Shaking the Sleigh
GENRE
ROMANCE COMEDY
Core Theme
LOVE
TIME PERIOD
Contemporary
COMPARABLE TITLES
CHRISTMAS AT PEMBERLEY MANOR, A CHRISTMAS PRINCE
CHARACTER LIST
• APRIL: 30S. BEAUTIFUL, FEISTY, HOPEFUL
• CALLAN: 30S. GORGEOUS, BITTER, UNHAPPY, APRIL’S NEW BOYFRIEND
• CORMAC: 30S, DOWNTRODDEN, GRIEVING, DEVOTED FATHER, CALLAN’S BROTHER
• ANNABELLE: 50S, SWEET, OBSESSED WITH CHRISTMAS, OWNER OF THE TOWN’S INN, APRIL’S NEW FRIEND
• LYNN: 30S, UNDERSTANDING, TOLERANT, APRIL’S BEST FRIEND
• UNCLE ROB: 60S, JUDGMENTAL, UNFORGIVING, GLIB, APRIL’S UNCLE
• MADDIE & TAYLOR: 3 & 6, SWEET, DARLING, CALLAN’S NIECES
• LOTTIE & HELEN: 60S & 80S, TOWNIES, BAWDY, TOWNSPEOPLE WHO BEFRIEND APRIL AND CALLA
Logline
To save her career, a holiday-hating TV producer agrees to go to a Christmas-crazy small town to produce Holiday Homes for her network, but to succeed, she must convince a reclusive and grumpy ex-soccer star to allow the cameras into his life once again.
Target Audiences
Age: 35-54,18-34
Target Gender: Female Leaning
Setting
Small town Maryland
Based on a True Story
No
Publishing Details
Status: Yes: self-published
Publisher: Delancey Stewart / Nancy Smay
Year Published: 2019
Starting Description
April's a TV producer about to be out of a job after an indiscretion filming her last gig. Her network exec uncle gives her one last chance on Holiday Homes, but Christmas is April's least favorite holiday, thanks to her dad choosing that day to abandon his wife and kid.
Ending Description
Ex soccer star Callan Whitewood buys a home in a small town seeking privacy, but part of the contract was that it be featured on Holiday Homes. He is reluctant, but finally agrees to let the cameras (and the pretty producer, April) into his life.
Group Specific
Information not completed
Hard Copy Available
Yes
ISBN
Information not completed
Mature Audience Themes
Language/Profanity
Plot - Other Elements
Happy Ending
Plot - Premise
Internal Journey/Rebirth
Main Character Details
Name: April Hall
Age: 26
Gender: Female
Role: Protagonist
Key Traits: Adventurous,Charming,Confident,Insecure,Engaging,Desperate
Additional Character Details
Name: Callan Whitewood
Age: 30
Gender: Male
Role: Antagonist
Key Traits: Masculine,Sexy,Lone Wolf
Additional Character Details
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Additional Character Details
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Genre
ROMANCE
Brief
A television producer who hates Christmas tries to save her career by producing a Christmas show in a small town obsessed with Christmas. She needs the cooperation of a reclusive former soccer star. They end up falling in love, but when a devastating misunderstanding threatens to ruin everything, the entire town comes together to help save their relationship.
Overall Rating
GOOD
Narrative Elements
Authors Writing Style: GOOD
Characterization: GOOD
Commerciality: EXCELLENT
Franchise Potential: EXCELLENT
Pace: GOOD
Premise: GOOD
Structure: GOOD
Theme: EXCELLENT
Accuracy of Book Profile
The book profile is accurate.
Draw of Story
The festive Christmas theme grabs the reader immediately.
Possible Drawbacks
It is obvious how the story will end from early on, so it is a bit tiresome to wade through the excess to reach the inevitable. Maybe focusing on softening Callan's "Jekyll and Hyde" personality swings and shoring up the very long scene of his grand gesture to win back the girl would be ways to help the pace.
Use of Special Effects
THE STORY DOES NOT RELY ON SPECIAL EFFECTS
Primary Hook of Story
The romantic nature of the story set against the backdrop of Christmas splendor is a great way to hook an audience.
Fanbase Potential
This has broad appeal since it is a holiday themed movie. It is aimed at a largely female demographic, but would most likely be quite popular during the Christmas season.
Awards Potential
This would probably not be an Award winning project. It is an archetypical romance.
Envisioned Budget
MEDIUM BUDGET
Similar Films/TV Series
CHRISTMAS AT PEMBERLEY MANOR, A CHRISTMAS PRINCE
What’s New About the Story
The story is a chocked full of the trappings and tropes of a basic romance. It may not need to made more unique since it has everything expected in a holiday themed narrative.
Lead Characters
The soccer star grows the most by the end and stands out as having the best character arc.
Uniqueness of Story
This is a perfectly acceptable holiday themed romance. Tightening up the plot by removing or shortening some of the more derivative elements of the story would improve the pacing and make for a more engaging account.
Possible Formats
TV Series - Limited Run / Mini-Series
Analyst Recommendation
CONSIDER
Justification
Proceed with caution on this one since it is not really suited to become a feature film. However, it is most appropriate for a television movie that is tailor made to air on the Hallmark Channel at Christmas time.
Brief
A television producer who hates Christmas tries to save her career by producing a Christmas show in a small town obsessed with Christmas, but she needs the cooperation of a reclusive former soccer star. As she convinces him, they end up falling in love, but when a devastating misunderstanding threatens to ruin everything, the entire town comes together to help save their relationship.
What We Liked
- The Christmas theme has a lot of potential and is engaging for audiences. There is a lot of romance. The characters are young and attractive. It will most likely appeal to a largely female and older skewing audience.
- Film: A feature adaptation of the story could be a nice holiday offering. However, since it is formulaic, overly focused on Christmas and heavy on romantic tropes, it is really more suited as a made for television movie for a network like the Hallmark Channel.
- TV: April and Callan’s adventures in their new town could be adapted into a television movie or mini-series. It is overwhelmingly holiday focused, it would most likely be a seasonal television special or made for television movie.
- Key points: Strong female lead; Holiday themed; Romance; Female demographic; Franchise potential
Synopsis
In a last ditch effort to save her career as a television producer, April takes a job working on a Christmas themed home show in Maryland. She hates the holiday, but since her Uncle Rob is allowing her a chance to prove herself, she decides to take the job.
April arrives in the idyllic town and finds it decorated from top to bottom in festive holiday décor. Since it seems as if all the townspeople are obsessed with Christmas, she wants to do her job as quickly as possible and return to Los Angeles. However, she runs into a hiccup when Callan, the owner of the house that is supposed to be the focal point of the show, decides he doesn’t want to participate. He is a former soccer star who was forced to retire after a catastrophic ankle injury and as a result, he wants to remain out of the spotlight.
She has her work cut out for her to convince Callan to let her film in his house. As she works on persuading him, April and Callan start to fall in love with each other. He involves her in his family activities with his brother, Cormac, and his young nieces, Maddie and Taylor. Callan starts to get a new lease on life after meeting April and he decides to allow her to film in her house.
But a misunderstanding arises and Callan believes that April doesn’t really love him and that she was just using him to save her job. It looks as if April will have to return to Los Angeles with a broken heart. After some soul searching, Callan realizes that he can’t live without April in his life. He enlists the help of the entire town to perform a Christmas-themed grand gesture to win her back.
All is forgiven and April decides to stay in Maryland with Callan and all her new friends. A year passes and April and Callan get engaged at a Christmas party in front of their delighted family and friends.