The Power of the Human Being- A hero among Angels
Logline
The humans being life was an adventure since the beginning. Finding faith in yourself and others is not a easy task. Friendship beyond life and death. We are part of something of we are talking every day, but very few can understand. Without love we are nothing.
Genre
Action,Adventure,Fantasy,War,Comedy
Short Summary
The battle between Heaven and Hell is about to change its course. A new kind of hero has emerged from the mortals. When Tom Nolan's morning at the park is interrupted by enigmatic Damian Na Imad, his life takes an extraordinary turn. Through Damian's guidance,Tom learns of his unique abilities.
The new kind of entity was born, Sariel share his love with a fallen angel, Sirene. Ben, badly hurt was taken by Mohan into a lost cave named"Hercules bath"with a spring of water of life. Lilith was imprisoned inside the mount where she was left to die. Lucifer apparition will change everything.
Setting
Calgary, New York, Snake Island, Romania, Bulgaria.
Based on a True Story
No
Plot - Premise
Quest,Other
Plot - Other Elements
Happy Ending
Mature Audience Themes
Information not completed
Main Character Details
Name: Tom Nolan
Age: Around 31
Gender: Male
Role: Mentor
Key Traits: Aspiring,Badass,Charming,Leader,Educated,Confident,Lone Wolf,Strong Moral Code,Sophisticated,Sarcastic,Funny,Skillful,Selfless,Religious
Additional Character Details
Name: Ben Ardens
Age: 27
Gender: Male
Role: Emotional
Key Traits: Adventurous,Aspiring,Clumsy,Complex,Heroic,Honorable,Educated,Naive,Modest,Blunt,Selfless,Funny,Sarcastic
Additional Character Details
Name: Mohan- daughter of Lilith
Age: Hundreds of years
Gender: Female
Role: emotional
Key Traits: Aspiring,Badass,Charming,Confident,Gracious,Flexible,Heroic,Educated,Honorable,Sexy,Strong Moral Code,Sophisticated,Seductive,Sarcastic,Romantic
Additional Character Details
Name: Sirene- Fallen Angel
Age: unknown
Gender: Female
Role: emotional
Key Traits: Adventurous,Badass,Charming,Complex,Confident,Gracious,Faithful,Heroic,Honorable,Modest,Obedient,Sexy,Skillful,Sophisticated
Development Pitch
In all of us are hidden many thoughts about life, love, hate, revenge and so on. The friendship between an ex- detective and a part time journalist is something special. A mortal born with an angel soul, who then pass the transformation to become something more powerful and wise than any other angel. Why the love between Sariel and Sirene( angels) is not very different than the love between Ben and Mohan. To be hero is not always something that is destined from the beginning for the mortals. The pure love is born on the pure hearts. When the battle arise you will know your true enemies. The horde of demons with their leaders face this new kind of angel, Sariel. His power is overwhelming and everything has a new course. Lilith manipulate with strange old spells Angels and Arch Angels.
Genre
FANTASY, RELIGION, ACTION
Brief
The human Ben Ardens finds out he has a seed of life implanted inside his skin, something Lucifer wants to acquire for himself. Ben starts a journey looking for Mohan, the love of his life, who he has to save before it's too late. At the same time, a new malign force threatens life on Earth, heaven and hell. In order to defeat it and save everyone, Ben has to become one with the seed that lives inside him, letting go of his human existence to allow life to keep its course.
Overall Rating
GOOD
Narrative Elements
Authors Writing Style: FAIR
Characterization: GOOD
Commerciality: GOOD
Franchise Potential: GOOD
Pace: GOOD
Premise: GOOD
Structure: FAIR
Theme: GOOD
Accuracy of Book Profile
Yes, it does reflect the book.
Draw of Story
The dynamic between angels, demons, and the human protagonist.
Possible Drawbacks
The writing has some mistakes that could be corrected with a revision.
Use of Special Effects
THE STORY RELIES HEAVILY ON SPECIAL EFFECTS
Primary Hook of Story
The fantasy world that connects religion, heaven, hell, mythological beings, and human life.
Fanbase Potential
Yes, it could, because it has potential to attract fantasy fans and people interested in religious allegories.
Awards Potential
Some fantasy awards, but the story needs to go through some revisions.
Envisioned Budget
LARGE BUDGET
Similar Films/TV Series
MAINLY THE SERIES SUPERNATURAL, THAT ALSO MIXES RELIGIOUS FIGURES SUCH AS ANGELS AND DEMONS WITH GENERAL LIFE ON EARTH.
What’s New About the Story
The fantasy world created around religious figures, but it lacks some more narrative development, as do some of the characters.
Lead Characters
Ben is a courageous, altruistic person, that is genuinely good and reliable despite his impulsive behavior.
Uniqueness of Story
Not really, at least not as it is. The story does still feel a little raw and would have to go through some changes for an adaptation to be successful.
Possible Formats
Film - Studio, Film - Streaming, TV Series - Cable, TV Series - Streaming
Analyst Recommendation
CONSIDER
Justification
Because the main story has very interesting elements. However, the book lacks revision and still contains too many English mistakes that would need correction. Furthermore, even though the action is well thought, the narrative could use some more detailed descriptions about places, entities and realms, since some of them are absolutely new to the readers. Even though this is the second book in the series, and the first one probably provided more information about such things, it is always important to give as much detail as possible in a fantastic narrative like this, since the reader needs to get acquainted with a lot of non-existent elements and has to be completely invested in this new world you are creating here.