She is Me

Wick'D Love

Book Cover

GENRE

ADVENTURE LGBT EROTIC EPIC FUNNY FANTASY ROMANCE MELODRAMA SATIRE

    Core Theme

    FREE LOVE

    TIME PERIOD

    20th Century (multiple decades)

    COMPARABLE TITLES

    50 SHADES OF GREY

    CHARACTER LIST

    HUSBAND (40S) - RICH, MARRIED, AND OPEN MINDED

    KAT (30S) WIFE - INTUITIVE AND BEAUTIFUL

    MONA (20S) GIRLFRIEND - JEALOUS AND SEXY

    KAMI (30S) - WAITRESS & HOT

    HENRY (40S) BUTLER & GAY

    DARIAN (30S) HAIRDRESSER & GAY

    Logline

    This story is about presenting different angles of life that so that we can all learn what unconditional love is & feels like. Everyone will judge. This book acts as a reflection for the reader. A true gift to the beholder. Teaches you how to become aligned with Source after reflecting if allowed.

    Target Audiences

    Age: 18-34,35-54,55+

    Target Gender: Universal,Female Leaning,Male Leaning,LGBT Leaning

    Setting

    Starts in Colorado and ends in Puerto Rico

    Based on a True Story

    No

    Publishing Details

    Status: Yes: self-published

    Publisher: Wick'D Beast Entertainment

    Year Published: 2017

    Starting Description

    Contrasting. Captivating is what our readers have said. Meant to draw you in & start to shift your mind. The external verbiage set's the stage for the gift that is the reflections & emotions of the book. Makes you wonder how the two go together. If you judge, you'll miss the gift. If not, you expand

    Ending Description

    In short the end reflects that we should strive to hold onto the positive vibrations and carry them forward into everything that we do next. It reflects a lot of happiness & conviviality and fun. It also reiterates that we should all have fun on this journey while accepting everyone for who they are

    Group Specific

    Information not completed

    Hard Copy Available

    Yes

    ISBN

    13:978-0-9995683-2-3

    Mature Audience Themes

    Language/Profanity,Nudity,Sexual Abuse

    Plot - Other Elements

    Twist,Philosophical Questions,Happy Ending,Coming of Age,Meaningful Message

    Plot - Premise

    Internal Journey/Rebirth,Quest,Voyage and Return,Rebellion Against 'The One'

    Main Character Details

    Name: Mr. Bordeaux

    Age: Mid thirties, late forties

    Gender: Other

    Role: Logical

    Key Traits: Charming,Confident,Complex,Decisive,Empathetic,Engaging,Faithful,Flexible,Gracious,Greedy,Heartthrob,Educated,Honorable,Leader,Masculine,Modest,Sexy,Selfless,Romantic,Visionary,Seductive,Sophisticated,Strong Moral Code,Unapologetic,Lone Wolf,Badass,Aspiring,Adventurous,Skillful

    Additional Character Details

    Name: Kat

    Age: 35

    Gender: Female

    Role: Logical

    Key Traits: Badass,Charming,Complex,Confident,Decisive,Empathetic,Engaging,Faithful,Flexible,Gracious,Heartthrob,Educated,Honorable,Leader,Strong Moral Code,Unapologetic,Sophisticated,Seductive,Secretive,Romantic,Visionary,Skillful,Selfless,Blunt,Sexy,Modest

    Additional Character Details

    Name: Mona

    Age: 32

    Gender: Female

    Role: tempter

    Key Traits: Adventurous,Aspiring,Aggressive,Badass,Charming,Clumsy,Crazy,Engaging,Faithful,Flexible,Greedy,Heartthrob,Educated,Honorable,Naive,Villainous,Obedient,Sexy,Blunt,Outspoken,Skillful,Funny,Romantic,Seductive,Strong Moral Code,Unapologetic,Insecure,Gracious,Complex,Sophisticated,Selfless

    Additional Character Details

    The author has not yet written this

    Development Pitch

    The audience will enjoy this Movie because it will release the chains that are shackled to each & every one of us that do not exist in this state of being. It’s time for all of us to rise. This is why you would want to choose this book as your next production adventure. It removes us from the box-o-tradition, into endless possibilities for all. This movie will liberate the minds of those seeking to be liberated.There is nothing that is not appealing about this movie, including the beautiful, funny & unique characters. This book is good to turn into a movie because it is relevant & at the center of the upheaval that we are experiencing in this country at this moment in time with racism, sexism, inequality for individuals, LGBT community & their rise in Puerto Rico, African American, Asian American, Separation, & simply Humans, no matter how they choose to identify themselves. The spiritual gift of I AM, that is given to all of us individuals should not be dictated & curated by someone who was not set to walk in our individual divine shoes, but loved & accepted for who you truly are at your core, no matter what that looks like, so that we can all have a safe & happy walk of life as we grow & ascend into our best, truest & highest selves, while finding our way home, back to self. I know first-hand that this book turned movie would address a huge problem that is plaguing our children & every individual that is committing suicide or attempting it, and hating themselves

    Genre

    ROMANCE, LGBT

    Brief

    Three lovers embark on a journey full of sensuality, temptations, and experiences.

    Overall Rating

    FAIR

    Point of View

    FIRST PERSON

    Narrative Elements

    Authors Writing Style: FAIR

    Characterization: FAIR

    Commerciality: FAIR

    Franchise Potential: FAIR

    Pace: FAIR

    Premise: FAIR

    Structure: FAIR

    Theme: FAIR

    Accuracy of Book Profile

    I think the profile could be highly improved. The author uses sections of the page, such as the summary, to narrate personal impressions on the story, when he could briefly explain what the narrative is about, facilitating the understanding for those coming into contact with the material for the first time.

    Draw of Story

    It didn't really catch my attention, but starting the book in an intense sex scene is somewhat brave.

    Possible Drawbacks

    The book lacks conflict. Solid and impactful conflicts. Those that appear in the course of history are not enough to maintain attention.

    Use of Special Effects

    THE STORY DOES NOT RELY ON SPECIAL EFFECTS

    Primary Hook of Story

    The hook would be the wish to love freely, to try things, without judgment, only guided by love. But with the absence of a better-defined goal and more powerful conflicts, this initial wish loses its reason for existing.

    Fanbase Potential

    No. Only if the author vastly improves the story. As it stands, it looks more like a sequence of eroticism. And, I believe the story lacks narrative power to attract a large fanbase.

    Awards Potential

    If the story could raise a profound reflection on free love, unconventional romances, freeing yourself to mundane pleasures, might be more likely to earn awards. The book needs strength to become more relevant.

    Envisioned Budget

    LOW BUDGET

    Similar Films/TV Series

    FIFTY SHADES OF GREY: AN ENIGMATIC MILLIONAIRE ENJOYS EXPERIENCING ALL KINDS OF SEXUAL PLEASURE. 365 DAYS (DNI) - A WOMAN IS IMPRISONED BY A MAFIA MAN AND ATTRACTED BY HIM, STARTS TO FALL IN LOVE

    What’s New About the Story

    The harmonious triple relationship could be a point that makes the story less cliché.

    Lead Characters

    The characters need to be much better developed. Little is known about the three main characters, other than their taste for pleasure. It ends up negatively affecting the story.

    Uniqueness of Story

    No. It has possible ways to grow: fully assume the sexual aspect of the story, thus generating some reflections on this free love, OR expand conflicts and develop a narrative that would better serve an erotic drama that would exist beyond the sexual scenes.

    Possible Formats

    Film - Indie, Film - Streaming

    Analyst Recommendation

    WORK IN PROGRESS

    Justification

    While the story has many positive points, it has room for improvement (see possible paths below). If you can't change the story at this point, my suggestion is using your notes as a guide to highlight the best aspects of it when taking the next steps, either putting a pitch page together, a treatment, or a presentation.

    Tips for Improvement

    First, we need to understand the reason for the existence of this story. Does the author want to present the day-to-day life of a triple relationship? Or does he want to reduce society's judgment about this kind of relationship by showing three people who love each other? It's hard to understand what the story is about exactly. We follow three people who enjoy having sex together and have fun. However, aside from small and insignificant conflicts encountered along the way, the story looks like a sexual experience diary. We could know more about each character in this triple gear that, apparently, works harmoniously. It would be interesting to understand why these people joined this relationship and how they feel. The lack of conflict creates frustration because we are always on the verge that something will happen, but nothing happens. Other films have already shown that there is an audience for erotic stories, including adaptations, but in addition to intense scenes, these movies brought some reflection, stakes, and drama. These elements are missing here. We could better understand who these people are and how they feel in an unconventional relationship, even if it is not the film's focus. How is it to deal with society's daily judgment? Some sort of reflection the story should generate for us to be more remarkable.

    Brief

    When Kat, her husband, and their girlfriend go on vacation, they're judged by everyone who crosses their way; so all they do is enjoy and spread their love.

    What We Liked

    It's an easy, stress-free read with intense erotism and light-hearted romance.

    Film: Set in a paradisiac location, this light-hearted romance mixes beautiful views, intense sex, and an aspiring lifestyle that can make a very appealing and easy-to-digest feature-length film. The characters are good-looking and sexy, and there's an appeal in their lack of drama.

    TV: This feel-good story can be a great mature TV show targeted at a broad audience seeking vacation-type, erotic content. The open end can lead to more seasons, and the characters have space for long-term development.

    Key points:
    - Beautiful location;
    - Erotica;
    - LGBT positive;
    -Stress-free story;
    - Aspiring lifestyle;

    Synopsis

    Kat, Mona, the guy have amazing, seductive sex before heading to the shower and getting ready for the trip ahead. The car service arrives, and he takes care of the bags while the women wait by the car. The driver gives him a strange stare.

    The trio arrives at the airport, and the VIP attendant can’t help but stare at the throuple, trying to understand the dynamic between the married couple and Mona. They head to the airplane and again are greeted with some confusion by the workers; a flight attendant believes Mona is their daughter. Mona tries to nap, and husband and wife share their thoughts on the hot flight attendant. Jealous, Mona masturbates Kat before they all fall asleep.

    They arrive in Puerto Rico and eat at the VIP area; a waitress called Raquel accidentally spills butter on Kat and profusely apologizes, but Kat insists that she has nothing to worry about. When the husband introduces himself and Kat introduces Mona as their girlfriend, Raquel gets shy. The women exchange a few looks, and Mona gets a bit jealous. They head to the cruise ship and get settled; Mona and Kat shower together while the husband catches up on work. Later, they eat.

    Their waitress, Kami, gets very flirty with the trio, especially after finding out their dynamic. They ask her to check on them later. They watch a burlesque performance show, and Kat is deeply touched. Their butler Henry announces his work might be done for the evening, as he realizes that Kat and Mona have started kissing.

    They head back upstairs, where Kat and Mona kiss while the husband drinks scotch and smokes a cigar. Not too long after, Kami joins them, and the three women shower and foreplay. They leave the shower, and Kat puts a leash on both women, leading them to the husband. They kiss his body until he climaxes.

    They wake up, and the husband presents them with the itinerary. Impressed that the day adventure includes swimming, they ask about their hair—but the husband surprises them with the arrival of their hairdresser, Darian. The husband gets a call, and Kat tells him to cancel an important deal based on a dream she had. He calls the deal off. The women have their hairs down and look amazing. Darian asks, and Kat tells him they are doing great with Mona. They head to the jet skies and have an afternoon of fun before the boat arrives.

    The husband and Henry leave to run errands, and Natalia replaces Henry in taking care of the women. The women go through an amazing and sexy spa experience; mid-way through, Mona and Kat start to kiss and soon have sex. Kat notices Natalia watching them and includes her in the sex. The husband arrives with a frustrated Henry and un upset Darian, who hated the boat ride. They arrive and find the women relaxed and happy, but all covered in chocolate from the spa. Frustrated, Darian walks to his room.

    The next day a storm turns their cruise into a scary, bumpy ride. Kat is nervous, and she and her husband have intense sex; Mona shows up after it, and the husband fears she was watching. Then, he goes to the balcony to meditate but is interrupted by Henry, who asks for his advice in loving multiple people at the same time.

    The husband returns to their room, where he has exciting sex with Kat, Mona, and Kami. Again, he notices Mona watching with jealousy. Later, they have sex again to enjoy their last night at the ship. Then, they go to dinner and invite Darian and Henry to join them.

    The next morning, they all have a hangover, but Henry gives them a quick remedy suggested by Kat the night before that cures them. They enjoy breakfast, and the husband surprises them with an extension to their vacation: the next stop, Hawaii.

    About The Author

    Wick'D Love (they/them) writes to inspire readers to love, forgive, and accept all of who they are.