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Robert Alcock rayrobking@outlook.com 4482865201306

FANTASY CHILDREN'S

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Robert Alcock

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Logline

The story is about kindness, gratitude, and moral character where if some efforts are made, miracles still happens. It takes on multiple situations which lead to dreams to come true. In addition, it's also about where even some fairy tales can happen.

Genre

Fantasy,Children's

Short Summary

The story start of with children doing what they like to do. The element that keeps the story going is when good deeds can lead to great rewards.


The end of the story shows kindness is the key for great rewards.

Setting

Village, Farm, Palace, Zoo, School

Based on a True Story

No

Plot - Premise

Other

Plot - Other Elements

Happy Ending,Meaningful Message

Mature Audience Themes

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Main Character Details

Name: Different Main Characters

Age: 7

Gender: Other

Role: Protagonist

Key Traits: Selfless

Additional Character Details

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Development Pitch

I can see this as a movie for children's. I would like to see it done so that kids can enjoy the movie and grow up learning good deeds can lead to a positive life.

About The Author

Target Audiences

Age: 7-12,6 and under

Target Gender: Universal

Group Specific

Information not completed

Publishing Details

Status: Yes: self-published

Publisher: OUTSKIRTS PRESS

Year Published: 2020

Hard Copy Available

No

ISBN

978-1-9772-0595-7

Genre

FANTASY

Brief

A compilation of short children stories that intends to emphasize notions such as the importance of kindness, hard work and patience for little kids.

Overall Rating

FAIR

Point of View

THIRD PERSON

Narrative Elements

Authors Writing Style: FAIR

Characterization: FAIR

Commerciality: GOOD

Franchise Potential: FAIR

Pace: FAIR

Premise: GOOD

Structure: FAIR

Theme: FAIR

Accuracy of Book Profile

Yes, it is accurate.

Draw of Story

The idea of very short children fantastic tales aiming to fortify important concepts for kids from very early in their lives.

Possible Drawbacks

Most of the stories are too short and could be a bit better developed so the payoff would also be more impactful in general.

Use of Special Effects

THE STORY RELIES A LITTLE BIT ON SPECIAL EFFECTS

Primary Hook of Story

It is a simple concept that could however be very interesting for small kids, especially because it brings up colorful characters and narratives to attract and retain their attention.

Fanbase Potential

If adapted into a series or TV show, with a different story at every chapter, it could become a favorite for many young kids.

Awards Potential

Only considering awards for children fiction, but there would have to be some revision to the stories, since they are presently a bit too simplistic.

Envisioned Budget

LOW BUDGET

Similar Films/TV Series

SESAME STREET - ONE OF THE MOST BELOVED CHILDREN TV SHOWS IN HISTORY, WHICH ALSO HELPS KIDS TO DEAL WITH THEIR EMOTIONS AND TEACHES THEM IMPORTANT LESSONS ABOUT LIFE AND KINDNESS. ASK THE STORYBOTS - A COLORFUL KIDS SHOW WITH A STRONG PEDAGOGICAL VEIN

What’s New About the Story

The most original aspect of the stories included in the book is the way they try to show kids through narrative that money isn't the most important thing in the world and how good deeds, kindness, hard work and patience can lead to success and a great payoff. However, the stories could be further developed and told in a less generic way so the book would become more memorable.

Lead Characters

They are mostly selfless, kind-hearted and well-intentioned people, who end up learning an important lesson about life.

Uniqueness of Story

Not really a rare gem. The way it is now, it is too similar to other children-oriented efforts. In order to be improved, the stories should be imbued with more personality and gravitas.

Possible Formats

TV Series - Cable, TV Series - Streaming

Analyst Recommendation

WORK IN PROGRESS

Justification

While the story has many positive points, it has room for improvement (see possible paths below). If you can't change the story at this point, my suggestion is using your notes as a guide to highlight the best aspects of it when taking the next steps, either putting a pitch page together, a treatment, or a presentation.

Tips for Improvement

The stories need to be more remarkable. In order to do that, they would probably have to be bigger, further developed and have more detailed occurrences. The characters themselves are mostly blank spaces and would hardly connect with the audiences with no more development than they have earned so far. Even in short narratives, characters need to be charismatic and the main actions engaging from start to finish. Otherwise, you may lose your audience very quickly. As it is now, there is not even enough material for an adaptation longer than 2 or 3 minutes per chapter. So, maybe using and working on the premises already established for each narrative, further expanding them to more suitable dimensions would make it closer to a successful adaptation. And, furthermore, this would also allow for more interesting and unique elements to be added to the stories, making them richer and more engaging.