Millennial Secret of Sam Stewart's, Travel in Time
APOCALYPTIC ADVENTURE EPIC FANTASY FAMILY RELIGIOUS SCI-FI HISTORICAL FICTION OTHER MYSTERY ACTION DRAMA
Future,20th Century (multiple decades),Across Centuries,19th Century,Earlier 20th Century
Jperez
Submision Type
book
Logline
In a difficult era, a man named Sam discovers a secret in the mansion that was his dream. All the course of his life he wished to have his own destiny, Discover virus Cure in Future, Parallel world 2019-2026 in space-time, reality plus fiction COVID-19, Angel of Death.
Genre
Apocalyptic,Adventure,Epic,Fantasy,Family,Religious,Sci-fi,Historical Fiction,Other,Mystery,Action,Drama
Short Summary
In a difficult era, a man named Sam discovers a secret in the mansion that was his dream. All the course of his life he wished to have his own destiny, a property and a family of his own, (Covdi 19), and the discovery of his cure outside the earth parallel world ...COVID-19, Angel of Death.
Setting
NY and multiple places.
Based on a True Story
Yes
Plot - Premise
Other,Voyage and Return,Quest,Internal Journey/Rebirth,Rags to Riches,Rebellion Against 'The One'
Plot - Other Elements
Other
Mature Audience Themes
Extreme Violence, Language/Profanity
Main Character Details
Name: Sam Stewart:
Age: 20
Gender: Male
Role: Protagonist
Key Traits: Adventurous,Aspiring,Charming,Decisive,Honorable,Leader,Masculine,Obedient,Patriotic,Religious,Skillful
Additional Character Details
Name: Gforce
Age: 30
Gender: Male
Role: Protagonist
Key Traits: Masculine,Visionary,Decisive,Flexible,Adventurous,Badass,Aspiring,Obedient,Patriotic,Religious,Leader,Educated,Heroic
Additional Character Details
Name: Stewart Apron
Age: 70
Gender: Male
Role: mentor
Key Traits: Masculine,Charming,Selfless,Religious,Obedient,Flexible,Leader,Educated
Additional Character Details
Name: Ariana
Age: 25
Gender: Female
Role: emotional
Key Traits: Religious,Patriotic,Sexy,Romantic,Lone Wolf,Adventurous
Genre
FANTASY, ACTION, SUSPENSE
Brief
A man encounters a magic house from his dreams and sets out to meet his destiny.
Overall Rating
FAIR
Narrative Elements
Authors Writing Style: FAIR
Characterization: FAIR
Commerciality: FAIR
Franchise Potential: FAIR
Pace: FAIR
Premise: FAIR
Structure: FAIR
Theme: FAIR
Accuracy of Book Profile
Sort of - like the book itself, it is very confusing. It needs clarity.
Draw of Story
Nothing - It was very difficult to follow.
Possible Drawbacks
The book is in a very confusing format and it is difficult to care for any of the characters.
Use of Special Effects
THE STORY DOES NOT RELY ON SPECIAL EFFECTS
Primary Hook of Story
I have to be honest - I really don't know what the hook could be because the book was very hard to navigate.
Fanbase Potential
I don't see a large fanbase in its current format - is this Sci-Fi, fantasy, political satire? There isn't any one genre of audience that this would appeal to.
Awards Potential
No - not that kind of film.
Envisioned Budget
MEDIUM BUDGET
Similar Films/TV Series
HARRY POTTER, THE HOBBIT, THE TWO TOWERS
What’s New About the Story
I guess a magic house and something called Covid 19: Angel Of Death is unique.
Lead Characters
The main characters are not painted very clearly - we need to know more about their motivations.
Uniqueness of Story
No. It needs more clarity of narrative.
Possible Formats
Film - Indie
Analyst Recommendation
WORK IN PROGRESS
Justification
While the story has many positive points, it has room for improvement (see possible paths below). If you can't change the story at this point, my suggestion is using your notes as a guide to highlight the best aspects of it when taking the next steps, either putting a pitch page together, a treatment, or a presentation.
Tips for Improvement
The author should re-examine the descriptions of the main characters and make them more complete.