Chuck The Different Vampire

Marla Paul Merasty aka Miss Marla

Book Cover

GENRE

CHILDREN'S

    Core Theme

    FRIENDLY, YOUNG VAMPIRE

    TIME PERIOD

    2000s

    COMPARABLE TITLES

    SCOOBY DOO, CAT & KEET

    CHARACTER LIST

    CHUCK. YOUNG VAMPIRE. 642 YEARS OLD, BUT ACTS LIKE 11. DOESN'T NEED BLOOD. THE NICER HE IS TO PEOPLE, THE STRONGER HE GETS.

    OLD LADY, OLD MAN AND ALISON, A GIRL WITH CEREBRAL PALSY, ALL OF WHICH CHUCK HAS HELPED SOMEHOW.

    Logline

    Chuck the Different Vampire walks right into your heart. This unconventional young vampire has a Special Power- Manners. Winnipeg children’s author Marla Paul – Merasty, A.K.A. Miss Marla; draws from her experience of being an Educational Assistant, to create a budding friendship between “Chuck” and a young girl with Cerebral Palsy. Official Book launch February 16, 2013 @ Mc Nally Winnipeg. Visit www.chuckthedifferentvampire.ca or Facebook.

    Target Audiences

    Age: 6 and under

    Target Gender:

    Setting

    Winnipeg Exchange District- Canada

    Based on a True Story

    No

    Publishing Details

    Status: Yes: self-published

    Year Published: 2012

    Starting Description

    Chuck is a different young vampire. He is longing to be in the sun and day time world. Along his way he finds out he has a special power that allows him to be in the sun...manners and being polite. While out in his community he meets a young girl with Cerebral Palsy and they become BFF's,

    Ending Description

    The story is for Chuck to have multiple adventures in his community. Bringing a positive message to all he meets.

    Group Specific

    Information not completed

    Hard Copy Available

    No

    ISBN

    Information not completed

    Mature Audience Themes

    Information not completed

    Plot - Other Elements

    Meaningful Message, Happy Ending

    Plot - Premise

    The author has not yet written this

    Main Character Details

    Name: Chuck the Different Vampire is an old sole in a young boys body. His heart is pure and he cares about everyone and everything. His is polite and well liked by all he meets,

    Age: 642

    Gender: Male

    Role: Mentor

    Key Traits: Selfless, Charming, Confident, Engaging, Extraordinary Powers and Abilities, Funny, Leader, Aspiring, Beautiful, Empathetic, Modest, Patriotic, Honorable, Obedient, Skillful, Educated, Gracious

    Additional Character Details

    Name: old man, old lady and Alison

    Age: 75

    Gender: Female

    Role: Mentor

    Key Traits: Beautiful, Educated, Engaging, Funny, Modest, Selfless, Charming, Confident, Faithful, Gracious, Honorable

    Additional Character Details

    The author has not yet written this

    Additional Character Details

    The author has not yet written this

    Genre

    FANTASY

    Brief

    Chuck is not like other vampires. He discovers he has a special power which allows him not only to connect with people around him but also to be out in the sunlight: manners.

    Overall Rating

    FAIR

    Point of View

    THIRD PERSON

    Narrative Elements

    Authors Writing Style: GOOD

    Characterization: FAIR

    Commerciality: FAIR

    Franchise Potential: FAIR

    Pace: FAIR

    Premise: GOOD

    Structure: FAIR

    Theme: GOOD

    Accuracy of Book Profile

    Book profile reflects the book accurately.

    Draw of Story

    It is a candid story about a young vampire that longs to connect with people.

    Possible Drawbacks

    The narrative surrounding his friendship with a girl with cerebral palsy is promising, however underdeveloped.

    Use of Special Effects

    THE STORY RELIES A LITTLE BIT ON SPECIAL EFFECTS

    Primary Hook of Story

    This narrative has an interesting premise for children regarding social connection and friendship between different people.

    Fanbase Potential

    It could have a large fanbase if ideas and narrative are worked on.

    Awards Potential

    Chuck the vampire could have a large fanbase between children.

    Envisioned Budget

    MEDIUM BUDGET

    Similar Films/TV Series

    SCOOBY DOO, CAT & KEET

    What’s New About the Story

    The original thing about the story is its main character, a different type of vampire. The friendship with a girl with cerebral palsy bringing awareness to the issue is also original.

    Lead Characters

    Chuck is a vampire realizing he gets stronger by helping people and building connection with others. Alison is a girl with cerebral palsy which asks for Chuck's help and this interaction is shown to be good for both.

    Uniqueness of Story

    The story needs to be developed, as well as characters and the relations between them.

    Possible Formats

    Film - Studio

    Analyst Recommendation

    WORK IN PROGRESS

    Justification

    The story should be developed to have enough length and become a richer narrative.

    Tips for Improvement

    More information about Chuck: where does he come from? Who is in his family? Where are other characters from? Narrative should be developed with clearer characteristics to make the personality of characters emerge and create connection. More details on his adventures should be added in order to build a character arc.

    Brief

    A young vampire who likes to be out in the sun and doesn't need blood finds out he gets stronger the more people he connects with. While out in the city and being polite, he becomes friends with Alison, a girl with cerebral palsy.

    What We Liked

    Synopsis

    Chuck is a young vampire - who appears to be 11 years old but is actually 642 - who, unlike other vampires, doesn't like blood and enjoys to be awake during the day and out in the sun.

    Chuck finds out he gets stronger the nicer he is to people when one day he is out in the city and helps an old lady who dropped a cane. After that, he confirms his power when he says ""bless you"" to an old man who sneezes near him.

    After that, he helps Alison, a girl in a wheelchair which explains to him she has cerebral palsy. They become friends and will have a playdate the next afternoon, to which Chuck is looking forward.

    About The Author

    Marla Paul - AKA Miss Marla - is married and a mother of two children. She is an educational assistant at Winnipeg, Manitoba, Canada.