The power of human being- The song of angels

L.Bilt

Book Cover

GENRE

ACTION ADVENTURE APOCALYPTIC FANTASY RELIGIOUS WAR

    Core Theme

    TRANSFORMATION, BATTLE BETWEEN LIGHT AND DARK

    TIME PERIOD

    Contemporary

    COMPARABLE TITLES

    THE PROPHECY, LEGION, END OF DAYS

    CHARACTER LIST

    • TOM NOLAN/SARIEL: LEAD, CURIOUS, HEROIC, SUPERNATURAL POWERS

    • BEN: LOYAL, KIND, TOM’S BEST FRIEND

    • DAMIAN: MYSTERIOUS, RICH, WISE, TOM’S MENTOR

    • SIRENE: FALLEN ANGEL, BRAVE, STRONG, GUIDE FOR TOM

    • LILITH: VENGEFUL, POWERFUL, WILY, NEMESIS OF TOM/SARIEL

    • MOHAN: NEPHILIM, BEAUTIFUL, ETHEREAL, LILITH’S DAUGHTER AND BEN’S LOVE INTEREST

    Logline

    Those who sacrifice themselves for others will last in heaven forever. But now even heaven is in danger and angels are no match for the new threat that arise. It is possible that someone else could save them? I am Nebeleizis, an Irin from the second cycle of life on this realm, Earth.

    Target Audiences

    Age: 13-17,18-34,35-54,55+

    Target Gender: Universal

    Setting

    Calgary, New York, Canmore

    Based on a True Story

    No

    Publishing Details

    Status: Yes: self-published

    Publisher: Amazon

    Year Published: 2019

    Starting Description

    Now that Tom has become a heavenly creature, Ben has to deal with the seed of life hidden inside his body by Mohan. He didn't know in fact that this will save his life again and will change him forever. His destiny now is not on seers hand and he will need to chose.

    Ending Description

    All the knowledge the universe has to offer is by power of the light. Who knew that a mortal can handle the seed of life and not only save the humanity but also creating a new one. Humans are saved, titans too...what about the heaven and hell? Things change when Ben wakes next morning 65 years old.

    Group Specific

    Information not completed

    Hard Copy Available

    Yes

    ISBN

    ASIN: B07QND3MGM

    Mature Audience Themes

    Information not completed

    Plot - Other Elements

    Happy Ending,Meaningful Message,Other

    Plot - Premise

    Other

    Main Character Details

    Name: Ben Ardens

    Age: 27

    Gender: Male

    Role: Protagonist

    Key Traits: Adventurous,Aspiring,Complex,Faithful,Flexible,Heroic,Honorable,Blunt,Funny,Romantic,Sarcastic,Strong Moral Code

    Additional Character Details

    Name: Mohan- daughter of Lilith

    Age: unknown

    Gender: Female

    Role: Emotional

    Key Traits: Charming,Complex,Confident,Heroic,Educated,Sexy,Romantic,Sophisticated,Strong Moral Code

    Additional Character Details

    Name: Lilith

    Age: unknown

    Gender: Female

    Role: antagonist

    Key Traits: Adventurous,Badass,Aggressive,Charming,Complex,Confident,Faithful,Sophisticated,Seductive,Sarcastic

    Additional Character Details

    Name: Lucifer

    Age: unknown

    Gender: Male

    Role: antagonist

    Key Traits: Badass,Aggressive,Charming,Complex,Confident,Masculine,Villainous

    Development Pitch

    Those who sacrifice themselves for others will last in heaven forever. But now even heaven is in danger and angels are no match for the new threat that arise. It is possible that someone else could save them? I am Nebeleizis, an Irin from the second cycle of life on this realm, Earth. You mortals are weak and fragile but this human...is something I have never met during my long existence. He is special.

    Genre

    ACTION, ROMANCE, RELIGION, FANTASY

    Brief

    Tom receives an unexpected visit and finds out he is an uncommon person, born without a mother or father. Side by side with his friend Ben he goes on a journey to retrieve a powerful bracelet and ends up taking an essential part in the battle between Heaven and Hell. In the end, he assumes his true form, as Ben, mortally ill, is saved by his beloved one. Marked with a mysterious tattoo, Ben has an ominous encounter with Lucifer himself.

    Overall Rating

    GOOD

    Point of View

    THIRD PERSON

    Narrative Elements

    Authors Writing Style: FAIR

    Characterization: GOOD

    Commerciality: GOOD

    Franchise Potential: GOOD

    Pace: GOOD

    Premise: GOOD

    Structure: GOOD

    Theme: GOOD

    Accuracy of Book Profile

    Yes, it does.

    Draw of Story

    The whole mystery surrounding the protagonist's heavenly origins.

    Possible Drawbacks

    There are too many language mistakes, that could be corrected with a careful revision.

    Use of Special Effects

    THE STORY RELIES HEAVILY ON SPECIAL EFFECTS

    Primary Hook of Story

    A common person finds out he is one of the most special beings in the world, and has an important role in the battle between good and evil.

    Fanbase Potential

    It could possibly attract fans of fantasy stories and religious narratives.

    Awards Potential

    Yes, it might win fantasy awards, but with some necessary adaptations.

    Envisioned Budget

    LARGE BUDGET

    Similar Films/TV Series

    AS MENTIONED IN THE EVALUATION OF THE OTHER BOOK OF THE SERIES, THE NARRATIVE'S STORY OF GOOD VERSUS EVIL, FULL OF ANGELS AND DEMONS, IS SIMILAR TO THE PLOT OF THE SERIES SUPERNATURAL. IT COULD ALSO BE RELATED TO THE MOVIE CONSTANTINE.

    What’s New About the Story

    The story's originality comes from the discovery of this new reality full of heavenly and hellish creatures. Maybe some of the characters could be more developed to add more credibility to the narrative.

    Lead Characters

    Tom is a very courageous man, with an extraordinary sensibility and an acute sense of righteousness. Ben stands out for being a more common human being, with an enormous goodness to him and some very funny tirades.

    Uniqueness of Story

    Not yet. The writing requires some revisions, as well as some of the dialogues.

    Possible Formats

    Film - Studio, Film - Streaming

    Analyst Recommendation

    CONSIDER

    Justification

    Because the story has some very interesting points, that could have a lot of appeal to the audience. Still, the language might be a problem, since there are many mistakes in the use of English throughout the entire book, that could be corrected with a revision. Besides that, some of the characters' actions could be rethought for the possible adaptation, since some of them seem a little exaggerated. For example, Ben's obsession with a fancy banquet in the beginning is sometimes funny, but other times seems a little too much and could be a bit toned down, especially because the moment asks for a little more seriousness.

    Brief

    After meeting a mysterious stranger, a man learns that he possesses supernatural powers stronger than angels and he goes on a journey to restore the balance between the forces of good and evil.

    What We Liked

    - There is mystery and suspense. The supernatural bent is appealing. There is an epic battle scene between preternatural beings. Religious dogma is referenced and allowed to play out.
    - Film: The story lends itself well for a feature adaptation too. The characters are larger than life and the story has a broad and epic feel that would translate cinematically to the big screen. Special effects could be spectacular in the right hands.
    - TV: Adapting the book into a television series would be an easy transition. An episodic format could be established with expanding the storyline to follow Tom/Sariel as he learns about the angelic power and responsibility and is faced with the challenge of evil forces in Heaven, Hell and Earth.
    - Key points: Fast-paced; Sequel/franchise potential; Interesting effects; Classic theme – battle between good and evil; Draws from historical, religious constructs

    Synopsis

    Tom Nolan is spending some time in the park. He approached by a mysterious, but friendly man who calls himself, Damian Na Imad. Damian invites Tom to his home for dinner that evening.
    Tom’s best friend, Ben, is intrigued by Damian’s offer and decides to accompany him to the dinner. Both men arrive at Damien’s lavish estate. Tom learns that he is part angel and that he possesses supernatural powers. Damian explains to him that he is needed for a quest that only he can perform.

    They fly to Europe on Damian’s private jet. Tom’s task is to retrieve a powerful bracelet from the underwater cave where the great warrior, Achilles, is buried. He is joined by an angelic being called Sirene who communicates with Tom telepathically. She helps him get the bracelet, avoid distraction and get back to the surface.

    They find that Ben has been nearly killed by evil forces. Sirene is able to bring him back from the brink of death. Damian perishes when his plane explodes, but leaves behind instructions for Tom. He needs to be in cave containing a structure known as God’s Eyes by midnight. The location is in Bulgaria so they hire, a taxi driver called Ion to drive them there.

    When they stop for a meal, they are ambushed by demonic forces. Tom is able to use his new found power alongside Sirene to defeat their tormentors. They are then joined by an enchantress called Mohan. She is a beautiful Nephilim, half angel-half human. She joins them after the battle and when they arrive at the cave just before midnight. Legions of angels, fallen angels, archangels, Nephilim titans and demons are amassed to wage a war against each other for control of mankind. Tom absorbs the power from the demons he battles and he makes the full transition into his angelic being is now called by his true name, Sariel.

    After Tom/Sariel is able to use his new found immense power to restore the balance between Heaven and Hell, he forced to go up against, Lilith, the biblical vengeful first wife of Adam. She is holding angels and Lucifer himself hostage as way to hurt God. Tom/Sariel takes her power, and releases the captives. Sirene and Sariel go to recover and Ben returns to his home with Mohan. He awakes to find her gone, but Lucifer is waiting for him and will bring about the next saga in the series.

    About The Author

    L.Bilt was born in a small city in Transylvania,a place of religion and supernatural legend.After immigrating to Canada in 2007, L.Bilt now resides in Calgary with his wife and daughter.