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CRIME DRAMA FANTASY MYSTERY POLITICAL RELIGIOUS HISTORICAL FICTION SUSPENSE/THRILLER OTHER

19th Century,Earlier 20th Century,1960s & '70s,Across Centuries

William Griffin

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Logline

Clive Rowan, a columnist for the Washington Star newspaper, is determined to bet his career and his life on the hunch that the late and beloved President of the United States, Oliver Campbell, did not die from natural causes, but was murdered by his wife.

Genre

Crime,Drama,Fantasy,Mystery,Political,Religious,Historical Fiction,Suspense/Thriller,Other

Short Summary

A ten year old boy, Clive Rowan, finds a beautiful, ornate ring buried beneath the sand. He gives it to his mother as a gift, not realizing that it's a poison ring. Ten years later, as a columnist, Rowan discovers that the ring he found may have been used to murder a former U.S. President.


Although journalist Clive Rowan finally uncovers the secrets to the mystery of who murdered the president and their motive, he struggles whether or not to release his story to the press, or let the hideous lie live another day. In the end, Rowan is spiritually compelled to tell the world the truth.

Setting

San Francisco, Washington D.C.

Based on a True Story

No

Plot - Premise

Overcoming Monster/Villain,Internal Journey/Rebirth,Rebellion Against 'The One'

Plot - Other Elements

Meaningful Message,Twist

Mature Audience Themes

Incest,Sexual Abuse

Main Character Details

Name: Clive Rowan

Age: 20

Gender: Male

Role: Protagonist

Key Traits: Complex,Sexy,Confident,Faithful,Underdog,Adventurous,Aggressive,Decisive,Engaging,Empathetic,Skillful,Funny,Educated,Heroic,Aspiring

Additional Character Details

Name: Brittany Sinclair

Age: 19

Gender: Female

Role: Sidekick

Key Traits: Adventurous,Underdog,Sexy,Charming,Aggressive,Confident,Faithful,Flexible,Funny,Skillful,Outspoken,Selfless,Modest,Romantic,Sarcastic,Seductive,Sophisticated,Unapologetic,Educated,Honorable,Engaging

Additional Character Details

Name: Ellen Campbell

Age: 76

Gender: Female

Role: emotional

Key Traits: Modest,Charming,Complex,Desperate,Crazy,Secretive,Seductive,Sophisticated,Unapologetic,Honorable,Insecure,Empathetic,Lone Wolf

Additional Character Details

Name: Oliver Campbell

Age: 70

Gender: Male

Role: antagonist

Key Traits: Aggressive,Villainous,Narcisstic,Complex,Confident,Crazy,Criminal,Decisive,Power Hungry,Blunt,Engaging,Outspoken,Greedy,Sarcastic,Educated,Secretive,Sophisticated,Strong Moral Code,Manipulative,Unapologetic,Leader,Aspiring

Development Pitch

Clive Rowan, a columnist for the Washington Star newspaper, is willing to bet his career and his life on the hunch that the late and beloved President of the United States, Oliver Campbell, did not die from natural causes, but was murdered by his wife. Is it his fate, or is it a coincidence that Rowan discovers the poison ring, as a child, and then, later on in life, finds out the many secrets that were buried with it? The former first lady, Ellen Campbell, has been shielded from scrutiny, while eluding justice for over a half-century. Digging deep for answers, Rowan uncovers clues and evidence that cast a shadow of doubt on the official story of how the president died. As the hidden truth begins to surface, Rowan struggles with the decision to release his report to the press and turn history upside-down, or to let the hideous lie live another day. This fast-paced, heart-stopping murder mystery/ghost story will leave you wondering if some secrets are better left buried.

About The Author

William W. Griffin was born in 1964, in Atlanta, Georgia. After graduating cum laude from Georgia State University, he has worked in corporate creative advertising and has taught graphic design as a high school and college instructor. He is married, has two children, and lives in North Georgia. Griffin's first novel, a satirical comedy, titled "Diggin' Elroy" was self published in 2015, under the name Walt Griffin. The novel is also available for purchase as an eBook, paperback, and hardback edition.

Target Audiences

Age: 18-34,35-54,55+

Target Gender: Universal

Group Specific

Information not completed

Publishing Details

Status: Yes: self-published

Publisher: William Griffin

Year Published: 2020

Hard Copy Available

No

ISBN

978-1393698050

Genre

SUSPENSE, THRILLER, DRAMA

Brief

Clive is a young journalist looking to make a name for himself. He is given menial assignments until he comes across a piece about the former first lady. Clive begins to look into her past and the unexpected death of her husband. Clive's brush with the paranormal as a child brought him evidence against Ellen Campbell, the former first lady.

Overall Rating

GOOD

Point of View

THIRD PERSON

Narrative Elements

Authors Writing Style: GOOD

Characterization: GOOD

Commerciality: GOOD

Franchise Potential: GOOD

Pace: GOOD

Premise: GOOD

Structure: GOOD

Theme: GOOD

Accuracy of Book Profile

Yes, the book profile accurately reflects the book.

Draw of Story

The story opens with Clive as a child being led to find a ring, buried deep in the sand. An older man leads him to it, but only Clive can see the man. Clive's father sensed a presence and was able to save his some while he found a ring. This is a story about uncovering a murder mystery but mixed with the paranormal.

Possible Drawbacks

The story is a typical journalist story. Clive stumbles on a massive story about a president being poisoned by his wife. He is young and eager to prove himself. It has all the elements of a journalistic movie with some interesting twists. There could be more diversity with the characters.

Use of Special Effects

THE STORY RELIES A LITTLE BIT ON SPECIAL EFFECTS

Primary Hook of Story

The hook is that a journalist discovers the unlikely death of an American president was not by natural causes, but from poisoning by his wife. I would watch this movie for the twists. Ellen Campbell has lived with her actions for many years. The secrets surrounding her motives are shocking and would create great moments in a movie.

Fanbase Potential

This could have a large fanbase. Uncovering murder mysteries are still entertaining stories. There are enough twist to set it apart from other stories that are similar. This also has a paranormal element because Clive was led to the poison ring used to kill the president, as a child. And he is saved from death by his father, who died a few years before.

Awards Potential

This could have awards potential depending on the casting. There are some interesting characters to explore, specifically, Ellen Campbell. There are many layers to the character, with a great actress, could garner awards notice.

Envisioned Budget

MEDIUM BUDGET

Similar Films/TV Series

SPOTLIGHT, THE POST

What’s New About the Story

The story is original, but could be more diverse with the characters. It is a period drama, however. The antagonist is somewhat cliche. The "wife killed the husband with poison" is a motif that has been done many times over. The twists do elevate the story from being a copy of other movies.

Lead Characters

The lead antagonist stands out as a woman with many layers. Her motives and actions are lead my very unusual circumstances. She marries her father which eludes to a certain mental state.

Uniqueness of Story

This is an interesting story, but is another variation on a journalist drama. It follows the same formula while deferring in it's details and plot. It could be improved with a different setting or a different institution. This story surrounds a president but could be a prime minister or czar.

Possible Formats

Film - Indie, Film - Streaming, Film - Studio, TV Series - Limited Run / Mini-Series

Analyst Recommendation

CONSIDER

Justification

This story is a consider because it has some very interesting twists. The motivation behind the protagonist is grim and works well with the story. The paranormal addition is a great touch, but is not as developed as it could be. It should be weaved throughout the story better. This is a solid story that would be entertaining to audiences.