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ACTION ADVENTURE SCI-FI FOLKTALE EPIC HISTORICAL FICTION YOUNG ADULT FANTASY ROMANCE RELIGIOUS FAMILY DRAMA

Across Centuries

Kelsey McManis

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Logline

This is the ultimate battle between good and evil. Will Elizaveth save the day and make a choice? With her husband once again in the picture and a new love interest. Whom will she choose the welfare of time or love?

Genre

Action,Adventure,Sci-fi,Folktale,Epic,Historical Fiction,Young Adult,Fantasy,Romance,Religious,Family,Drama

Short Summary

The main characters Elizaveth and Dean have been bad relationships. Elizaveth's story begins way before the Earth was created and her job is to protect history from changing while she and her friends battle the evil Lucifin Empire through out history.


The end of the story is Dean and Elizaveth getting married and continuing the story into the second book, which is in the works and will based in World War 2.

Setting

every where

Based on a True Story

Yes

Plot - Premise

Overcoming Monster/Villain,Internal Journey/Rebirth,Quest

Plot - Other Elements

Twist,Happy Ending

Mature Audience Themes

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Main Character Details

Name: Elizaveth Magnus

Age: unknown

Gender: Female

Role: Logical

Key Traits: Aspiring,Modest,Complex,Sexy,Religious,Decisive,Empathetic,Selfless,Engaging,Faithful,Funny,Romantic,Heroic,Strong Moral Code,Honorable,Educated,Leader

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Development Pitch

This is a story that I've felt would better served has a series that others can learn history, live experiences, enjoy the characters and learn to be better people. I wrote it for my children to know who I am, what I believe and what life experiences I have had. This story follows two main characters Elizaveth and Dean, both having been in bad relationships in the past. The war between good and evil is real and always being being fought by families. Elizaveth does have a daughter Chloe who the will take over the story plots in due time. This beautifully written story that weaves the Christian religion, life, love, family and friendships together is believed to surely be a best choice for all ages in the family. We take a Charles Dickenson journey with Dean, but without the ghosts as he prepares to meet Elizaveth. Elizaveth then takes us on a journey that may perhaps be the best time travel journey to Ancient Ireland yet.

About The Author

Kelsey McManis was born in 1976 in the state of Kansas where he lived till 2005. When he moved to Utah to get married and write his book. This story follows a mother, daughter and male characters there is action, love, learning of history and life lessons. Also this a story that goes through out time in the war against Good vs Evil.

Target Audiences

Age: 18-34,13-17,35-54,55+

Target Gender: Female Leaning,Male Leaning,Universal,Other

Group Specific

Information not completed

Publishing Details

Status: Yes: self-published

Publisher: Amazon

Year Published: 2020

Hard Copy Available

No

ISBN

978-1984270856

Genre

ACTION, RELIGION, DRAMA

Brief

Elizaveth and Dean are intertwined despite their history of bad relationships in order to save history. The two are peace giving time travelers on a mission to rescue Earth from Lucifer and his minion's meddling. Elizaveth has a daughter from her previous marriage who can see into the future.

Overall Rating

FAIR

Point of View

FIRST PERSON

Narrative Elements

Authors Writing Style: FAIR

Characterization: FAIR

Commerciality: FAIR

Franchise Potential: GOOD

Pace: FAIR

Premise: FAIR

Structure: FAIR

Theme: FAIR

Accuracy of Book Profile

The profile does not mention the heavy religious aspects of the book until the development pitch. The short summary would be better served focusing on the specific story rather than the series. Something small to change is that the journey that Dean goes on is described as "Dickenson" in the profile when the correct term seems to be the similar "Dickensian."

Draw of Story

The world-building is very complex with many interesting locations and complications in terms of chronology and lineage.

Possible Drawbacks

The shifting points of view especially in Dean's case where he is unable to make sense of much of the information in the beginning can create confusion as to the external conflicts versus main conflict of the story. The internal conflicts are clear but the external missions aren't always apparent.

Use of Special Effects

THE STORY RELIES HEAVILY ON SPECIAL EFFECTS

Primary Hook of Story

The hook is that people fall in love through time traveling and rescue history. The history takes them to different cultures both well-known and obscure.

Fanbase Potential

Due to the Christian overtones but also adult relationships this might have a mixed but smaller audience. Kloth-ee's/ Chloe's murder of her father might make the Christian fanbase slightly smaller.

Awards Potential

Due to the religious aspects of the film as well as the science fiction universe involving time travel this is unlikely to garner mainstream secular awards, but might do well in the Christian circuit.

Envisioned Budget

MEDIUM BUDGET

Similar Films/TV Series

LEFT BEHIND, TIME TRAVELER'S WIFE, ABOUT TIME, ASSASSIN'S CREED,

What’s New About the Story

The complex world-building, conventional relationships due to time travel and exotic locations in history are all great assets but making sure the characters and main conflict are clearly defined could help provide direction to the narrative outside the love story. The love story subplot is very clear, but the characters' missions within their travels are not as clear.

Lead Characters

Elizaveth is self-assured, wise and serene. Kloth-ee is confident like her mother but also fierce and powerful. Dean is able to adapt well and dependable.

Uniqueness of Story

A somewhat linear plot intertwined nonlinear characters can be a bit hard to follow. If the main conflict outside the vague notion to save history can be established in clearer manner than the themes will be easier to follow.

Possible Formats

Film - Indie, Film - Streaming, Film - Studio, TV Series - Cable, TV Series - Limited Run / Mini-Series, TV Series - Network, TV Series - Streaming

Analyst Recommendation

WORK IN PROGRESS

Justification

While the story has many positive points, it has room for improvement (see possible paths below). If you can't change the story at this point, my suggestion is using your notes as a guide to highlight the best aspects of it when taking the next steps, either putting a pitch page together, a treatment, or a presentation.

Tips for Improvement

By establishing characters without confusion to their identity or motivation, the non-linear time travel can focus on a main conflict of discovering how to save history rather than getting distracted on smaller mysteries.