Guess What The Fish Sings To The Hook
Logline
Sabienn Feel and his brothers enter the rich and powerful country of Upper Deerland. His father, the Grand Inquisitor Profound, has covertly pushed his Secret Police into the country to catch and kill him. Sabienn seeks to get even and expose his father who plans sabotage against an ally.
Genre
Action,Adventure,Epic,Fantasy
Short Summary
Sabienn Feel enters Upper Deerland to seek a locket owned by a young woman. After being used by violent and detached teenagers, Sabienn achieves his read. Upon the journey he has found evidence, left at a massage parlour, of terrorist acts to be undertaken by his father, against their ally Deerland
Sabienn saves a friend from execution. With her input, he seeks to stop the fake terrorists. They attend a targeted meeting where the fake terrorists are killed by real terrorists. Sabienn fails to get his hands on the evidence linking his father but it is uncovered by way of a news story the end.
Setting
Future
Based on a True Story
No
Plot - Premise
Quest
Plot - Other Elements
Twist
Mature Audience Themes
Substance Abuse
Main Character Details
Name: Sabienn Feel
Age: 23
Gender: Male
Role: Protagonist
Key Traits: Adventurous,Manipulative,Decisive,Complex,Leader
Additional Character Details
Name: Braylenn Skenn (Bray)
Age: 23
Gender: Male
Role: Logical
Key Traits: Adventurous,Strong Moral Code,Outspoken,Educated,Faithful,Confident
Additional Character Details
Name: Storkinn Keel (Stork)
Age: 23
Gender: Male
Role: skeptic
Key Traits: Adventurous,Blunt,Sarcastic,Funny,Faithful,Complex
Additional Character Details
Name: Dippin Trayne (Deep)
Age: 23
Gender: Male
Role: emotional
Key Traits: Selfless,Adventurous,Complex,Empathetic,Faithful,Gracious,Honorable,Patriotic
Development Pitch
This would make a great film as it is about the underdog. Four men are rendered freaks when they grew wings in keeping with a native legend, only to find it a calling to save the planet Whee on which they reside. The images have a cinematic style and the expression of their emotions is done with funny, pointed and often moving dialogue. It is largely through their speech that their feelings are laid bare. The scenes span wide time periods through the device of Sabienn's ability to be able to 'read' an object in his hand. The story is always moving forward but the flashes to the past fill the pages with back-story. Sabienn Feel is a leader but troubled with his own inadequacies. He is loyal to his three brothers and seeks to kill his Father who killed two hundred women, four of whom were the four men's mothers. The map of Whee where all the action takes place is enclosed with this submission. This series of books is mainly aimed at despondent and restless young teenage men. Kind Regards. Mark Barkley