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Lori Sines sinesc44@gmail.com 5042709266586

CRIME SATIRE SUSPENSE/THRILLER

1980s & '90s

Lori Sines

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Logline

A bank client is cheated out of real estate investment and hires a hitman to track down the culprits

Genre

Crime,Satire,Suspense/Thriller

Short Summary

A young woman gets involved with a money laundry criminal only she is unaware and gets kidnapped by the hired killer.


The anti hero gets away after killing the fraud suspects. He keeps the woman who didn't know the money laundry scheme.

Setting

New Orleans

Based on a True Story

No

Plot - Premise

Other

Plot - Other Elements

Twist

Mature Audience Themes

Extreme Violence,Nudity

Main Character Details

Name: Robbie Green

Age: 45

Gender: Male

Role: Antagonist

Key Traits: Masculine,Villainous,Badass,Sexy,Complex,Educated,Secretive,Sarcastic,Seductive,Sophisticated,Lone Wolf,Manipulative,Unapologetic

Additional Character Details

Name: Andie Mae

Age: 32

Gender: Female

Role: Tempter

Key Traits: Charming,Obedient,Sexy,Romantic,Naive

Additional Character Details

Name: Tommy Dell

Age: 40

Gender: Male

Role: protagonist

Key Traits: Aspiring,Charming,Confident,Criminal,Narcisstic,Sexy,Skillful,Educated,Greedy

Additional Character Details

Name: Porsche Driver

Age: 60

Gender: Male

Role: emotional

Key Traits: Adventurous,Criminal,Clumsy,Sophisticated

Development Pitch

I think this short story could be made into a film adaptation. I compare it in a way to the movie "Seven Psychopaths" in the seemingly dark humor and to the reader the methodical violence. The client whose money was stolen proves to be a force to be reckoned with. I wanted to have an anti hero who has some pretty bad traits succeed in the end of the story instead of a hero saves the day kind of story. I also wanted to put the female character in a position of not knowing what to do except go along such as which ever way the wind blows attitude. Thank you for the time and consideration of reading my short story. Lori Sines

About The Author

Lori Sines likes to write short stories,poetry and is a fan of Sci-Fi movies.

Target Audiences

Age: 35-54

Target Gender: Male Leaning

Group Specific

Information not completed

Publishing Details

Status: No

Hard Copy Available

No

ISBN

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