Wicked Liars
GENRE
YOUNG ADULT SUSPENSE / THRILLER DRAMA ROMANCE
Core Theme
CLASSISM
TIME PERIOD
Contemporary
COMPARABLE TITLES
PRETTY LITTLE LIARS, GOSSIP GIRL
CHARACTER LIST
JAZZ: 17. LEAD. BADASS AND SELF CONFIDENT. TRAUMATIZED.
KINGSTON: 18. JAZZ'S ENEMY AND THEN BOYFRIEND.
AINSLEY: 17. JAZZ'S ONLY FRIEND.
PEYTON: 17. JAZZ'S STEPSISTER.
BELLE: 7. JAZZ'S YOUNGER SISTER.
CHARLES CALLAHAN: 50S. JAZZ'S FATHER.
Logline
After the death of her mother, a young woman is forced to live with the father she's never known. She's thrown into a world of unimaginable wealth and privilege filled with lies, secrets, and betrayal at every turn. At the center of it all, is the one man she can't seem to stay away from.
Target Audiences
Age: 18-34,35-54,55+
Target Gender: Female Leaning
Setting
Los Angeles area
Based on a True Story
No
Publishing Details
Status: Yes: self-published
Publisher: Self-Published
Year Published: 2020
Starting Description
The heroine's mother recently passed away, so she has to live with her father, whom she's never met. She's thrown into a world of incredible wealth, unlike anything she's ever known. She quickly learns she's surrounded by deception and everyone seems to have an agenda.
Ending Description
The first book ends on a cliffhanger with the heroine bleeding out from a stab wound after being badly beaten.
Group Specific
Information not completed
Hard Copy Available
Yes
ISBN
979-8629296928
Mature Audience Themes
Language/Profanity,Nudity
Plot - Other Elements
Twist
Plot - Premise
Rags to Riches,Overcoming Monster/Villain,Tragedy
Main Character Details
Name: Jasmine (Jazz) Rivera
Age: 17-18
Gender: Female
Role: Protagonist
Key Traits: Badass,Unapologetic,Blunt,Sexy,Complex,Selfless,Honorable,Engaging,Empathetic
Additional Character Details
Name: Kingston Davenport
Age: 18
Gender: Male
Role: Protagonist
Key Traits: Masculine,Complex,Confident,Decisive,Heartthrob,Heroic,Leader,Unapologetic,Seductive,Secretive,Skillful,Sexy
Additional Character Details
Name: Bentley Fitzgerald
Age: 18
Gender: Male
Role: sidekick
Key Traits: Charming,Complex,Confident,Engaging,Heartthrob,Seductive,Sarcastic,Funny,Blunt,Masculine,Sexy
Additional Character Details
Name: Peyton Devereux
Age: 17-18
Gender: Female
Role: antagonist
Key Traits: Villainous,Narcisstic,Sexy,Confident,Desperate,Greedy,Insecure,Manipulative,Seductive,Secretive,Power Hungry
Genre
ROMANCE, MATURE AUDIENCE, SUSPENSE, DRAMA
Brief
Girl's mother dies so she moves in with her estranged rich father. Rich father is up to shady business and everyone at school bullies her. School "King" begins dating her after bullying her. She falls for him, but he leads her into a trap in the woods where she bleeds out.
Overall Rating
GOOD
Narrative Elements
Authors Writing Style: FAIR
Characterization: GOOD
Commerciality: EXCELLENT
Franchise Potential: EXCELLENT
Pace: FAIR
Premise: FAIR
Structure: FAIR
Theme: FAIR
Accuracy of Book Profile
It works.
Draw of Story
I like the undercurrent of class struggle that Jazz faces when she first enters the Callahan household.
Possible Drawbacks
There were too many scenes with Kingston and Jazz where the beats repeated themselves--they seemed to have the same argument with the same conclusion a few times.
Use of Special Effects
THE STORY DOES NOT RELY ON SPECIAL EFFECTS
Primary Hook of Story
A poor girl finds herself in a rich, upper crust world, filled with liars and evils she can't comprehend.
Fanbase Potential
Absolutely. People are ready for another YA thriller series.
Awards Potential
No. The main characters are too shallow for acting awards and there is nothing special happening that would grant dramatic awards.
Envisioned Budget
LOW BUDGET
Similar Films/TV Series
PRETTY LITTLE LIARS, GOSSIP GIRL
What’s New About the Story
This story is unique in that it shows real class struggles as well as economic stratification, but it could be more unique if the ending was clearer about Jazz's fate, and if Jazz took a longer time to accept Kingston after he essentially date raped her at a party.
Lead Characters
Jazz is fierce, badass, and independent, but also traumatized and vulnerable.
Uniqueness of Story
This is not a rare gem - it could be better if the male characters were called out for their flaws like the female characters.
Possible Formats
TV Series - Cable
Analyst Recommendation
CONSIDER
Justification
This is a juicy young adult novel that will perform well with its intended target audience.
Brief
When Jazz's mother passes away, she's forced to live with her rich father, Charles Callahan, who she's never met. Jazz is most worried about fitting in at her new ultra-rich prep school despite antagonism from her stepsister Peyton and Peyton's boyfriend, Kingston. However, Jazz starts to fall for Kingston, and soon realizes that there is much more to Charles Callahan and his evil empire than she'd initially thought.
What We Liked
This is a young adult novel that deals with the struggles of class and wealth stratification as well as trauma, loneliness, betrayal, and trust. As a film, this would be a dramatic romance with thrilling action scenes. As a television show, this would be like Gossip Girl, a weekly hit where viewers would tune in to watch Jazz uncover more of the mystery and get closer and closer to Kingston.
Key points: Romantic; Sexy; Lifestyle of the rich and famous; Mysterious; Larger conspiracy within the story
Synopsis
When Jazz's mother dies unexpectedly, she's forced to move in with her father, Charles Callahan, her stepmother, and her stepsister, Peyton. Jazz comes from a poorer family and is uncomfortable with the luxurious riches and emphasis on image expected in the Callahan household. However, she tells herself that she has to suck it up and make do if she's ever going to see her younger sister, Belle, again. At school, Peyton is mean to Jazz and everyone else follows suit--Peyton is part of a group considered the Queens of her school, while her boyfriend, Kingston, and his friends Reed and Bentley, are considered the Kings. Everyone at the ultra-rich school follows the will of their chosen royal class. Jazz's only friend is Ainsley, Kingston's twin sister, who stands up to Kingston and Peyton. Ainsley reveals to Jazz that Kingston and Peyton aren't really dating, they're just putting on shows so that Peyton can get the money entrusted to her in her father's will and Kingston can get into the good graces of Charles Callahan. Kingston visits Jazz one evening and they hook up, but he tells her that it meant nothing to him, even though all the while he finds himself drawn to Jazz.
Jazz goes to a party with Ainsley where, unbeknownst to her, the Kings had paid a boy to get Jazz inebriated and deliver her to them. The boy drugs Jazz's drink and she finds herself nearly unconscious in a room with Reed, Bentley, and Kingston. While on the verge of passing out, Jazz kisses one of the men and it evolves into mild foreplay with Bentley and Kingston. After she passes out, the Kings put their original plan into action and take photos of her in bed with them. They then lock her in the pool house to make sure she stays safe. The next day at school, the boys distribute the photos en masse so the entire school thinks that Jazz had a threesome. Jazz is upset by this and doesn't remember having sex with any of them, but the other girls at the school still bully her relentlessly. Jazz finds Kingston spying on Charles one night and learns that Charles is involved in some shadier business than she'd known about. Kingston refuses to tell her anything about it and says she has to trust him. She refuses, until he brings her to her younger sister's house. Jazz had been trying to get in touch with her younger sister, Belle, but had been unable to do so as Belle's father is a perverted drunk who enjoys belittling Jazz. Kingston is rich, however, and is able to bribe Belle's father to allow the sisters to have weekly playdates. Seeing Kingston with Belle causes Jazz to fall harder for the bad boy. At school, Kingston and Peyton have a public breakup, and all of the girls corner Jazz in a restroom and attempt to beat her up before the boys come to her rescue. Kingston publicly begins dating Jazz, and puts her under his protection so that the other kids at school will stop bullying her.
A school dance is scheduled for the same day as Jazz's 18th birthday. Jazz is reluctant to go, but Ainsley and Kingston convince her to go to the dance as well as a private party in a cabin by the lake afterwards. The dance goes well and Kingston bought Jazz a lovely dress. They go to the cabin afterwards and Bentley leads Jazz into the woods, telling her to close her eyes and prepare for her cake. However, soon she finds herself surrounded by masked men. Jazz warns them that her boyfriend is coming, but they say that he's the one who led her here. The masked men attempt to rape Jazz, but she fights back, and they accidentally stab her. As she's bleeding out, she thinks about how wrong she was to trust Kingston.