FANTASY

After being fired from his previous job, a young man finds himself in the strange position of defending nature spirits, about which humanity doesn't care anymore. Despite some trouble, he manages to succeed and help their cause.

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THIRD PERSON

Authors Writing Style: FAIR

Characterization: FAIR

Commerciality: FAIR

Franchise Potential: FAIR

Pace: FAIR

Premise: FAIR

Structure: FAIR

Theme: FAIR

Yes, it does.

The strange dialogue that opens the novella and that points out to an interesting and intriguingly outcast character.

Many of the events throughout the novella happen very abruptly and without reflection. This ends up making the story somewhat inconsequential and without impact.

THE STORY RELIES A LITTLE BIT ON SPECIAL EFFECTS

The way we trade nature for technology and how our heads bowed over cell phone screens prevent us from seeing the blue of the sky and the green of the trees.

Stories with an environmentally oriented moral background certainly can attract fans and people interested in the subject. However, the story needs to develop its characters and situations more deeply to really impact the viewers.

As it stands now, it lacks revision and more narrative development for the story to work. Therefore, it would hardly have a chance to win Awards.

MEDIUM BUDGET

AMERICAN GODS - A TV SERIES THAT SHOWS THE CONTEMPORARY CLASH BETWEEN THE GODS OF THE PAST AND THOSE OF WORLD TODAY, LINKED TO TECHNOLOGY AND GLOBALIZATION. BLACK MIRROR - THE SERIES SHOWS, IN A SARCASTIC WAY, HOW TECHNOLOGY AND CONTEMPORARY HABITS CAN HAVE NEGATIVE IMPACTS ON HUMANITY AND THE WORLD AS A WHOLE.

The premise, which is to defend the case of the main elements of nature, has a touch of originality that is important. However, it is necessary to focus efforts on two factors: further developing this whole concept and making the story more believable and closer to reality. Otherwise, the narrative runs the risk of sounding shallow and even a little preposterous.

The protagonist is strange, clumsy, and a bit confused, but he has a good heart, thus creating an empathetic relationship with the audience.

It's not a rare gem yet. Despite the interesting concept, it lacks more development, depth, and better-defined characters for the narrative to engage the reader.

Film: Studio, Streaming

WORK IN PROGRESS

While the story has many positive points, it has room for improvement (see possible paths below). If you can't change the story at this point, my suggestion is using your notes as a guide to highlight the best aspects of it when taking the next steps, either putting a pitch page together, a treatment, or a presentation.

For the narrative to be more thought-provoking and hold the reader's attention, the author should extensively review, revise, and edit the book. In general, the impression is that there are too many events and too little time to recount them. We cannot understand exactly who are those fantastic elements with whom the protagonist interacts, which makes it difficult for us to relate and feel empathy for them, a fundamental point for the success of the narrative. Why not give more time for relationships to develop better? So that the protagonist builds clearer and deeper bonds with these beings, generating a greater understanding of what drives him to defend them fiercely? This would even help the audience to accept the whole story and enter this world much more easily. For an adaptation to be successful, changes like these should be necessary and somewhat essential.