THE MEAN
Submision Type
book
Logline
Told with elements of heart-rending pathos, tension, and scenes of disarming humor, THE MEAN is a riveting novel of school days that looks at the nature of learning, the best and worst in education, the drama of human relationships, and the threat of violence that has become a part of our lives.
Genre
Comedy,Drama,Other,Suspense/Thriller,Romance
Short Summary
With a supply of Sarin nerve gas as well as explosives and automatic weapons, members of a radical group who believe they have been betrayed by a high level Middle East negotiator decide to seek revenge by attacking a Long Island high school attended by the negotiator’s daughters.
Setting
New York
Based on a True Story
No
Plot - Premise
Overcoming Monster/Villain,Internal Journey/Rebirth,Tragedy,Other
Plot - Other Elements
Meaningful Message,Philosophical Questions,Other
Mature Audience Themes
Information not completed
Main Character Details
Name: Brian Scarlucci
Age: 40s
Gender: Male
Role: Protagonist
Key Traits: Aspiring,Charming,Complex,Confident,Decisive,Empathetic,Engaging,Gracious,Educated,Honorable,Leader,Masculine,Outspoken,Skillful,Funny,Romantic,Sophisticated,Strong Moral Code
Additional Character Details
Name: Brian Scarlucci
Age: 40s
Gender: Male
Role: Protagonist
Key Traits: Charming,Complex,Confident,Decisive,Empathetic,Engaging,Gracious,Educated,Honorable,Leader,Masculine,Sexy,Outspoken,Skillful,Funny,Romantic,Sarcastic,Sophisticated,Strong Moral Code
Additional Character Details
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Additional Character Details
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Genre
DRAMA, ACTION, THRILLER
Brief
Brian is the Assistant Principal at Central High School. He deals with various incidents such as an health emergency, sex scandal and threats from a mobster. His personal life is in disarray with the death of his disabled wife and arrest of his closest friend. To top it all off, there is a terrorist attack on the school.
Overall Rating
FAIR
Narrative Elements
Authors Writing Style: FAIR
Characterization: FAIR
Commerciality: FAIR
Franchise Potential: FAIR
Pace: FAIR
Premise: FAIR
Structure: FAIR
Theme: FAIR
Accuracy of Book Profile
The book does reflect the idea of the book but doesn't explain the plot well. It is more an everyday account of some of the shenanigans that can happen in an assistant principals life with a high paced, terrorist attack added at the end.
Draw of Story
The story begins with an account of some individuals planning an attack. They are targeting an American school because a traitor to their organizations' children attend the school. They plan on killing them as a way to punish him. It pulls the audience into the plot from the beginning.
Possible Drawbacks
The book rambles throughout, showing various points in Brian's life as an Assistant principal. It also shows his personal life with a disabled, dying wife. It becomes mundane as the story progresses. The plot of the attack on the school is hinted at throughout in the form of glances. It takes a back burner to the main story and them erupts and causes chaos for the characters at the very end. The planned attack is almost completely detached from the story until it is forced upon the audience. It barely connects to the story besides the targets of the attack attending the school.
Use of Special Effects
THE STORY DOES NOT RELY ON SPECIAL EFFECTS
Primary Hook of Story
The hook is that a foreign criminal organization has plans to kill the daughters of a traitor who live in America. I would watch this movie for the action at the end.
Fanbase Potential
This will not have a large fan base because there are few elements in the story to keep the audience interested. The school setting has some entertaining moments but it goes on for too long. The violent attack on the school could be triggering for many as well.
Awards Potential
I do not see this having awards potential without a major overhaul. It could if the attack on the school was brought to the forefront and handled with care. It is an important topic with the amount of school shootings that occurred in the last 10 years.
Envisioned Budget
MEDIUM BUDGET
Similar Films/TV Series
BAD TEACHER, BOSTON PUBLIC
What’s New About the Story
The story is not original. It incorporates a lot of known school tropes and then adds a violent attack to finish it off. A focus on the terrorist organization and there attack intertwined with the daughters who are the target of the attack. There needs to be more of a connection between the two storylines.
Lead Characters
The lead character is a normal guy who finds himself as an Assistant Principal. There is nothing that stands out about him.
Uniqueness of Story
This is an average story that needs work. The two storylines need to collide earlier. The daughters who are targets should be main characters. The other alternative is to cut the entire violent shooting out and make it a quirky, school dramedy, playing up Brian and his various, daily encounters with the staff and students,
Possible Formats
Film - Indie, Film - Streaming, Film - Studio, TV Series - Cable, TV Series - Limited Run / Mini-Series, TV Series - Streaming
Analyst Recommendation
WORK IN PROGRESS
Justification
While the story has many positive points, it has room for improvement (see possible paths below). If you can't change the story at this point, my suggestion is using your notes as a guide to highlight the best aspects of it when taking the next steps, either putting a pitch page together, a treatment, or a presentation.
Tips for Improvement
The story needs to find its purpose. What is it trying to portray? What is the message? The book profile explains this but it is not translated cohesively in the book. Gun violence in school should be given the respect it deserves and it doesn't while playing up racist themes such as Middle Eastern terrorist.