The Power of the Human Being- A hero among Angels

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ACTION ADVENTURE FANTASY WAR COMEDY

Contemporary

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Logline

The humans being life was an adventure since the beginning. Finding faith in yourself and others is not a easy task. Friendship beyond life and death. We are part of something of we are talking every day, but very few can understand. Without love we are nothing.

Genre

Action,Adventure,Fantasy,War,Comedy

Short Summary

The battle between Heaven and Hell is about to change its course. A new kind of hero has emerged from the mortals. When Tom Nolan's morning at the park is interrupted by enigmatic Damian Na Imad, his life takes an extraordinary turn. Through Damian's guidance,Tom learns of his unique abilities.


The new kind of entity was born, Sariel share his love with a fallen angel, Sirene. Ben, badly hurt was taken by Mohan into a lost cave named"Hercules bath"with a spring of water of life. Lilith was imprisoned inside the mount where she was left to die. Lucifer apparition will change everything.

Setting

Calgary, New York, Snake Island, Romania, Bulgaria.

Based on a True Story

No

Plot - Premise

Quest,Other

Plot - Other Elements

Happy Ending

Mature Audience Themes

Information not completed

Main Character Details

Name: Tom Nolan

Age: Around 31

Gender: Male

Role: Mentor

Key Traits: Aspiring,Badass,Charming,Leader,Educated,Confident,Lone Wolf,Strong Moral Code,Sophisticated,Sarcastic,Funny,Skillful,Selfless,Religious

Additional Character Details

Name: Ben Ardens

Age: 27

Gender: Male

Role: Emotional

Key Traits: Adventurous,Aspiring,Clumsy,Complex,Heroic,Honorable,Educated,Naive,Modest,Blunt,Selfless,Funny,Sarcastic

Additional Character Details

Name: Mohan- daughter of Lilith

Age: Hundreds of years

Gender: Female

Role: emotional

Key Traits: Aspiring,Badass,Charming,Confident,Gracious,Flexible,Heroic,Educated,Honorable,Sexy,Strong Moral Code,Sophisticated,Seductive,Sarcastic,Romantic

Additional Character Details

Name: Sirene- Fallen Angel

Age: unknown

Gender: Female

Role: emotional

Key Traits: Adventurous,Badass,Charming,Complex,Confident,Gracious,Faithful,Heroic,Honorable,Modest,Obedient,Sexy,Skillful,Sophisticated

Development Pitch

In all of us are hidden many thoughts about life, love, hate, revenge and so on. The friendship between an ex- detective and a part time journalist is something special. A mortal born with an angel soul, who then pass the transformation to become something more powerful and wise than any other angel. Why the love between Sariel and Sirene( angels) is not very different than the love between Ben and Mohan. To be hero is not always something that is destined from the beginning for the mortals. The pure love is born on the pure hearts. When the battle arise you will know your true enemies. The horde of demons with their leaders face this new kind of angel, Sariel. His power is overwhelming and everything has a new course. Lilith manipulate with strange old spells Angels and Arch Angels.

About The Author

I was born in Transylvania in 1965. Small city where all most everyone know each other. Emigrate with my wife and daughter in Canada in 2007 and since then we are living in beautiful Calgary.

Target Audiences

Age: 13-17,18-34,35-54,55+

Target Gender: Universal

Group Specific

Information not completed

Publishing Details

Status: Yes: self-published

Publisher: Friessen Press from 2014 to 2016

Year Published: 2014 but now self published on Amazon

Hard Copy Available

Yes

ISBN

ASIN: B07QHYSW4F

Genre

FANTASY, RELIGION, ACTION

Brief

The human Ben Ardens finds out he has a seed of life implanted inside his skin, something Lucifer wants to acquire for himself. Ben starts a journey looking for Mohan, the love of his life, who he has to save before it's too late. At the same time, a new malign force threatens life on Earth, heaven and hell. In order to defeat it and save everyone, Ben has to become one with the seed that lives inside him, letting go of his human existence to allow life to keep its course.

Overall Rating

GOOD

Point of View

THIRD PERSON

Narrative Elements

Authors Writing Style: FAIR

Characterization: GOOD

Commerciality: GOOD

Franchise Potential: GOOD

Pace: GOOD

Premise: GOOD

Structure: FAIR

Theme: GOOD

Accuracy of Book Profile

Yes, it does reflect the book.

Draw of Story

The dynamic between angels, demons, and the human protagonist.

Possible Drawbacks

The writing has some mistakes that could be corrected with a revision.

Use of Special Effects

THE STORY RELIES HEAVILY ON SPECIAL EFFECTS

Primary Hook of Story

The fantasy world that connects religion, heaven, hell, mythological beings, and human life.

Fanbase Potential

Yes, it could, because it has potential to attract fantasy fans and people interested in religious allegories.

Awards Potential

Some fantasy awards, but the story needs to go through some revisions.

Envisioned Budget

LARGE BUDGET

Similar Films/TV Series

MAINLY THE SERIES SUPERNATURAL, THAT ALSO MIXES RELIGIOUS FIGURES SUCH AS ANGELS AND DEMONS WITH GENERAL LIFE ON EARTH.

What’s New About the Story

The fantasy world created around religious figures, but it lacks some more narrative development, as do some of the characters.

Lead Characters

Ben is a courageous, altruistic person, that is genuinely good and reliable despite his impulsive behavior.

Uniqueness of Story

Not really, at least not as it is. The story does still feel a little raw and would have to go through some changes for an adaptation to be successful.

Possible Formats

Film - Studio, Film - Streaming, TV Series - Cable, TV Series - Streaming

Analyst Recommendation

CONSIDER

Justification

Because the main story has very interesting elements. However, the book lacks revision and still contains too many English mistakes that would need correction. Furthermore, even though the action is well thought, the narrative could use some more detailed descriptions about places, entities and realms, since some of them are absolutely new to the readers. Even though this is the second book in the series, and the first one probably provided more information about such things, it is always important to give as much detail as possible in a fantastic narrative like this, since the reader needs to get acquainted with a lot of non-existent elements and has to be completely invested in this new world you are creating here.