The power of human being- The song of angels
GENRE
ACTION ADVENTURE APOCALYPTIC FANTASY RELIGIOUS WAR
Core Theme
TRANSFORMATION, BATTLE BETWEEN LIGHT AND DARK
TIME PERIOD
Contemporary
COMPARABLE TITLES
THE PROPHECY, LEGION, END OF DAYS
CHARACTER LIST
• TOM NOLAN/SARIEL: LEAD, CURIOUS, HEROIC, SUPERNATURAL POWERS
• BEN: LOYAL, KIND, TOM’S BEST FRIEND
• DAMIAN: MYSTERIOUS, RICH, WISE, TOM’S MENTOR
• SIRENE: FALLEN ANGEL, BRAVE, STRONG, GUIDE FOR TOM
• LILITH: VENGEFUL, POWERFUL, WILY, NEMESIS OF TOM/SARIEL
• MOHAN: NEPHILIM, BEAUTIFUL, ETHEREAL, LILITH’S DAUGHTER AND BEN’S LOVE INTEREST
Logline
Those who sacrifice themselves for others will last in heaven forever. But now even heaven is in danger and angels are no match for the new threat that arise. It is possible that someone else could save them? I am Nebeleizis, an Irin from the second cycle of life on this realm, Earth.
Target Audiences
Age: 13-17,18-34,35-54,55+
Target Gender: Universal
Setting
Calgary, New York, Canmore
Based on a True Story
No
Publishing Details
Status: Yes: self-published
Publisher: Amazon
Year Published: 2019
Starting Description
Now that Tom has become a heavenly creature, Ben has to deal with the seed of life hidden inside his body by Mohan. He didn't know in fact that this will save his life again and will change him forever. His destiny now is not on seers hand and he will need to chose.
Ending Description
All the knowledge the universe has to offer is by power of the light. Who knew that a mortal can handle the seed of life and not only save the humanity but also creating a new one. Humans are saved, titans too...what about the heaven and hell? Things change when Ben wakes next morning 65 years old.
Group Specific
Information not completed
Hard Copy Available
Yes
ISBN
ASIN: B07QND3MGM
Mature Audience Themes
Information not completed
Plot - Other Elements
Happy Ending,Meaningful Message,Other
Plot - Premise
Other
Main Character Details
Name: Ben Ardens
Age: 27
Gender: Male
Role: Protagonist
Key Traits: Adventurous,Aspiring,Complex,Faithful,Flexible,Heroic,Honorable,Blunt,Funny,Romantic,Sarcastic,Strong Moral Code
Additional Character Details
Name: Mohan- daughter of Lilith
Age: unknown
Gender: Female
Role: Emotional
Key Traits: Charming,Complex,Confident,Heroic,Educated,Sexy,Romantic,Sophisticated,Strong Moral Code
Additional Character Details
Name: Lilith
Age: unknown
Gender: Female
Role: antagonist
Key Traits: Adventurous,Badass,Aggressive,Charming,Complex,Confident,Faithful,Sophisticated,Seductive,Sarcastic
Additional Character Details
Name: Lucifer
Age: unknown
Gender: Male
Role: antagonist
Key Traits: Badass,Aggressive,Charming,Complex,Confident,Masculine,Villainous
Development Pitch
Those who sacrifice themselves for others will last in heaven forever. But now even heaven is in danger and angels are no match for the new threat that arise. It is possible that someone else could save them? I am Nebeleizis, an Irin from the second cycle of life on this realm, Earth. You mortals are weak and fragile but this human...is something I have never met during my long existence. He is special.
Genre
ACTION, ROMANCE, RELIGION, FANTASY
Brief
Tom receives an unexpected visit and finds out he is an uncommon person, born without a mother or father. Side by side with his friend Ben he goes on a journey to retrieve a powerful bracelet and ends up taking an essential part in the battle between Heaven and Hell. In the end, he assumes his true form, as Ben, mortally ill, is saved by his beloved one. Marked with a mysterious tattoo, Ben has an ominous encounter with Lucifer himself.
Overall Rating
GOOD
Narrative Elements
Authors Writing Style: FAIR
Characterization: GOOD
Commerciality: GOOD
Franchise Potential: GOOD
Pace: GOOD
Premise: GOOD
Structure: GOOD
Theme: GOOD
Accuracy of Book Profile
Yes, it does.
Draw of Story
The whole mystery surrounding the protagonist's heavenly origins.
Possible Drawbacks
There are too many language mistakes, that could be corrected with a careful revision.
Use of Special Effects
THE STORY RELIES HEAVILY ON SPECIAL EFFECTS
Primary Hook of Story
A common person finds out he is one of the most special beings in the world, and has an important role in the battle between good and evil.
Fanbase Potential
It could possibly attract fans of fantasy stories and religious narratives.
Awards Potential
Yes, it might win fantasy awards, but with some necessary adaptations.
Envisioned Budget
LARGE BUDGET
Similar Films/TV Series
AS MENTIONED IN THE EVALUATION OF THE OTHER BOOK OF THE SERIES, THE NARRATIVE'S STORY OF GOOD VERSUS EVIL, FULL OF ANGELS AND DEMONS, IS SIMILAR TO THE PLOT OF THE SERIES SUPERNATURAL. IT COULD ALSO BE RELATED TO THE MOVIE CONSTANTINE.
What’s New About the Story
The story's originality comes from the discovery of this new reality full of heavenly and hellish creatures. Maybe some of the characters could be more developed to add more credibility to the narrative.
Lead Characters
Tom is a very courageous man, with an extraordinary sensibility and an acute sense of righteousness. Ben stands out for being a more common human being, with an enormous goodness to him and some very funny tirades.
Uniqueness of Story
Not yet. The writing requires some revisions, as well as some of the dialogues.
Possible Formats
Film - Studio, Film - Streaming
Analyst Recommendation
CONSIDER
Justification
Because the story has some very interesting points, that could have a lot of appeal to the audience. Still, the language might be a problem, since there are many mistakes in the use of English throughout the entire book, that could be corrected with a revision. Besides that, some of the characters' actions could be rethought for the possible adaptation, since some of them seem a little exaggerated. For example, Ben's obsession with a fancy banquet in the beginning is sometimes funny, but other times seems a little too much and could be a bit toned down, especially because the moment asks for a little more seriousness.
Brief
After meeting a mysterious stranger, a man learns that he possesses supernatural powers stronger than angels and he goes on a journey to restore the balance between the forces of good and evil.
What We Liked
- There is mystery and suspense. The supernatural bent is appealing. There is an epic battle scene between preternatural beings. Religious dogma is referenced and allowed to play out.
- Film: The story lends itself well for a feature adaptation too. The characters are larger than life and the story has a broad and epic feel that would translate cinematically to the big screen. Special effects could be spectacular in the right hands.
- TV: Adapting the book into a television series would be an easy transition. An episodic format could be established with expanding the storyline to follow Tom/Sariel as he learns about the angelic power and responsibility and is faced with the challenge of evil forces in Heaven, Hell and Earth.
- Key points: Fast-paced; Sequel/franchise potential; Interesting effects; Classic theme – battle between good and evil; Draws from historical, religious constructs
Synopsis
Tom Nolan is spending some time in the park. He approached by a mysterious, but friendly man who calls himself, Damian Na Imad. Damian invites Tom to his home for dinner that evening.
Tom’s best friend, Ben, is intrigued by Damian’s offer and decides to accompany him to the dinner. Both men arrive at Damien’s lavish estate. Tom learns that he is part angel and that he possesses supernatural powers. Damian explains to him that he is needed for a quest that only he can perform.
They fly to Europe on Damian’s private jet. Tom’s task is to retrieve a powerful bracelet from the underwater cave where the great warrior, Achilles, is buried. He is joined by an angelic being called Sirene who communicates with Tom telepathically. She helps him get the bracelet, avoid distraction and get back to the surface.
They find that Ben has been nearly killed by evil forces. Sirene is able to bring him back from the brink of death. Damian perishes when his plane explodes, but leaves behind instructions for Tom. He needs to be in cave containing a structure known as God’s Eyes by midnight. The location is in Bulgaria so they hire, a taxi driver called Ion to drive them there.
When they stop for a meal, they are ambushed by demonic forces. Tom is able to use his new found power alongside Sirene to defeat their tormentors. They are then joined by an enchantress called Mohan. She is a beautiful Nephilim, half angel-half human. She joins them after the battle and when they arrive at the cave just before midnight. Legions of angels, fallen angels, archangels, Nephilim titans and demons are amassed to wage a war against each other for control of mankind. Tom absorbs the power from the demons he battles and he makes the full transition into his angelic being is now called by his true name, Sariel.
After Tom/Sariel is able to use his new found immense power to restore the balance between Heaven and Hell, he forced to go up against, Lilith, the biblical vengeful first wife of Adam. She is holding angels and Lucifer himself hostage as way to hurt God. Tom/Sariel takes her power, and releases the captives. Sirene and Sariel go to recover and Ben returns to his home with Mohan. He awakes to find her gone, but Lucifer is waiting for him and will bring about the next saga in the series.