The House by the Ocean Treatment Script

Desiree Richardson desziree.richardson@gmail.com 5143712301210

MYSTERY FAMILY EROTICA CRIME

Contemporary

Desziree Richardson

Logline

The House by the Ocean fantasy story explores the feelings and imagination of a woman who passionately awaits and prepares for a long-overdue visit from her lover. The story delves, detail-by-detail, into the workings of the mind of the woman as she anticipates his arrival and lovingly prepares hers

Genre

Mystery,Family,Erotica,Crime

Short Summary

The House by the Ocean is an erotically charged love story set against the backdrop of the stunning California coastline. At its core, the novel is both a sexually driven fantasy and a mystery in that it leaves the viewer with more questions than answers as to who Malcolm McKenzie is.


As she sorts through the pile, Annabel notices a large envelope from the wedding photographer. Shoving the other papers aside, she flips through the photos, an image of their first dance, another of Malcolm waiting for her at the altar. Leafing through the photos, she stops suddenly.

Setting

Coastline California

Based on a True Story

No

Plot - Premise

Rebellion Against 'The One',Overcoming Monster/Villain

Plot - Other Elements

Twist,Meaningful Message,Happy Ending

Mature Audience Themes

Information not completed

Main Character Details

Name: Annabel De Cardinar

Age: 30

Gender: Other

Role: Emotional

Key Traits: Aspiring,Charming,Empathetic,Engaging,Heartthrob,Educated,Confident,Adventurous,Clumsy

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Development Pitch

The House by the Ocean is an erotically charged love story set against the backdrop of the stunning California coastline. At its core, the novel is both a sexually driven fantasy and a mystery in that it leaves the viewer with more questions than answers as to who Malcolm McKenzie is, where he has been for the last year and what events in Annabel’s past have made her the character she is. Combined with the graphic nature of the content—as well as the somewhat limited amount of material to work from—the story will find its most ex chance of success is presented as an adult- oriented cable series. As such, the treatment that follows is for a television pilot for an ongoing story that will intertwine the sexual exploits of Annabel with the mystery of who Malcolm McKenzie really is. In order to promote this storyline, a handful of characters, details and events have been added to the original work to help set up future episodes. The objective of this pilot is to introduce key characters to help carry both the erotic bent of the show with the backstory of who all these enigmatic people really are. Some of the plot points which will be left open have to do with Annabel’s estranged father Antonio and what he knows about Malcolm. Did he leave Annabel and her mother for reasons similar to Malcolm’s recent disappearance? Is Malcolm simply a womanizer or is he really the man of Annabel’s dreams? Does he behave the way he does to protect her from the dangers of his secret

About The Author

Desziree Richardson is a thought leader, transformation, and motivational speaker, International best-selling author, model, humanitarian, and entrepreneur. Desziree's authentic presence and sincere transparency have showcased her unique talents as a speaker, author, media personality, broadcaster, and witty reporter. She is honest, personable, and a consummate professional. Her magnetic voice made her famous with her listening audience as one-part smooth, two parts delightful, and a large portion of entertaining and joyful communication. Alongside her established media and celebrity career, Desziree is dedicated to helping people in need and has a real passion for empowering women, volunteering, and philanthropy. As a Project Leader at the University of West London, she actively leads and organises projects, volunteers, and events in the community, such as planting trees in the Gunnersbury park and creating outdoor community projects that benefit the community and environment. She has also volunteered her time teaching In Asia and completed projects to give back, such as the Sanitary Napkins campaign for young girls and Women of Heart Foundation Golden Awards in Kenya and projects in Uganda, Liberia, and Nigeria ground. Richardson has also helped with Fundraising for the Have A Heart Appeal, Help a London Child, The Classic Foundation, and campaigning for the Hunger Summit and IF Enough Food for Everyone and UNICEF. She has contributed to many funds and awareness-raising campaigns, including live auction bids with other celebrities and volunteering as a UNICEF Children's Champion.  Desziree has helped and inspired others. She has received awards and recognition for her work, including the Award-Winning World Women Visionary Leader Award, AAA, Humanitarian Award, the England Gold Award, reflecting her passion, leadership, dedication to various causes, and many other prestigious awards such a foster parent and International Best Selling Author Award.  She is the Women of Heart Foundation founder, which raises funds to celebrate, support, promote, empower, and educate women globally. Women of Heart Awards launched in 2020 -celebrates and honours fifty global iconic and amazing women who make a difference in the world. The face of WOHA, a platform is designed to connect, support, and promote women to become leaders and instrumental in making the world a better place and securing diverse women for a better cause.  Writing high-quality fiction and nonfiction, she has swiftly become an international bestselling author with a dedicated fan base and successfully moved into the world of international publishing. Desziree aims to connect diversity for a better cause and create awareness and invite women worldwide to showcase a healthy, balanced world and share messages that will help change the world positively while showcasing beauty in diverse women as a visual component. Her wish is for everyone to be inclusive and happy and live in a world where diversity, peacefulness, and cosmic love's energy can be radiated and felt through every human existence. With love and gratitude. Desziree Richardson  

Target Audiences

Age: 18-34,35-54,55+

Target Gender: Other,Female Leaning,Male Leaning

Publishing Details

Hard Copy Available

No

WGA Number

Information not completed

Logline

The House by the Ocean fantasy story explores the feelings and imagination of a woman who passionately awaits and prepares for a long-overdue visit from her lover. The story delves, detail-by-detail, into the workings of the mind of the woman as she anticipates his arrival and lovingly prepares hers

Short Summary

The House by the Ocean is an erotically charged love story set against the backdrop of the stunning California coastline. At its core, the novel is both a sexually driven fantasy and a mystery in that it leaves the viewer with more questions than answers as to who Malcolm McKenzie is.


As she sorts through the pile, Annabel notices a large envelope from the wedding photographer. Shoving the other papers aside, she flips through the photos, an image of their first dance, another of Malcolm waiting for her at the altar. Leafing through the photos, she stops suddenly.

FEEDBACK

The House by the Ocean is an erotically charged love story set against the backdrop of the stunning California coastline. At its core, the novel is both a sexually driven fantasy and a mystery in that it leaves the viewer with more questions than answers as to who Malcolm McKenzie is, where he has been for the last year and what events in Annabel’s past have made her the character she is. Combined with the graphic nature of the content—as well as the somewhat limited amount of material to work from—the story will find its most ex chance of success is presented as an adult- oriented cable series. As such, the treatment that follows is for a television pilot for an ongoing story that will intertwine the sexual exploits of Annabel with the mystery of who Malcolm McKenzie really is. In order to promote this storyline, a handful of characters, details and events have been added to the original work to help set up future episodes. The objective of this pilot is to introduce key characters to help carry both the erotic bent of the show with the backstory of who all these enigmatic people really are. Some of the plot points which will be left open have to do with Annabel’s estranged father Antonio and what he knows about Malcolm. Did he leave Annabel and her mother for reasons similar to Malcolm’s recent disappearance? Is Malcolm simply a womanizer or is he really the man of Annabel’s dreams? Does he behave the way he does to protect her from the dangers of his secret

About The Author

Desziree Richardson is a thought leader, transformation, and motivational speaker, International best-selling author, model, humanitarian, and entrepreneur. Desziree's authentic presence and sincere transparency have showcased her unique talents as a speaker, author, media personality, broadcaster, and witty reporter. She is honest, personable, and a consummate professional. Her magnetic voice made her famous with her listening audience as one-part smooth, two parts delightful, and a large portion of entertaining and joyful communication. Alongside her established media and celebrity career, Desziree is dedicated to helping people in need and has a real passion for empowering women, volunteering, and philanthropy. As a Project Leader at the University of West London, she actively leads and organises projects, volunteers, and events in the community, such as planting trees in the Gunnersbury park and creating outdoor community projects that benefit the community and environment. She has also volunteered her time teaching In Asia and completed projects to give back, such as the Sanitary Napkins campaign for young girls and Women of Heart Foundation Golden Awards in Kenya and projects in Uganda, Liberia, and Nigeria ground. Richardson has also helped with Fundraising for the Have A Heart Appeal, Help a London Child, The Classic Foundation, and campaigning for the Hunger Summit and IF Enough Food for Everyone and UNICEF. She has contributed to many funds and awareness-raising campaigns, including live auction bids with other celebrities and volunteering as a UNICEF Children's Champion.  Desziree has helped and inspired others. She has received awards and recognition for her work, including the Award-Winning World Women Visionary Leader Award, AAA, Humanitarian Award, the England Gold Award, reflecting her passion, leadership, dedication to various causes, and many other prestigious awards such a foster parent and International Best Selling Author Award.  She is the Women of Heart Foundation founder, which raises funds to celebrate, support, promote, empower, and educate women globally. Women of Heart Awards launched in 2020 -celebrates and honours fifty global iconic and amazing women who make a difference in the world. The face of WOHA, a platform is designed to connect, support, and promote women to become leaders and instrumental in making the world a better place and securing diverse women for a better cause.  Writing high-quality fiction and nonfiction, she has swiftly become an international bestselling author with a dedicated fan base and successfully moved into the world of international publishing. Desziree aims to connect diversity for a better cause and create awareness and invite women worldwide to showcase a healthy, balanced world and share messages that will help change the world positively while showcasing beauty in diverse women as a visual component. Her wish is for everyone to be inclusive and happy and live in a world where diversity, peacefulness, and cosmic love's energy can be radiated and felt through every human existence. With love and gratitude. Desziree Richardson  

Mature Audience Themes

Information not completed

Characters

Main Character

Name: Annabel De Cardinar

Age: 30

Gender: Other

Role: Emotional

Key Traits: Aspiring,Charming,Empathetic,Engaging,Heartthrob,Educated,Confident,Adventurous,Clumsy