Herobrine is Watching: The New Adventures of Adam and Marky Episode I

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ACTION ADVENTURE CHILDREN'S FANTASY FAMILY

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Stu Cork

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Adam and Marky discover Herobrine is building an army of darkness. They are all that stand between saving the world and Herobrine's desire for conquest. An action and Adventure story for kids which features zombies, colorful characters, and the most popular fan-made villain in video game history!

Genre

Action,Adventure,Children's,Fantasy,Family

Short Summary

Adam and his best friend, Marky, explore a spooky abandoned factory on their way home. Adam is eager to go home so he can do his homework, Marky is too curious to be contained. Adam works up the courage to investigate the building, and they are shocked to discover a high-tech doomsday device!


Adam and Marky, do the right thing, decide to destroy the creepy building, along with Herobrine and all his monsters inside. Despite all the obstacles in their way and being TOTALLY freaked out–the boys team up and think of a way to use their mistakes and save the world from domination.

Setting

Minecraft-inspired world

Based on a True Story

No

Plot - Premise

Overcoming Monster/Villain

Plot - Other Elements

Happy Ending

Mature Audience Themes

Information not completed

Main Character Details

Name: Adam

Age: 12

Gender: Male

Role: Sidekick

Key Traits: Faithful,Clumsy,Insecure

Additional Character Details

Name: Marky

Age: 14

Gender: Male

Role: Protagonist

Key Traits: Adventurous,Confident,Heroic

Additional Character Details

Name: Herobrine

Age: 21

Gender: Male

Role: antagonist

Key Traits: Criminal,Greedy,Villainous,Narcisstic,Power Hungry

Additional Character Details

Name: Zombie

Age: 21

Gender: Other

Role: antagonist

Key Traits: Villainous,Crazy

Development Pitch

Our most popular short film titled Herobrine is Watching was just recently published as a hard cover book. Although we have not spent any advertising dollars to market and promote the book it has already garnered some fantastic reviews on Goodreads: “The story is educational & with a clear message of bravery, while warning against taking unreasonable risks in life, especially when young.” “Stu Cork is a good story-teller. In Herobrine is Watching, he tickles the young readers' mind. The plot allows them to imagine how the machines work to produce those creepy creatures. The book is also well illustrated. Its big and colorful pictures will surely keep the young reader’s eyes glued on the pages until the end.” “Fast-paced with great illustrations and graphic art, plus lovely titles and varied texts.” “A great children's book about teamwork! What I loved the most are the illustrations that reminded me of the old Atari games. The idea itself was new and innovative. I also like the fact that the boys had to think about how to use the things surrounding them to defeat the army of zombies. Overall, it was a great read, and I'd definitely recommend it.” So moving forward we are now looking to expand the Adam and Marky universe into a full blown animated series either live action blended with animation or a fully animated movie. We visualize a seamless transformation from the current short films to a high level action adventure series.

About The Author

Stu Cork writes, edits, and produces an animated series of short, Minecraft-themed videos using the Adam and Marky characters. He and his wife, Susan, have also published journals, coloring books, calendars, and notebooks. They live with their sons, Andrew and Bradley, in Markham, Ontario.

Target Audiences

Age: 7-12

Target Gender: Male Leaning

Group Specific

Information not completed

Publishing Details

Status: Yes: with a Publisher

Publisher: FriesenPress, Inc.

Year Published: 2020

Hard Copy Available

Yes

ISBN

1525574841

Genre

ACTION, FANTASY

Brief

Adam and Martin are best friends with very different personalities. When Martin suggests they explore an old factory on the way home, he has no idea the two of them are about to discover Herobrine's high tech zombie factory. As Adam gets the two of them out of trouble, they end up exploding the big doomsday machine and saving the world from a zombie disaster.

Overall Rating

GOOD

Point of View

THIRD PERSON

Narrative Elements

Authors Writing Style: GOOD

Characterization: EXCELLENT

Commerciality: GOOD

Franchise Potential: GOOD

Pace: GOOD

Premise: GOOD

Structure: GOOD

Theme: GOOD

Accuracy of Book Profile

Book Profile reflects book accurately.

Draw of Story

The most enticing thing about the story is the retro-video game aesthetics on illustrations.

Possible Drawbacks

Nothing made me want to put the book down, it is fun and easy to read.

Use of Special Effects

THE STORY RELIES HEAVILY ON SPECIAL EFFECTS

Primary Hook of Story

If adapted, this story would be interesting as it shows a broader message about the balance between bravery and caution. Also, kids would love the surprise of finding out, along with Adam & Martin, a high-tech and modern zombie factory.

Fanbase Potential

If adapted and developed into more detail it could have a large fanbase as the two characters bring along the interesting format of two friends with opposite personalities that end up balancing each other.

Awards Potential

It has animation awards potential if nicely adapted.

Envisioned Budget

MEDIUM BUDGET

Similar Films/TV Series

BEN10

What’s New About the Story

The most original thing about the story is the cool retro game vibe of illustrations and Herobrine's high tech zombie factory the duo of friends discover.

Lead Characters

The difference between the two characters is stated in the beginning of the story and it is clear how Martin is seen as a troublemaker; however, it is clear that without his audacity there would be no adventure. But it is also clear that without Adam's caution they wouldn't have escaped - so they make up for the perfect duo of friends and bring an interesting point of view in order teach kids about balance and risk measuring.

Uniqueness of Story

It is a creative and fun small story with a cool message and characters are highly appealing for kids; it sure can be developed into more adventures.

Possible Formats

TV Series - Streaming, TV Series - Cable, TV Series - Limited Run / Mini-Series, TV Series - Network, Film - Streaming

Analyst Recommendation

CONSIDER

Justification

This a very fun and well tied story and the friendship between the two characters is promising. It is a cool format to develop many other adventures.