The ISIS Affair
ACTION ADVENTURE SATIRE COMEDY FUNNY DRAMA SUSPENSE/THRILLER POLITICAL RELIGIOUS
Contemporary,2000s
David Rich
Submision Type
book
Logline
The ISIS Affair is a wicked comedy featuring a few of the worlds' over 4000 religions as their infallibility collides in Syria. Two crotchety old curmudgeons, in the satirical tradition of Gulliver's Travels, outwit ISIS and themselves at every turn, putting the fun back in fundamentalism.
Genre
Action,Adventure,Satire,Comedy,Funny,Drama,Suspense/Thriller,Political,Religious
Short Summary
Two ancient backpackers, Brit Doug and American Ralph, board a van for Aleppo where Ralph is writing an article on the bombing of the Aleppo Museum. The van is full of of ISIS recruits including Marcy, an American law grad, recruited by the Caliph, to run the Raqqa women's prison.
Setting
Syria: Aleppo, Dabiq, Raqqa
Based on a True Story
No
Plot - Premise
Overcoming Monster/Villain,Internal Journey/Rebirth
Plot - Other Elements
Meaningful Message,Happy Ending,Philosophical Questions,Twist
Mature Audience Themes
Extreme Violence
Main Character Details
Name: Ralph
Age: 80
Gender: Male
Role: Emotional
Key Traits: Adventurous,Aspiring,Complex,Confident,Outspoken,Skillful,Funny,Sarcastic,Educated,Leader,Religious,Strong Moral Code,Unapologetic
Additional Character Details
Name: Doug
Age: 79
Gender: Male
Role: Sidekick
Key Traits: Adventurous,Masculine,Aggressive,Confident,Blunt,Decisive,Outspoken,Funny,Sarcastic,Educated,Unapologetic,Strong Moral Code
Additional Character Details
Name: Marcy
Age: 30
Gender: Female
Role: antagonist
Key Traits: Badass,Aggressive,Villainous,Charming,Sexy,Confident,Religious,Criminal,Decisive,Blunt,Power Hungry,Outspoken,Sarcastic,Educated,Seductive,Sophisticated,Leader,Unapologetic,Lone Wolf
Additional Character Details
Name: Narin
Age: 14
Gender: Female
Role: protagonist
Key Traits: Adventurous,Aspiring,Charming,Aggressive,Confident,Decisive,Blunt,Outspoken,Visionary,Honorable,Strong Moral Code,Leader
Genre
COMEDY, ACTION, SUSPENSE, MATURE AUDIENCE, RELIGION, POLITICS, WAR
Brief
Two rather senior American men engage in a heist of a very valuable middle east artifact. Along the way they manage to anger an important ISIS leader and and the chase is on. Hijinks ensue.
Overall Rating
GOOD
Narrative Elements
Authors Writing Style: FAIR
Characterization: GOOD
Commerciality: FAIR
Franchise Potential: FAIR
Pace: EXCELLENT
Premise: FAIR
Structure: GOOD
Theme: FAIR
Accuracy of Book Profile
The dialogue seems on the nose at times,and the lead characters age doesn’t always work in their favor. The main problem, however, are xenophobic and racist undertones to the story. Something to watch in today’s climate.
Draw of Story
The pace draws you in quickly.
Possible Drawbacks
The dialogue seems on the nose at times,and the lead characters age doesn’t always work in their favor. The main problem, however, are xenophobic and racist undertones to the story. Something to watch in today’s climate.
Use of Special Effects
THE STORY DOES NOT RELY ON SPECIAL EFFECTS
Primary Hook of Story
It is a madcap adventure a la "It's a Mad, Mad World" with two "fish out-of-water" adventurers.
Fanbase Potential
As a comedy, some people who are drawn to humor in any form may go see it but I don't see this having a true broad appeal.
Awards Potential
No. This goes for quick aughs. It's not an "awards type" film.
Envisioned Budget
LARGE BUDGET
Similar Films/TV Series
IT'S A MAD, MAD WORLD. ISHTAR. RAIDERS OF THE LOST ARK
What’s New About the Story
What's original is the age of it's main characters - both senior citizens.
Lead Characters
Their age makes the main characters stand out, and how it plays against the current world.
Uniqueness of Story
This is a better than average story in terms of plot. It could be molded into something compelling for adaptation if it is pared down and its language is scrubbed to be a bit more PC at times.
Possible Formats
Film - Studio
Analyst Recommendation
WORK IN PROGRESS
Justification
While the story has many positive points, it has room for improvement (see possible paths below). If you can't change the story at this point, my suggestion is using your notes as a guide to highlight the best aspects of it when taking the next steps, either putting a pitch page together, a treatment, or a presentation.
Tips for Improvement
The world is there, the characters are there, the only thing that is needed really is more attention to tone to weave everything together. That would help the author in determining how to effectively convey the goals and motivations for the characters and figuring out how to handle the exposition for the complex world they operate in.