming Monster/Villain,

Characters

Main Character

Name: Briar Lee

Age: 18

Gender: Female

Role: Protagonist

Key Traits: Strong Moral Code, Underdog, Aspiring, Engaging, Insecure, Religious, Selfless, Charming, Decisive, Empathetic, Faithful, Honorable

Character 1

Name: Lukas Stone

Age: 24

Gender: Male

Role: Logical

Key Traits: Complex, Educated, Leader, Skillful, Visionary, Sophisticated, Strong Moral Code, Aspiring, Confident, Decisive, Honorable, Perseverance

Character 2

Name: Reid Laughlin

Age: 25

Gender: Female

Role: Antagonist

Key Traits: Blunt, Narcissistic, Secretive, Aggressive, Crazy, Decisive, Greedy, Manipulative, Power-hungry, Seductive, Beautiful, Desperate, Outspoken, Sophisticated, Adventurous, Charming, Confident, Educated, Sarcastic, Sexy, Skillful, Unapologetic, Villainous

Character 3

Name: Caster Stone

Age: 29

Gender: Male

Role: Antagonist

Key Traits: Aggressive, Manipulative, Narcissistic, Unapologetic, Confident, Educated, Power-hungry, Secretive, Blunt, Criminal, Desperate, Villainous, Sophisticated, Complex, Crazy, Decisive, Greedy, Masculine, Outspoken

Supplemental Materials

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