Master of the Waterways...God of the Creeks
EPIC HISTORICAL FICTION SUSPENSE/THRILLER RELIGIOUS FAMILY ACTION ROMANCE
19th Century,Earlier 20th Century,1920s & '30s,1940s & '50s
Michael R Arnone
Logline
Historical narrative recounting the romance of the California Ranchos and the three generational story of the de Leon story. Focusing on Pablo, and his search for his legacy and his relations ships with his brother Vincenti and the woman that tore them apart, Annabella.
Genre
Epic,Historical Fiction,Suspense/Thriller,Religious,Family,Action,Romance
Short Summary
Discovery of the dead Patron encourages Pablo to reassert his identify as a de Leon. His historical narrative is told to faithful friends as they discover together the truth of his identity through the losses of loved ones by curses and witchcraft wielded by Annabella's alliance with the curandera.
The curses intended to destroy Pablo, befall Annabella and the curandera instead. And the rightful heir to Rancho Piedra Blanca is restored. With Pablo's death and entrance to a eternal reward, his faithful and the state are rewarded.
Setting
Central California, Rancho Piedra Blanca encompassing San Simeon
Based on a True Story
No
Plot - Premise
Internal Journey/Rebirth,Overcoming Monster/Villain,Quest
Plot - Other Elements
Happy Ending,Meaningful Message,Philosophical Questions
Mature Audience Themes
Sexual Abuse
Main Character Details
Name: Pablo
Age: From birth into his eighties
Gender: Male
Role: Protagonist
Key Traits: Masculine,Modest,Charming,Faithful,Heroic,Honorable,Underdog,Religious,Selfless,Skillful,Visionary,Romantic,Strong Moral Code
Additional Character Details
Name: Annabella
Age: from birth into her eighties
Gender: Female
Role: Antagonist
Key Traits: Aggressive,Complex,Decisive,Greedy,Leader,Villainous,Narcisstic,Sexy,Power Hungry,Outspoken,Skillful,Secretive,Seductive,Sophisticated,Manipulative,Unapologetic
Additional Character Details
Name: Josefina Espinoza
Age: ageless
Gender: Female
Role: tempter
Key Traits: Criminal,Greedy,Unapologetic,Seductive,Secretive,Skillful,Power Hungry,Villainous,Leader,Narcisstic,Manipulative,Lone Wolf
Additional Character Details
Name: Flores de Flores
Age: 20's through 60's
Gender: Male
Role: mentor
Key Traits: Skillful,Aspiring,Adventurous,Charming,Complex,Empathetic,Engaging,Faithful,Gracious,Heroic,Honorable,Masculine,Modest,Selfless,Visionary,Strong Moral Code
Development Pitch
I need help here...I will be happy to write something after consultation with you folks. Please help.
Genre
ROMANCE, DRAMA, POLITICS
Brief
Pablo DeLeon searches for love and legacy across multiple generations against the backdrop of a changing California.
Overall Rating
EXCELLENT
Narrative Elements
Authors Writing Style: GOOD
Characterization: EXCELLENT
Commerciality: GOOD
Franchise Potential: GOOD
Pace: EXCELLENT
Premise: EXCELLENT
Structure: GOOD
Theme: EXCELLENT
Accuracy of Book Profile
The profile does depict the book - however someone should copy edit it for grammatical errors; ex: "relations ships (sic) in the logline.
Draw of Story
There is action right from the start.
Possible Drawbacks
Not really - it moved along well.
Use of Special Effects
THE STORY DOES NOT RELY ON SPECIAL EFFECTS
Primary Hook of Story
Discover the evolving history of California's early years through an epic tale of family drama.
Fanbase Potential
It's not a genre piece that would have a built in audience but it could be the kind of film that generates a large "word-of-mouth" buzz.
Awards Potential
Yes - this is just the kind of epic that film critics love.
Envisioned Budget
LARGE BUDGET
Similar Films/TV Series
LONESOME DOVE, THERE WILL BE BLOOD, RIO LOBO
What’s New About the Story
This is a fresh perspective on the early days of California and the evolving ethnic and political landscape of the area.
Lead Characters
They are very believable.
Uniqueness of Story
This could be a rare gem. However, to make this work as a film it would require top dollar talent all the way across the board - the writers, directors and actors would have to be seasoned professionals. This would not succeed as a low budget indie film.
Possible Formats
Film - Streaming, Film - Studio, TV Series - Cable, TV Series - Network, TV Series - Limited Run / Mini-Series, TV Series - Streaming
Analyst Recommendation
CONSIDER
Justification
In terms of a tale that could garner serious awards buzz, this has all the main elements - conflict, discovery, betrayal and love. The fact that it is from a hispanic perspective makes it timely as well.