EROTICA ROMANCE COMEDY BIOGRAPHICAL FUNNY DRAMA MEMOIR
After 25 years of dedication to one another, a 42 year old fun, sexy couple embark on sexual experimentation involving strippers, three ways, and lovers on the side. The empowerment that she envisions from having affairs with a variety of attractive younger men does not come without complications.
The first chapter of my true story erotic romance delves into how I became a hotwife (a married woman who is permitted lovers), a journey from monogamy to polyamory.The beginning of the 1st book starts with a married woman's 1st date with a handsome man, 12 years her junior. It goes well.
Complications happen with lovers, such as falling inlove with another man while still being in love with her husband. She expresses the joy in the adventures she experience, the people she's met and the friendship and love that have come into her life with her new lifestyle.
Based on a True Story
Plot - Premise
Plot - Other Elements
Mature Audience Themes
Main Character Details
Name: Juliet (myself)
Key Traits: Adventurous,Badass,Charming,Clumsy,Confident,Crazy,Desperate,Engaging,Faithful,Heartthrob,Educated,Insecure,Seductive,Sarcastic,Romantic,Funny,Outspoken,Sexy
Additional Character Details
Key Traits: Adventurous,Aspiring,Badass,Sexy,Confident,Skillful,Romantic,Seductive,Honorable
Additional Character Details
Key Traits: Charming,Complex,Confident,Crazy,Criminal,Masculine,Narcisstic,Sexy,Romantic,Seductive,Heartthrob
Additional Character Details
Key Traits: Adventurous,Charming,Sexy,Romantic,Heartthrob,Aspiring,Badass,Empathetic,Engaging,Sarcastic,Educated
I think that my true story erotic romance would make a great movie or series due to the honesty of the story. It documents the real life ups and downs of a polyamorous lifestyle. I also write a blog that I think would make a good series as they are ususally different dates and encounters I have had, much like my book. Dates would make great individual episodes of a series with myself and my husband maintaining a happy, normal home life with a lot of sexual adventures on the side. Some of the situations that I get into are ultra sexy, other times kind of sad but usually quite funny.
Juliet and her husband have been together for 25 years. They share a happy life and a healthy and exciting sex life. Together, they decide to experiment with threesomes which leads Juliet into the world of being a "hot wife". Juliet is able to have sex with other men, arousing her husband while maintaining a healthy marriage.
Authors Writing Style: GOOD
Franchise Potential: GOOD
Accuracy of Book Profile
Yes, the book profile accurately reflects the book.
Draw of Story
The story deals with two, consenting married people who decided they want to try something new, sexually. They are not unhappy and looking for a way to spice up their lives. They love each other and want to continue to be together while opening up the bedroom to others.
The book focuses mostly on Juliet which comes across as one-sided. Her husband is involved but would have been interesting to hear his side especially since they were married. This didn't make me want to put the book down but made me curious.
Use of Special Effects
THE STORY DOES NOT RELY ON SPECIAL EFFECTS
Primary Hook of Story
The hook is that Juliet decides to become a "hot wife". She is able to sleep with different men as long as she comes and tells her husband every detail. He must "reclaim" her as his wife, sexually.
I do not believe this will have a large fanbase because it is very explicit. The audience might not be understanding of the story even though it is an agreed upon situation between the couple.
I do see this having awards potential. It is a non-judgement and insightful look at this sexual expressive world. Juliet has different experiences with each man and in her relationship with her husband. It's an exploration of women and their sexual desires and nature at a slightly older age than audiences are used to. Juliet tried to have sexual relations like a man but realizes that she isn't; she is a woman and experiencing the experiment as a woman.
Similar Films/TV Series
FIFTY SHADES OF GREY, UNFAITHFUL
What’s New About the Story
The story is original because there is little drama in a story about a married women having sex with other men. Her husband is fully knowledgeable and participates in her escapades. He is also not sleeping with other women. This is about Juliet and her sexual experimentation and happiness.
The lead character is adventurous, interesting, honest, loving and vulnerable. She embarks on a journey and is unapologetic about it. Juliet is supported by her husband and he is a component of the experiment. Juliet is the average women opening herself to new experiences in a very authentic way.
Uniqueness of Story
This is a rare gem. The story is not very different from other stories of women and their sexual escapades. It is interesting to see the added element of her loving husband and them being in an honest, open and trusting relationship. She is safely able to be free and open with other men. It is also insight into women and experiences in later chapters of their lives. Juliet speaks about how much she has learned about herself from her interactions with some of the men.
Film - Indie, Film - Streaming, TV Series - Limited Run / Mini-Series, Unscripted
WORK IN PROGRESS
While the story has many positive points, it has room for improvement (see possible paths below). If you can't change the story at this point, my suggestion is using your notes as a guide to highlight the best aspects of it when taking the next steps, either putting a pitch page together, a treatment, or a presentation.
Tips for Improvement
This would be a recommend if there was more focus on Juliet and her husband's life as a whole. How does this experiment fit into their world? From reading, it looks like this is all they do. The story shows them having sex and Juliet have sex. It would be good to see this world within their external world. Also, there is very little conflict besides some of the feelings Juliet has about some of her lovers. A dive into that would enrich the story.