END OF CROWS: BOOK ONE
ACTION ADVENTURE EPIC FANTASY YOUNG ADULT SCI-FI WAR
Future
R.A. Lingenfelter
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Submision Type
book
Logline
The world was in chaos. Willow was raised as a member of the Crows; rebels who fought against the Dominion. But will the jealousy of those in her own faction threaten the very life she’s been groomed to live?
Genre
Action,Adventure,Epic,Fantasy,Young Adult,Sci-fi,War
Short Summary
Willow's family are preparing to escape the confines of the Dominion compound; the only home she's known. Their faction, named the Crows, are waiting for them in the safety of the Rocky Mountains. She's scared, wondering what her new life will be like and her position within the new community.
Setting
Colorado
Based on a True Story
No
Plot - Premise
Rebellion Against 'The One'
Plot - Other Elements
Coming of Age,Twist
Mature Audience Themes
Information not completed
Main Character Details
Name: Willow "Will" Danner
Age: 17
Gender: Female
Role: Protagonist
Key Traits: Naive,Insecure,Underdog,Faithful,Strong Moral Code,Selfless,Complex,Modest,Aspiring,Empathetic
Additional Character Details
Name: Finnian "Finn" Sennett
Age: 20
Gender: Male
Role: Mentor
Key Traits: Adventurous,Masculine,Badass,Aggressive,Charming,Complex,Confident,Sexy,Patriotic,Decisive,Blunt,Engaging,Outspoken,Skillful,Heartthrob,Heroic,Secretive,Honorable,Leader,Unapologetic,Lone Wolf
Additional Character Details
Name: Bradlee
Age: 20
Gender: Male
Role: antagonist
Key Traits: Masculine,Villainous,Aggressive,Charming,Narcisstic,Criminal,Power Hungry,Skillful,Secretive
Additional Character Details
The author has not yet written this
Genre
ACTION, THRILLER, DRAMA, FANTASY
Brief
Willow and her family live in a DOminion city where they are watched constantly and have no choices. Her parents are secretly Crows, a resistance that lives freely in the mountains. The family escapes to rejoin there people and live amongst them. Willow discovers she has premonition powers and sees the destruction of the Crows by the Dominion.
Overall Rating
GOOD
Narrative Elements
Authors Writing Style: GOOD
Characterization: GOOD
Commerciality: GOOD
Franchise Potential: EXCELLENT
Pace: EXCELLENT
Premise: GOOD
Structure: GOOD
Theme: GOOD
Accuracy of Book Profile
The book profile does not accurately reflect the book. Willow was not born among the Crows. She lived in the Dominion city but was brought up on their values. Her family planned to escape for years but she is new to the world they live in. The profile mentions jealousy when it was closer to fear and disbelief. Willow can hear noises from further than anyone else and has premonitions about the Dominion coming to destroy the secret camp. No one believes her and act like she is crazy.
Draw of Story
The story is science fiction and begins with Willow explaining the structured world she lives in. There is no privacy, rigid rules and deadly punishments when stepping out of line. Everything in her world is regulated by the government. I was intrigued to read how the story unfolds.
Possible Drawbacks
The book is predictable. Willow discovers she has special powers passed down from her grandmother. No one around her believes it, attributing it to the unfamiliar territory or stress. She is proven right when her premonition comes true but not after lives are lost. It is similar to many different dystopian ,young adult stories.
Use of Special Effects
THE STORY DOES NOT RELY ON SPECIAL EFFECTS
Primary Hook of Story
The hook is that Willow and her family escape their rigid society to join the rebellion in the mountains. Willow realizes there are spies working with the enemy but no one believes her. Dystopian, young adult stories have been done a lot recently but can still be interesting. This has enough to draw people's attention and keep audiences entertained.
Fanbase Potential
This could have a large fanbase. There is a niche for these stories at the moment. It also combines different genres that can appeal to a wide audience. There is action, thrills, humor, romance and a coming of age story. There is also a strong female lead.
Awards Potential
This story does not have awards potential. While entertaining, it is not set apart from films of the same genre. The characterization is good but the focus is on the story.
Envisioned Budget
MEDIUM BUDGET
Similar Films/TV Series
DIVERGENT SERIES, FAST COLORS, IN TIME, THE MATRIX
What’s New About the Story
The story is original because Willow and her family don't need to see the light. They are aware of their lack of freedoms, but play by the rules until they can escape. They are Crows at heart. Also Williow has enhanced powers that are not a result of a drug or medical experiment.
Lead Characters
The lead character doesn't stand out. Willow is a teenage girl who discovers she has some heightened senses. She reacts normally to the situations and environment around her.
Uniqueness of Story
This is not a rare gem as it is similar to many dystopian films. It has enough differences to be entertaining.
Possible Formats
Film - Streaming, Film - Studio, Film - Indie, TV Series - Streaming
Analyst Recommendation
CONSIDER
Justification
The story is well rounded and well written. There are entertaining elements with their escape, integration into the Crows society and Willow learning that her father is working for the enemy. The world of the Dominion city and the Crow camp could be explored deeper. The juxtaposition of the two worlds will give a greater understanding of what the characters are fighting for and against.