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Ondre Tokai

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A psychopath gets on a reality tv show in hopes of escaping his dark past, but is only driven further to the brink until he cant stop the nothingface inside of him from taking control and satisfying his blood lust. He also gives the fans what they want by keeping the live feed going.



Short Summary

Intro chapter takes place after the tragedy. A live interview with the one survivor and then it goes into a flashback mode through the psychopaths eyes as he's being driven to the loft as the first chapter begins and the story unfolds from there.

The main character, Derek finally snaps and traps his roommates in the house while keeping the live feed going. He then stalks and kills them off in horrid fashion one by one. In the end he allows one man to escape, Noll, before he turns a gun on himself. It becomes the all-time # rated reality show


California mainly in the Los Angeles area.

Based on a True Story


Plot - Premise

Tragedy,Overcoming Monster/Villain,Other

Plot - Other Elements

Meaningful Message,Other

Mature Audience Themes

Extreme Violence,Nudity,Substance Abuse, Language/Profanity,Sexual Abuse

Main Character Details

Name: Derek Kingman

Age: 25 or 26

Gender: Male

Role: Antagonist

Key Traits: Masculine,Narcisstic,Villainous,Charming,Crazy,Confident,Leader,Funny,Outspoken,Secretive,Manipulative,Seductive,Unapologetic

Additional Character Details

Name: Noll Tatzaki

Age: 22

Gender: Male

Role: Sidekick

Key Traits: Obedient,Clumsy,Insecure,Educated,Underdog

Additional Character Details

Name: Kara

Age: 25

Gender: Female

Role: emotional

Key Traits: Adventurous,Aggressive,Sexy,Outspoken,Sarcastic,Unapologetic

Additional Character Details

Name: Nicollette

Age: 24

Gender: Female

Role: tempter

Key Traits: Adventurous,Badass,Aggressive,Charming,Sexy,Blunt,Engaging

Development Pitch

When an already mentally unstable man with a jaded past lies his way onto a pay cable reality show to escape the demon that haunts his dreams, he is pushed beyond the point of no return by his fellow roommates leading to a live feed mass execution that keeps the horrified, yet morbidly intrigued viewers glued to their seats. Filled with dark humor, sex, and depraved violence this story will captivate horror fans as well as reality tv fans even if it is more of a warning to those that watch other's lives instead of living their own. I believe it could make a great movie or mini-series. Potential for sequel since my novel ends with Noll murdering the host who interviewed him and escaping.

About The Author

Ondre Tokai was born in Connecticut in December of 1975, but was raised in the suburbs of New York and then in Colorado Springs when his family uprooted during his junior year of highschool. After working many retail and labor jobs he took a job as a disc jockey at a local night club where he met the mother of his daughter. Many of his experiences during this time have influenced his writing style. Other influences include 80's horror flicks and novels by authors including Thomas Harris, Bret Easton Ellis, Clive Barker, Chuck Palahniuk, Jeff Lindsay, Jim Carroll and of course Stephen King. He currently resides in Charleston, SC.

Target Audiences

Age: 18-34,35-54

Target Gender: Universal

Group Specific

Information not completed

Publishing Details

Status: Yes: self-published

Publisher: Xlibris

Year Published: 2012

Hard Copy Available