The Two Men Who Kill To Be Carbon
Logline
Sabienn Feel has been assigned a task to seek a coffee mug in the land of Rotnadge-Minora. He crosses paths with a General who is troubled by events in his land which include Sabienn’s Father, who has assigned two men to hunt and kill Sabienn on the hallowed ground of Mount Farewell.
Genre
Action,Adventure,Epic,Fantasy
Short Summary
Sabienn Feel enters Rotnadge-Minora. His Father has assigned two men to kill him on Mount Farewell in line with a legend that will help his invasion. Sabienn seeks a coffee mug in the possession of a lawyer in R-M. The lawyer is a sworn enemy of a General who also seeks Sabienn to get a read.
The read does not go well. The General who is sworn to protect a sacred Temple on Mount Scatt, ends up driving a truck of explosives into it. Sabienn then goes to Mount Farewell to save Stork. His brothers are blinded in the attack but Sabienn sees one of his enemy killed and the other crippled.
Setting
The Planet Whee and Rotnadge-Minora in the country of Deerland
Based on a True Story
No
Plot - Premise
Quest
Plot - Other Elements
Twist
Mature Audience Themes
Information not completed
Main Character Details
Name: Sabienn Feel
Age: 23
Gender: Male
Role: Protagonist
Key Traits: Decisive,Manipulative,Complex,Adventurous,Leader
Additional Character Details
Name: Braylenn Skenn (Bray)
Age: 23
Gender: Male
Role: Logical
Key Traits: Adventurous,Confident,Educated,Strong Moral Code,Faithful,Outspoken
Additional Character Details
Name: Storkinn Keel (Stork)
Age: 23
Gender: Male
Role: skeptic
Key Traits: Adventurous,Complex,Blunt,Faithful,Funny,Sarcastic
Additional Character Details
Name: Dippin Trayne (Deep)
Age: 23
Gender: Male
Role: emotional
Key Traits: Adventurous,Complex,Strong Moral Code,Educated,Faithful,Honorable,Patriotic,Selfless,Skillful
Development Pitch
This would make a great film as it is about the underdog. Four men are rendered freaks when they grew wings in keeping with a native legend, only to find it a calling to save the planet Whee on which they reside. The images have a cinematic style and the expression of their emotions is done with funny, pointed and often moving dialogue. It is largely through their speech that their feelings are laid bare. The scenes span wide time periods through the device of Sabienn's ability to be able to 'read' an object in his hand. The story is always moving forward but the flashes to the past fill the pages with back-story. Sabienn Feel is a leader but troubled with his own inadequacies. He is loyal to his three brothers and seeks to kill his Father who killed two hundred women, four of whom were the four men's mothers. The map of Whee where all the action takes place is enclosed with this submission. This series of books is mainly aimed at despondent and restless young teenage men. Kind Regards. Mark Barkley