The Revelations of August Barton
COMEDY MELODRAMA DRAMA FAMILY ROMANCE
Contemporary
Jennifer LeBlanc
TaleFlick Pick!
Submision Type
book
Logline
August Barton thought his tribulations were over, but some truths are hard to swallow. He’s been with Rose Varley for over a year, and has his heart set on taking the next step: a marriage proposal. He’s not prepared, however, for the obstacles that soon find their way into Augie’s life.
Genre
Comedy,Melodrama,Drama,Family,Romance
Short Summary
Augie has his heart set on proposing to Rose. After Isaac's rough breakup with Sam he's down in the dumps. The band is finally taking off. Augie's stepdad John returns with a heartbreaking revelation. Gertie and Diane go on vacation to Cayman Islands where shenanigans ensue.
Setting
North Dakota/College/Cayman Islands
Based on a True Story
No
Plot - Premise
Other
Plot - Other Elements
Coming of Age,Happy Ending,Meaningful Message
Mature Audience Themes
Language/Profanity,Nudity
Main Character Details
Name: August Barton
Age: 20
Gender: Male
Role: Protagonist
Key Traits: Clumsy,Charming,Selfless,Romantic,Strong Moral Code,Honorable,Insecure,Underdog,Heroic,Empathetic
Additional Character Details
Name: Rose Varley
Age: 20
Gender: Female
Role: Emotional
Key Traits: Complex,Sexy,Romantic,Honorable,Heartthrob,Empathetic,Engaging,Decisive
Additional Character Details
Name: Isaac Clarke
Age: 20
Gender: Male
Role: sidekick
Key Traits: Masculine,Blunt,Funny,Leader,Engaging,Confident,Charming,Adventurous
Additional Character Details
Name: Grandma Gertie
Age: 80
Gender: Female
Role: sidekick
Key Traits: Adventurous,Badass,Charming,Confident,Sexy,Blunt,Outspoken,Funny,Romantic,Secretive,Heroic,Engaging,Empathetic,Decisive,Manipulative
Genre
ROMANCE
Brief
Two young lovers, barely adults, find that mixing love, life and music doesn't always make a sweet melody.
Overall Rating
GOOD
Narrative Elements
Authors Writing Style: GOOD
Characterization: GOOD
Commerciality: GOOD
Franchise Potential: EXCELLENT
Pace: GOOD
Premise: FAIR
Structure: GOOD
Theme: FAIR
Accuracy of Book Profile
No. The author assumes we have knowledge of the previous books in the series so the pitch drops names of whom we no nothing about. It’s advisable not to make assumptions. Explain this book, and this book only, without assuming the reader knows who these characters are from previous books.
Draw of Story
I like music, so that was a immediate draw.
Possible Drawbacks
Using a YA musical band as a character backdrop makes me lose interest, but I think the same thing about any YA story based on a "band", of which there are way too many. When you see a film about people in a rock band, you expect a little less wholesomeness and way more sarcasm.
Use of Special Effects
THE STORY DOES NOT RELY ON SPECIAL EFFECTS
Primary Hook of Story
Will the pressure of life be too much for a pair of young lovers, or will they find true love?
Fanbase Potential
This could probably attract a YA audience.
Awards Potential
No. Not that kind of film.
Envisioned Budget
MEDIUM BUDGET
Similar Films/TV Series
BAND CAMP, HIGH SCHOOL MUSICAL, GEM AND THE HOLOGRAMS
What’s New About the Story
It feels generic at times. The characters need more personality and more "real world" flaws.
Lead Characters
They are all likeable but could do with a little more angst and demons.
Uniqueness of Story
It's ok. Its written fine but the characters just seem less interesting than they could be. They're "too Disney for Disney" and not raunchy enough for Nickelodeon.
Possible Formats
Film - Streaming, Film - Studio, TV Series - Cable, TV Series - Network, TV Series - Streaming
Analyst Recommendation
CONSIDER
Justification
There is a market for teen YA stories but young teens (13, 14) are a very tough audience to peg. When you add something like a band and music you should be very careful because the music can end up making or breaking the film. But, if done right, then you could end up with the next High School Musical.