Beneath Storm Mountain

Kara Jacobson 1626911932475



Kara Jacobson

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Fun-loving teenagers on vacation in the Black Hills discover a mysterious gold cube in their fishing hole that is coveted by evil beings, and get trapped within a series of advanced civilizations that exist beneath the earth's crust.


Adventure,Fantasy,Family,Sci-fi,Young Adult,Funny,Folktale,Epic,Action

Short Summary

Teens uncover a mysterious gold cube in their fishing hole and are pursued by evil entities. A girl from the intra-earth tries to protect the teens, but despite her efforts, one is captured and the rest get trapped in the Annai Nation, a so-called enlightened civilization beneath the earth's crust.

The teenagers reunite within the intra-earth and help defeat an evil war lord, saving the Annai Nation. The teenagers return to the surface as honored ambassadors for the intra-earth.


A rustic cabin in South Dakota. Multiple civilizations in the intra-earth.

Based on a True Story


Plot - Premise

Overcoming Monster/Villain,Voyage and Return,Quest

Plot - Other Elements

Happy Ending,Twist

Mature Audience Themes


Main Character Details

Name: Kale Montgomery

Age: 15

Gender: Male

Role: Protagonist

Key Traits: Adventurous,Masculine,Outspoken,Funny,Heroic,Honorable,Charming,Confident,Leader,Strong Moral Code,Romantic

Additional Character Details

Name: Darren Tilly

Age: 15

Gender: Male

Role: Sidekick

Key Traits: Adventurous,Underdog,Clumsy,Insecure,Outspoken,Funny,Sarcastic,Desperate,Heroic,Blunt,Secretive

Additional Character Details

Name: Allie Tilly

Age: 14

Gender: Female

Role: protagonist

Key Traits: Adventurous,Badass,Complex,Confident,Heroic,Leader,Romantic,Outspoken,Sexy,Aggressive,Blunt,Sarcastic

Additional Character Details

Name: Lily Montgomery

Age: 12

Gender: Female

Role: protagonist

Key Traits: Romantic,Obedient,Empathetic,Insecure,Naive,Underdog

Development Pitch

Beneath Storm Mountain has the potential for universal appeal! It is a fun story about a group of teenagers that get trapped and separated within a web of civilizations that exist beneath the earth's crust, and must reunite and find their way home. The intriguing intra-earth civilizations will captivate the audience as well as the loveable characters that must survive in an intra-earth "enlightened" civilization, that is really corrupt. Each character learns a lesson by the end: Kale (humility), Darren (confidence), Allie (emotional control), and Lily (confidence). There's a happy ending! The teenagers defeat the supernatural Shadow Tribe, make it home to the surface, and become ambassadors for the intra-earth. An earlier version of the script placed as a finalist in the 2014 Scriptwriter's Network High Concept Screenplay Competition.

About The Author

Target Audiences

Age: 7-12,13-17,18-34,35-54

Target Gender: Universal

Group Specific

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Publishing Details

Status: No

Hard Copy Available



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