BEYOND
ADVENTURE YOUNG ADULT SCI-FI FANTASY ROMANCE
Contemporary
Maureen A. Miller
TaleFlick Pick!
Submision Type
book
Logline
Aimee Patterson walks into the woods on the other side of the pond and returns five years later with a tale she cannot share. Accidentally abducted by an alien spaceship, Aimee leaves North Carolina and travels to another galaxy where she encounters adventure, love, and danger.
Genre
Adventure,Young Adult,Sci-fi,Fantasy,Romance
Short Summary
Aimee Patterson is on her summer break before starting her first year of college. Walking the dog in the woods behind her house, she senses something hovering above the tree canopy. After passing out, she wakes in a strange room, staggered to see the planet Earth outside her window.
Setting
North Carolina, an intergalactic spaceship, other galaxies
Based on a True Story
No
Plot - Premise
Voyage and Return
Plot - Other Elements
Coming of Age
Mature Audience Themes
Information not completed
Main Character Details
Name: Aimee Patterson
Age: 17-22
Gender: Female
Role: Protagonist
Key Traits: Adventurous,Decisive,Faithful,Honorable,Insecure,Selfless,Romantic,Skillful
Additional Character Details
Name: Zak
Age: 21-22
Gender: Male
Role: Protagonist
Key Traits: Adventurous,Masculine,Underdog,Modest,Complex,Heroic,Honorable,Leader,Skillful,Patriotic,Lone Wolf,Clumsy
Additional Character Details
Name: Salvan
Age: 20
Gender: Male
Role: antagonist
Key Traits: Villainous,Narcisstic,Power Hungry,Insecure
Additional Character Details
Name: Vodu
Age: 60
Gender: Male
Role: mentor
Key Traits: Decisive,Gracious,Heroic,Educated,Leader,Selfless,Patriotic,Strong Moral Code
Genre
DRAMA, FANTASY
Brief
Aimee has just graduated from high school, living like a normal kid. She takes her dog out for a walk and wakes up on a spaceship. Aimee gets caught up in a galactic war that keeps her away from Earth for 5 years. She falls in love with Zak, a young traveler who was rescued from his ravaged homeland.
Overall Rating
GOOD
Narrative Elements
Authors Writing Style: GOOD
Characterization: GOOD
Commerciality: EXCELLENT
Franchise Potential: EXCELLENT
Pace: EXCELLENT
Premise: GOOD
Structure: GOOD
Theme: GOOD
Accuracy of Book Profile
The book profile does accurately reflect the book. It, however, vaguely touches on the expanded storyline.
Draw of Story
The story begins with Aimee's abduction but it is not in the typical way alien abductions are portrayed. The other beings are humanoid and speak English. There has been a mix-up with Aimee and she was never meant to be taken. They are remorseful but can't take her home for another 5 years. The aliens are the backdrop to a coming of age story.
Possible Drawbacks
The story makes the aliens too conveniently human-like. There are no language barriers or many custom differences. The story focuses on Aimee and her evolution as a young woman on an unexpected journey. It doesn't feel like she is in a different world than where she came from. There is a lack of world building which would have added depth to the story.
Use of Special Effects
THE STORY RELIES HEAVILY ON SPECIAL EFFECTS
Primary Hook of Story
The hook is that Aimee is abducted at 17 years old. She finds herself on an adventure aboard a spaceship to distant places. I would watch this movie for the sci-fi aspect. There is a lighthearted tone to the story because of its young adult genre. There have not been many young adult stories about space exploration. This would be refreshing next to the dystopian future stories.
Fanbase Potential
This could have a large fanbase because it is similar, in structure, to many young adult films. It also has some action, adventure and romance.
Awards Potential
This story does not have awards potential. There is nothing groundbreaking about the story, the structure or the characters.
Envisioned Budget
LARGE BUDGET
Similar Films/TV Series
THE CHRONICLES OF NARNIA, THE HUNGER GAMES, DIVERGENT, LOST IN SPACE
What’s New About the Story
The story is original because is an alien abduction theme that doesn't involve horrific creatures and death. The focus is on Aimee and her journey of personal growth and adventure. She also finds love with Zak, a refugee on the ship. It could be more unique with deeper world building. It seemed exceptionally easy for Aimee to acclimate to the spaceship and the foreign world of space travel.
Lead Characters
The lead character stands out in her reaction to her circumstances. She is described as a non-popular, average teenager and she ends up being a beloved member of the crew. She has a major role in helping during a crisis and opens herself up to love. She is a young woman who did the best she could with the situation she found herself in.
Uniqueness of Story
This is an average story with enough unique elements to make it interesting. It involves space travel, not because of a dying Earth and the need for human survival. It plays up a well known troupe with a young perspective.
Possible Formats
Film - Studio, Film - Streaming, TV Series - Streaming
Analyst Recommendation
CONSIDER
Justification
This story has the elements for an interesting film and is set up to be a series. A young human woman, venturing into space, spending 5 years at a time having adventures. There are not many films like this right now. It does need to be developed more thoroughly and given more depth. There are some parts that are not believable.