Millennial Secret of Sam Stewart's, Travel in Time

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APOCALYPTIC ADVENTURE EPIC FANTASY FAMILY RELIGIOUS SCI-FI HISTORICAL FICTION OTHER MYSTERY ACTION DRAMA

Future,20th Century (multiple decades),Across Centuries,19th Century,Earlier 20th Century

Jperez

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Submision Type

book

Logline

In a difficult era, a man named Sam discovers a secret in the mansion that was his dream. All the course of his life he wished to have his own destiny, Discover virus Cure in Future, Parallel world 2019-2026 in space-time, reality plus fiction COVID-19, Angel of Death.

Genre

Apocalyptic,Adventure,Epic,Fantasy,Family,Religious,Sci-fi,Historical Fiction,Other,Mystery,Action,Drama

Short Summary

In a difficult era, a man named Sam discovers a secret in the mansion that was his dream. All the course of his life he wished to have his own destiny, a property and a family of his own, (Covdi 19), and the discovery of his cure outside the earth parallel world ...COVID-19, Angel of Death.

Setting

NY and multiple places.

Based on a True Story

Yes

Plot - Premise

Other,Voyage and Return,Quest,Internal Journey/Rebirth,Rags to Riches,Rebellion Against 'The One'

Plot - Other Elements

Other

Mature Audience Themes

Extreme Violence, Language/Profanity

Main Character Details

Name: Sam Stewart:

Age: 20

Gender: Male

Role: Protagonist

Key Traits: Adventurous,Aspiring,Charming,Decisive,Honorable,Leader,Masculine,Obedient,Patriotic,Religious,Skillful

Additional Character Details

Name: Gforce

Age: 30

Gender: Male

Role: Protagonist

Key Traits: Masculine,Visionary,Decisive,Flexible,Adventurous,Badass,Aspiring,Obedient,Patriotic,Religious,Leader,Educated,Heroic

Additional Character Details

Name: Stewart Apron

Age: 70

Gender: Male

Role: mentor

Key Traits: Masculine,Charming,Selfless,Religious,Obedient,Flexible,Leader,Educated

Additional Character Details

Name: Ariana

Age: 25

Gender: Female

Role: emotional

Key Traits: Religious,Patriotic,Sexy,Romantic,Lone Wolf,Adventurous

About The Author

He was born in Santa Isabel, a town in the south of Puerto Rico. From humble birth, with dreams of overcoming and ability to break down the limits of imposed borders, free-thinking, aspires to a better quality of life of the human being with respect to nature and to all living beings. He firmly believes that he has been chosen to bring a message of peace to humanity and to illuminate the entire galaxy with his light. Of course, with the help of many others like him and the blessing of the Almighty. His life has been nuanced by a myriad of experiences, events, dreams, premonitions that, even without showing on any paper, hovered in his mind, feeling that he had not fully complied with the purpose assigned to him. His way of believing in an omnipresent God, different from the one everyone praises, reaffirms his line of thought and inspires him to go unveiling or deciphering each message to share it with the world. But now as an adult at age 57, desire J. Pérez's is to make the world aware of his stories and stories that oscillate between reality and fiction, trying to fulfill more than one dream, finding the true origin of life and death, and create a balance of life between him and the humanity that surrounds him, in order to carry a message of peace and love with the Creator's favor. The secret of SG, several people for decades have presented having died and returned to life. Several times entering the death dimension and returning and the following life is the life of Georky RHN-G. Author: J. Perez

Target Audiences

Age: 18-34

Target Gender: Universal,Other

Group Specific

Information not completed

Publishing Details

Status: Yes: self-published

Publisher: kindle ebook

Year Published: 2020

Hard Copy Available

No

ISBN

ISBN: 9798644348077

Genre

FANTASY, ACTION, SUSPENSE

Brief

A man encounters a magic house from his dreams and sets out to meet his destiny.

Overall Rating

FAIR

Point of View

THIRD PERSON

Narrative Elements

Authors Writing Style: FAIR

Characterization: FAIR

Commerciality: FAIR

Franchise Potential: FAIR

Pace: FAIR

Premise: FAIR

Structure: FAIR

Theme: FAIR

Accuracy of Book Profile

Sort of - like the book itself, it is very confusing. It needs clarity.

Draw of Story

Nothing - It was very difficult to follow.

Possible Drawbacks

The book is in a very confusing format and it is difficult to care for any of the characters.

Use of Special Effects

THE STORY DOES NOT RELY ON SPECIAL EFFECTS

Primary Hook of Story

I have to be honest - I really don't know what the hook could be because the book was very hard to navigate.

Fanbase Potential

I don't see a large fanbase in its current format - is this Sci-Fi, fantasy, political satire? There isn't any one genre of audience that this would appeal to.

Awards Potential

No - not that kind of film.

Envisioned Budget

MEDIUM BUDGET

Similar Films/TV Series

HARRY POTTER, THE HOBBIT, THE TWO TOWERS

What’s New About the Story

I guess a magic house and something called Covid 19: Angel Of Death is unique.

Lead Characters

The main characters are not painted very clearly - we need to know more about their motivations.

Uniqueness of Story

No. It needs more clarity of narrative.

Possible Formats

Film - Indie

Analyst Recommendation

WORK IN PROGRESS

Justification

While the story has many positive points, it has room for improvement (see possible paths below). If you can't change the story at this point, my suggestion is using your notes as a guide to highlight the best aspects of it when taking the next steps, either putting a pitch page together, a treatment, or a presentation.

Tips for Improvement

The author should re-examine the descriptions of the main characters and make them more complete.