Love, Life and The Old Stench of Luck
Logline
Sabienn Feel and his brothers venture to the Deerland Protectorate of Luck in the Outer Territories. Luck is under the control of the powerful and ambitious Lord Ramm. A thirty-year Treaty is to be signed. Two Countries contest. If one wins, a million people die.
Genre
Action,Adventure,Epic,Fantasy
Short Summary
Sabienn Feel arrives in Luck and sees two of his brothers die. He sees a vision of Lord Ramm of Luck in two minds at signing a Treaty. Sabienn meets Lady Ramm who wants to visit a hospital in the country to cure her son. Sabienn attends and finds a hospital corruptly stripped of anything useful.
Sabienn's father wishes the Treaty be signed to Hayddland. It will occur at an old fort inland. Sabienn convinces Ramm to take a potion that feigns death to expose those that have an ambition to the throne. Before Ramm is revived, Sabienn calls for him to be sent to the broken hospital. Ramm dies.
Setting
The Country of Luck on the Planet Whee
Based on a True Story
No
Plot - Premise
Quest,Overcoming Monster/Villain
Plot - Other Elements
Happy Ending,Twist
Mature Audience Themes
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Main Character Details
Name: Sabienn Feel
Age: 23
Gender: Male
Role: Protagonist
Key Traits: Decisive,Leader,Adventurous,Complex,Faithful,Heroic,Skillful
Additional Character Details
Name: Braylenn Skenn (Bray)
Age: 23
Gender: Male
Role: Logical
Key Traits: Adventurous,Confident,Faithful,Educated,Strong Moral Code,Skillful
Additional Character Details
Name: Storkinn Keel (Stork)
Age: 23
Gender: Male
Role: skeptic
Key Traits: Adventurous,Complex,Funny,Skillful,Outspoken,Sarcastic,Blunt,Faithful
Additional Character Details
Name: Dippin Trayne (Deep)
Age: 23
Gender: Male
Role: emotional
Key Traits: Adventurous,Complex,Faithful,Heroic,Educated,Honorable,Skillful,Modest,Patriotic,Strong Moral Code
Development Pitch
This would make a great film as it is about the underdog. Four men are rendered freaks when they grew wings in keeping with a native legend, only to find it a calling to save the planet Whee on which thy reside. The images have a cinematic style and the expression of their emotions is done with funny, pointed and often moving dialogue. It is largely through their speech that their feelings are laid bare. The scenes span wide time periods through the device of Sabienn's ability to be able to 'read' an object in his hand. The story is always moving forward but the flashes to the past fill the pages with back-story. Sabienn Feel is a leader but troubled with his own inadequacies. He is loyal to his three brothers and seeks to kill his Father who killed two hundred women, four of whom were the four men's mothers. The map of Whee where all the action takes place is enclosed with this submission. This series of books is mainly aimed at despondent and restless young teenage men. Kind Regards. Mark Barkley