The Captain

Jessica Brasacchio 2694987546669



Caroline Masci

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Becca is a doctor for the Massachusetts Beavers, her new hotter then sin neighbour happens to be the team captain. Things arent as they seem with the Beavers, and players are getting mysteriously injured and made to play. the more Becca looks for answers, the more she only finds questions.



Short Summary

Becca move house into a new neighbourhood, and manages to get a job as the team doctor for the Beavers ice hockey team, which is also owned by her best friends dad. Before Becca can commence her new job, she needs to finish off her last few shifts at the local hospital.

Max is severely injured, and in a coma. The Governing body of NHL steps in and exposes the corruption, putting the team up for auction. which is when Max and his friends decide to buy the team and become the first owner/player team in the league. They come back from defeat and win the Stanley cup.



Based on a True Story


Plot - Premise

Other,Overcoming Monster/Villain

Plot - Other Elements

Happy Ending,Twist

Mature Audience Themes


Main Character Details

Name: Becca

Age: 25

Gender: Female

Role: Protagonist

Key Traits: Clumsy,Engaging,Romantic,Visionary,Charming,Faithful,Gracious,Strong Moral Code

Additional Character Details

Name: Max

Age: 25

Gender: Male

Role: Protagonist

Key Traits: Badass,Confident,Engaging,Heroic,Honorable,Leader,Masculine,Blunt,Skillful,Funny,Romantic,Sarcastic

Additional Character Details

Name: Gemma

Age: 25

Gender: Female

Role: sidekick

Key Traits: Badass,Adventurous,Confident,Sexy,Charming

Additional Character Details

Name: Gemma

Age: 25

Gender: Female

Role: sidekick

Key Traits: Charming,Confident,Engaging,Sexy,Blunt

Development Pitch

The Captain is a new age romantic comedy with a twist. Becca is a young doctor who gets a job as the team doctor for the Massachusetts Beavers ice hockey team. Her hot new neighbour (Max) and his hot hunky friends also happens to be players of her new team. While Becca loves her new job, something seems off. The players seem to get injured in closed training exercises, and it never gets reported. Becca starts to ask questions, only this leads her no answers and she is put on the sidelines. The team starts losing games against teams they won in the previous years, and the players start to question what is happening. Max is injured, and may never play again and the corruption within the team is exposed. Max's friends decide to buy the team and become the first owner/player team. Most Romantic movies follow a timeline, this potential movie adaptation differs because there is an underlying of corruption within the NHL team, which adds to the budding romance in the story. This makes for a more exciting story that has the views on the edge of their seat guessing, whilst still following the two main characters in their romance journey.

About The Author

I am a young up and coming author who enjoys taking some of the most awkward situations in life and writing about them for everyone to enjoy and laugh at, because at the end of the day just about everyone has experienced some sort of awkward encounter.

Target Audiences

Age: 18-34

Target Gender: Female Leaning

Group Specific

romance lovers

Publishing Details

Status: Yes: with a Publisher

Publisher: Pegasus

Year Published: 2020

Hard Copy Available



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