Drop of Water: A Fantasy Adventure—Quest of the Guardians Episode Two

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ACTION ADVENTURE DRAMA EPIC FANTASY MYSTERY SCI-FI OTHER YOUNG ADULT

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S.R. Olson

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Logline

Continue the Quest in the realm of water where our heroes battle the monsters of the deep alongside some unexpected allies...and encounter a beast with glass hair.

Genre

Action,Adventure,Drama,Epic,Fantasy,Mystery,Sci-fi,Other,Young Adult

Short Summary

The story opens with a funeral for Malakai's mother who was killed in Ep. One when their village was massacred. There's rotting bodies lying everywhere between burned buildings. Afterwards, the heroes fly away aboard giant bats to continue their quest.


Having over-extended himself using the magic, Jakin has fallen into a coma he doesn't appear to be coming out of soon. The clock is ticking, so Malakai decides to continue the quest without him, against the advice of his uncle.

Setting

Fictional planet of Daxxon

Based on a True Story

No

Plot - Premise

Overcoming Monster/Villain,Quest,Other,Internal Journey/Rebirth

Plot - Other Elements

Coming of Age,Meaningful Message,Philosophical Questions,Twist,Other

Mature Audience Themes

Information not completed

Main Character Details

Name: Jakin Daxx

Age: 35

Gender: Male

Role: Mentor

Key Traits: Adventurous,Aspiring,Badass,Charming,Complex,Confident,Decisive,Empathetic,Engaging,Gracious,Heroic,Honorable,Leader,Masculine,Skillful,Strong Moral Code

Additional Character Details

Name: Malakai Jenks

Age: 15

Gender: Male

Role: Protagonist

Key Traits: Adventurous,Aspiring,Clumsy,Complex,Empathetic,Engaging,Faithful,Gracious,Honorable,Insecure,Naive,Masculine,Modest,Obedient,Selfless,Romantic,Strong Moral Code

Additional Character Details

Name: King Faeran

Age: 333

Gender: Male

Role: antagonist

Key Traits: Aggressive,Charming,Complex,Confident,Crazy,Criminal,Decisive,Leader,Masculine,Villainous,Narcisstic,Power Hungry,Skillful,Sarcastic,Secretive,Manipulative,Unapologetic

Additional Character Details

Name: Gabriella Wind-Star

Age: 15

Gender: Female

Role: sidekick

Key Traits: Adventurous,Charming,Complex,Decisive,Empathetic,Engaging,Faithful,Gracious,Heroic,Educated,Honorable,Insecure,Modest,Obedient,Sexy,Selfless,Skillful,Romantic,Strong Moral Code

Development Pitch

The Quest of the Guardians is a natural for adaptation to film. Each episode completes one part of the journey while providing a trail of clues that will lead viewers to the 4th and final episode. Each book has a story capable of standing alone as one film in a series, but they could be adapted into 2 long films or a TV series, too. The over-arching conflict is that the planet will be destroyed if the characters fail in their quest, but they must grow and evolve along the way to even understand what needs to be done, because their initial beliefs lack the insights that they must discover—which is that they cannot do it alone and need to unite all the peoples of their world to generate the needed power to stop the catastrophe. The MCs and their friends travel through four elemental realms, each with its own distinct culture that represent different cross-sections of society: the workers, the hippies, the intellectuals, and the red-necks. Each with their own world-views and ideas about how things should be. The MCs encounter friends and foes while battling bizarre creatures, discovering clues, solving riddles, and racing against the alignment of three moons. Only to discover in the end, that it wasn’t enough. That they need all the different cultures to stop fighting and come together as one...which requires their willingness to make that choice. Drop of Water is second in the series. Dust of Earth & Gust of Wind are also available on TaleFlick. Spark of Fire is being written.

About The Author

S.R. Olson lives in rural Minnesota with her two dogs. She's worn many hats from horse trainer to wedding photographer to truck driver and snow-plow operator. But writing has always been her first love. She applies a lifetime of varied experiences to crafting stories filled with adventure, imagination, and philosophical insights.

Target Audiences

Age: 13-17,18-34,35-54,55+

Target Gender: Universal

Group Specific

Information not completed

Publishing Details

Status: Yes: self-published

Publisher: Self-published

Year Published: 2017

Hard Copy Available

Yes

ISBN

9781976084928

Genre

ACTION, FANTASY, DRAMA

Brief

The story continues following Malakai and King Jakin as they try to recollect the lost magic, and take back the kingdom. They sail to new lands to encounter new people and new creatures while trying to find the long lost magic. King Faeran's 300 year existence is coming to an end as King Jakin reunites with the Tra'hez and begins using it again.

Overall Rating

GOOD

Point of View

THIRD PERSON

Narrative Elements

Authors Writing Style: FAIR

Characterization: FAIR

Commerciality: EXCELLENT

Franchise Potential: EXCELLENT

Pace: GOOD

Premise: GOOD

Structure: GOOD

Theme: GOOD

Accuracy of Book Profile

The Book Profile does reflect the book.

Draw of Story

The story is the second part of a story, and it previously ended with a village being massacred. It picks up where the first part left off, and dives into a different world with new and exciting people and creatures.

Possible Drawbacks

A lot of what happens in this story feels very drawn out. Most of it is about the characters journey to find the magical elements they need to bring down King Faeran. They spend the whole story with that singular goal, which doesn't really evolve.

Use of Special Effects

THE STORY RELIES HEAVILY ON SPECIAL EFFECTS

Primary Hook of Story

The hook for this book is that it is a sequel and that it shows magical worlds outside of the first book. This movie would attract audiences because of the new creatures, the underwater world, the sky city, and the overall magic that is shown.

Fanbase Potential

This could have a large fanbase because this would be the second part of a multiple part story and would have an established fanbase.

Awards Potential

I do not see this having awards potential. This story does not have much depth. The characters are one dimensional.

Envisioned Budget

LARGE BUDGET

Similar Films/TV Series

THE LETTER FOR THE KING, MAZE RUNNER

What’s New About the Story

The story is original in its world building. It has massive sea creatures, webbed and gilled humans, cities in the sky protected by magic. At the core, this is a quest adventure and it holds true to that formula.

Lead Characters

There is nothing about the lead characters that stand out. Malakai is a young man who is thrown into an adventure to help King Jakin. He is a teenager, needing guidance and assurance about his next steps. He also deals with typical teenage problems, like crushes. There is not much about him besides that.

Uniqueness of Story

This is an above average story, as it takes the first part of the story and elevates it slightly. As a sequel and stepping stone to the third and final part, it works.

Possible Formats

Film - Streaming, TV Series - Limited Run / Mini-Series, TV Series - Streaming

Analyst Recommendation

CONSIDER

Justification

This is a consider rather than a “recommend” because it isn't unique, and as a young adult genre story, it doesn't offer a great deal of drama and depth that a period drama could. It’s still a good story, though.