Operation Mom - How I got my mother a life and a man

Reenita Malhotra Hora

Book Cover

GENRE

YOUNG ADULT ROMANCE FUNNY MELODRAMA COMEDY FAMILY ACTION CRIME

    Core Theme

    MOTHER-DAUGHTER RELATIONSHIP, TEEN IDENTITY DEVELOPMENT, FRIENDSHIP

    TIME PERIOD

    Contemporary

    COMPARABLE TITLES

    SET IT UP, BECAUSE I SAID SO, GILMORE GIRLS

    CHARACTER LIST

    ILA ISHAM. 17. SARCASTIC, FUNNY, SMART.

    DEEPALI. 17. ILA'S BEST FRIEND. SMART, DIVA GIRL TYPE, POPULAR.

    DEV. 17. ILA'S CRUSH AND DEEPALI'S BOYFRIEND. SMART, GOOD-LOOKING GUY.

    VEENA ISHAM. 45.ILA'S MOM. JOURNALIST, ALWAYS WATCHING ILA'S STEPS.

    AUNTY MALEEKA. 40S. VEENA’S BEST FRIEND. BOLD, DARING, FUNNY.

    POPS. 40S. ILA’S FATHER. FUNNY, EASY-GOING.

    Logline

    Ila, a Mumbai-based young adult is going nuts with her controlling, single mother who prevents her from stalking her pop idol. Mom wants her daughter to date real guys in a lead up to finding a husband. But Ila decides that the only way to get Mom off her back is by finding her a boyfriend instead.

    Target Audiences

    Age: 13-17,18-34,35-54,55+

    Target Gender: Female Leaning

    Setting

    Main story: contemporary Mumbai + possibly flashback scene to London in the 1980s; (subsequent books/shows/films in the series - Los Angeles)

    Based on a True Story

    No

    Publishing Details

    Status: Yes: with a Publisher

    Publisher: Harper Collins India

    Year Published: 2015

    Starting Description

    Seventeen-year-old Ila Isham's obsessive Mom needs a life. Her floozy BFF Deepali, opines that the only way to do this is to set Mom up (unbeknownst to her) on a blind date through the dating apps. This becomes Ila and Deepali's new summer project which the girls rightfully call ‘Operation Mom!’

    Ending Description

    Mom’s big blind date with the handlebar-mustached Colonel Jhunjhunvala, crescendoes into complete chaos with Mom flipping out and sending the unknowing Colonel Jhunjhunvala after Aunty Maleeka to woo her, instead of having dinner with him herself!

    Group Specific

    This is a situational comedy about life in contemporary India detailed for international audiences interested in diverse/South Asian narratives.

    Hard Copy Available

    Yes

    ISBN

    ISBN-10 ‏ : ‎ 9350297272 ISBN-13 ‏ : ‎ 978-9350297278

    Mature Audience Themes

    Information not completed

    Plot - Other Elements

    Happy Ending,Twist

    Plot - Premise

    Rebellion Against 'The One',Other

    Main Character Details

    Name: Ila

    Age: 17

    Gender: Other

    Role: Protagonist

    Key Traits: Adventurous,Badass,Confident,Crazy,Engaging,Educated,Insecure,Naive,Underdog,Modest,Blunt,Selfless,Outspoken,Funny,Romantic,Strong Moral Code,Clumsy,Gracious,Flexible,Faithful

    Additional Character Details

    Name: Deepali

    Age: 17

    Gender: Female

    Role: Mentor

    Key Traits: Adventurous,Aspiring,Badass,Charming,Complex,Confident,Crazy,Engaging,Faithful,Educated,Leader,Selfless,Outspoken,Skillful,Funny,Visionary,Seductive,Sophisticated,Sexy,Modest,Decisive,Blunt

    Additional Character Details

    Name: Veena (Mom)

    Age: 47

    Gender: Female

    Role: antagonist

    Key Traits: Aspiring,Adventurous,Badass,Complex,Confident,Engaging,Educated,Leader,Modest,Blunt,Outspoken,Funny,Skillful,Visionary,Strong Moral Code,Charming,Decisive,Unapologetic

    Additional Character Details

    Name: Aunty Maleeka

    Age: 47

    Gender: Female

    Role: sidekick

    Key Traits: Adventurous,Charming,Clumsy,Crazy,Engaging,Faithful,Flexible,Gracious,Greedy,Obedient,Sexy,Selfless,Outspoken,Funny,Seductive,Unapologetic

    Genre

    COMEDY, ACTION, ROMANCE

    Brief

    Ila, a Mumbai-based teenager, is going nuts with Veena, her controlling, single mother who prevents her from stalking her pop idol, Ali Zafar. Veena wants her daughter to date real guys in the lead-up to finding a husband. But Ila decides that the only way to get her mom off her back is by finding her a boyfriend instead. With the help of her best friend Deepali, her crush Dev and her mother’s best friend Maleeka, they will come up with a plan to make it happen by setting up Veena's profile in dating apps.

    Overall Rating

    EXCELLENT

    Point of View

    FIRST PERSON

    Narrative Elements

    Authors Writing Style: EXCELLENT

    Characterization: EXCELLENT

    Commerciality: GOOD

    Franchise Potential: EXCELLENT

    Pace: GOOD

    Premise: EXCELLENT

    Structure: EXCELLENT

    Theme: EXCELLENT

    Accuracy of Book Profile

    Yes, it is accurate.

    Draw of Story

    The narrative is funny and engaging, full of witty remarks. It’s set in contemporary India and features a wide range of ethnicities spread throughout Mumbai and natural integration of technology and pop culture references. It’s fascinating to learn more about Mumbai and its people while still subverting some traditional conventions.

    Possible Drawbacks

    Despite the narrative taking place in India being fascinating, there were many words and terms in Hindi lacking explanation, making it a challenge to grasp. The audience can use context to understand what they mean, but since it is never completely clear, it sometimes makes it confusing. Including some examples in action or even a glossary might be helpful.

    Use of Special Effects

    THE STORY DOES NOT RELY ON SPECIAL EFFECTS

    Primary Hook of Story

    Operation Mom is aimed at encouraging young people to think about their mother's life after they are born. The story offers an insightful look at the mother-daughter relationship, and particularly the transformation mothers must undergo as they raise their children in the right way. It's a humorous fiction young adult story filled with twists and clever lines that will keep the audience entertained.

    Fanbase Potential

    It has the potential of attracting a large following due to its fascinating and unique characters. The story is engaging, funny, witty, and definitely appealing to young adults.

    Awards Potential

    This is an engaging narrative with great potential for drawing the attention of the Awards that exposes the audience to a variety of ethnic situations happening around Mumbai, making it a great candidate for International Feature Film or Foreign Movie. It’s also interesting watching how the Indian and Western cultures blend together.

    Envisioned Budget

    MEDIUM BUDGET

    Similar Films/TV Series

    SET IT UP, BECAUSE I SAID SO, GILMORE GIRLS

    What’s New About the Story

    Operation Mom is unique in the way that it encourages young people to think about their parent's life as a person and promotes the delicate balance of raising a kid with the traditional values in the modern world. In addition, it draws parallels with the Indian and Western cultures merging while adding pop culture references.

    Lead Characters

    The characters are captivating and memorable, each with their own personality and as real as those around us. Veena and Ila's dialogues are brilliant and witty, filled with sarcasm as they always are. Deepali gives the story energy whenever it starts falling down. Aunty Maleeka is another interesting character that keeps the narrative alive, bringing in wild ideas to create a chaotic scene.

    Uniqueness of Story

    Operation Mom is a humorous fiction young adult story filled with twists and clever lines that will keep the audience entertained. The plot of a girl trying to redirect her overly involved mom’s focus, just so she can stalk her pop idol, makes for an amusing storyline, along with the presence of fascinating characters. This narrative is also full of witty remarks. It’s set in contemporary India and features diverse ethnicities spread throughout Mumbai and natural integration of technology and pop culture references.

    Possible Formats

    Film: Studio, Indie, Streaming TV Series: Network, Cable, Limited Run / Mini-Series, Streaming

    Analyst Recommendation

    RECOMMEND

    Justification

    Operation Mom is unique in the way that it explores essential topics such as the relationship between parents and children while using humor to do so. It also highlights the diversity of their characterization and localization, featuring a wide range of ethnicity. The story has the potential to become a great TV show or rom-com movie.

    Brief

    Ila, a Mumbai-based teenager, is going nuts with Veena, her controlling, single mother who prevents her from stalking her pop idol, Ali Zafar. Veena wants her daughter to date real guys in the lead-up to finding a husband. But Ila decides that the only way to get her mom off her back is by finding her a boyfriend instead. With the help of her best friend Deepali, her crush Dev and her mother’s best friend Maleeka, they will come up with a plan to make it happen by setting up a profile in dating apps.

    What We Liked

    Operation Mom is a humorous fiction young adult story filled with twists and clever lines that will keep the audience entertained. The plot of a girl trying to redirect her overly involved mom’s focus, just so she can stalk her pop idol, makes for an amusing storyline, along with the presence of fascinating characters. This narrative is also full of witty remarks. It’s set in contemporary India and features a wide range of ethnicities spread throughout Mumbai and natural integration of technology and pop culture references.

    Film: Operation Mom would also make a great rom-com about Ila’s journey to find her mom a date along with the mother-daughter relationship. It’s also a compelling visual story that takes place in Mumbai with local descriptions, exploring the beating heart of the town, as well as portraying its people with authenticity while still subverting some traditional conventions.

    TV: Operation Mom would make a great TV show. The mother-daughter relationship story has elements of comedy, romance, suspense, and puzzles. As you gradually get involved in the story, it will raise many questions: Will Ila be able to find the right match for her mom? Is her mother going to accept her plan? How does Ila’s idea spice up her own life? Ila connects with several characters trying to set a date for her mom; her journey can be divided into several episodes that explore different aspects of each character.

    Key points:
    Strong female characters.
    Witty dialogue.
    Unnatural theme.
    Plot twist.
    International feature production.

    Synopsis

    Ila is a 17-year-old girl who's obsessed with Ali Zafar, a teen pop idol. The only thing she wants is to be able to track him down without her mother, Veena, constantly bugging her about it. So Deepali, Ila's best friend, suggested that Ila tries to find a life and a man for her mother, a freelance journalist who was always working.

    They would arrange several dates for her without her being aware, setting up her profile on different dating apps. Due to Veena's lack of sex appeal, they are worried that nobody would be interested in her, so they would need Dev, one of Deepali's three boyfriends and Ila's secret crush, to help them with his writing skills.

    Dev helped Ila set up Veena's profile on all the four major dating apps under the name Venus. It was when Deepali told Ila that she was dumping Dev because he was a perfectly good guy. Too good for her that every time he was around, she delved into a huge inferiority complex. It was just an excuse since she knew that Ila was in love with him and Dev was also interested in her.

    Working in the apps, Ila came across different profiles, and some of them they chose to scope out. Most of them were weird, creepy, or had some red flags. At the same time, as Ila was going more into researching a man for her mom and being closer to Dev, she realized she was barely thinking about Ali Zafar anymore.

    It was when they decided to arrange a blind date with one of the men from the apps, named Colonel Jhunjuhnvala. With the help of Aunty Maleeka, Veena's best friend, they planned to tell Veena that Maleeka was going on this date, but she wanted Veena to be there to make her feel comfortable. The only way to make Veena going with her was to invite Ila's father, to who Veena was separated and had a great relationship. They would have a double date, but Veena had no idea it would be her meeting Colonel Jhunjuhnvala. On the day, a confusing situation was installed, and in the end, Veena took the initiative to introduce Colonel Jhunjuhnvala to Aunty Maleeka, saying that she was actually his blind date.

    Ila thought that Veena was mad with her for planning a date without her consent, but as a writer, Veena believed that the story would make an excellent screenplay. In the end, Veena said she was going to lose weight, enrolling in the flamenco class. And the presence of Pops (Ila's father) in her life was already enough. It was clear to Ila: Veena already had a life and a man. It was time to pivot from Operation Mom to Operation Dev.

    About The Author

    Reenita Malhotra Hora is a journalist, native of Mumbai, and currently based in Hong Kong, where she presents Radio Television Hong Kong’s award-winning storytelling show, ‘Asian Threads.’ Reenita has authored seven books (on health, personal finance, and fiction) and has multiple years of experience in the USA and Asia media, entertainment, communications, tech/innovation, and wellness industries.