RELIGION

The author mixes science and verses from the Bible to explain elements as extraterrestrial life, Big Ben, and the creation of humanity.

FAIR

THIRD PERSON

Authors Writing Style: FAIR

Characterization: FAIR

Commerciality: FAIR

Franchise Potential: FAIR

Pace: FAIR

Premise: GOOD

Structure: FAIR

Theme: FAIR

It is accurate.

The craziness. The author states theories that mix Bible teachings and verses with scientific discoveries. It all sounds crazy but somewhat intriguing.

It's too long. After some time, you stop caring about the bunch of details and citations.

THE STORY RELIES HEAVILY ON SPECIAL EFFECTS

The hook is the idea that science can prove religion and vice versa.

It depends. If the story is defined as fiction, I believe it could attract people. If it follows the idea that the author has evidence and can prove his theories, and take it seriously, I don't think so.

No. It's based on unproven "evidence," and it could only have a chance if defined as fiction.

LARGE BUDGET

BATTLEFIELD EARTH: FILM WITH JOHN TRAVOLTA BASED ON SCIENTOLOGY'S BELIEFS. DE CARONA COM OS ÓVNIS: BRAZILIAN SERIES IN WHICH A MAN TRIES TO PROVE THAT ALIENS HAVE BEEN VISITING OUR PLANET.

The author highly believes in his own theories. It's an extensive document that shows the author did a lot of research to complete the book.

The main character is God. This fact itself is enough to make the lead stand out. The characters are ET's, angels, demons... in spite of these characters are not well developed, they are strong figures.

It's a rare gem because I've never read anything like this, it's original because the author did his own research, and apparently created his own evidence. However, it has the negative side of not being verified.

Film - Indie, TV Series - Limited Run / Mini-Series, TV Series - Streaming, Unscripted

WORK IN PROGRESS

While the story has many positive points, it has room for improvement (see possible paths below). If you can't change the story at this point, my suggestion is using your notes as a guide to highlight the best aspects of it when taking the next steps, either putting a pitch page together, a treatment, or a presentation.

This book should be adapted as a fiction story or a fake documentary. Another acceptable way could be a series that would show some religious and cults beliefs. It has a lot of material, it has generic but intriguing characters (as angels, demons, ET's, God), it follows a somewhat chronological structure, and it has interesting plots that could work well if the producer chooses the fiction side. It also could become a fake doc, with the author as the main figure (as a researcher) who presents his evidence and ideas. Also, it could be part of a documentary that shows how some religious people and cults strongly believe in things science cannot prove. Despite its craziness, it has some ways to go, but the problem is: the author totally believes in his theories, so would he accept to have his book turned into a mockumentary? Would he accept be presented as a fanatic who believes in not verified evidence? I don't think so.