The Truth Lies within the Heart & Soul

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RELIGIOUS DRAMA MYSTERY

2000s

Kathleen Shasky

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Logline

The Truth Lies within the Heart & Soul brings to light the missing pieces of who we are and how we are all connected. How humanity didn’t begin until the true love of Yeshua and Inanna, Twin Flames began creating, through love, the love of The Divine

Genre

Religious,Drama,Mystery

Short Summary

The Garden of Eden. The Garden of Eden was a place of beauty and tranquility with many kinds of animals who communicated telepathically. The human bodies while in The Garden of Eden were crystalline, meaning because our vibration was much higher and pure it did not break down like our present day


The many lessons on self-love and self-care to the messages through the Angels, Ascended Masters and Divine continuously encourage humanity to grow in love. Know you are loved and worthy. Grow in The Divine Love and Light and spread this beautiful energy out to others.

Setting

The Garden of Eden, Egypt, Jordan, Israel, Middle East, France

Based on a True Story

Yes

Plot - Premise

Internal Journey/Rebirth

Plot - Other Elements

Other

Mature Audience Themes

Substance Abuse

Main Character Details

Name: Jaimee Barrington

Age: 30

Gender: Female

Role: Emotional

Key Traits: Adventurous

Additional Character Details

Name: Jaimee Leigh Barrington

Age: 30

Gender: Female

Role: Emotional

Key Traits: Adventurous,Faithful

Additional Character Details

The author has not yet written this

Additional Character Details

The author has not yet written this

Development Pitch

This will draw you into real life and spiritual dramatic events bringing you through full vision battles of light beings fighting dark beings, how love does concur hate and why we are at the precipice of spiritual awakening now. No more spoon-fed religion. No more being told who, and what you are, but instead awakening to your own truth. Connecting with your spiritual soul self and your higher self and learning self-love, self-care, and balance. The ultimate goal is Love, using allowing, accepting, and appreciating with forgiveness of self and others assists you through the five phases/stages of transcending and then Ascending. The time is NOW, humanity must be awakened!

About The Author

Target Audiences

Age: 7-12,13-17,18-34,35-54,55+

Target Gender: Universal

Group Specific

Information not completed

Publishing Details

Status: Yes: with a Publisher

Publisher: Page Publishing

Year Published: 2019

Hard Copy Available

No

ISBN

Information not completed

Genre

RELIGION

Brief

Christianity's storyline is turned on its head with the revelation of the Divine Ones. Rather than the traditional Trinity, the five Divine Ones correct the past's misconceptions. In particular Jesus and his true love Mary Magdalene's life story of reincarnation throughout the Bible is explained in depth. The Divine then help instruct how to change in order to become five dimensional.

Overall Rating

FAIR

Point of View

FIRST PERSON

Narrative Elements

Authors Writing Style: FAIR

Characterization: FAIR

Commerciality: FAIR

Franchise Potential: FAIR

Pace: FAIR

Premise: FAIR

Structure: FAIR

Theme: FAIR

Accuracy of Book Profile

The logline and development pitch mostly reflect the major purpose of the book. Given that there are five Divine ones it would make more sense to focus on their five dimensional identities in the character details rather than repeating a singular version of one character twice. The short summary's focus the Garden of Eden is a small piece of the narrative and thus may be better suited by explaining the reincarnations throughout time instead of a singular moment. The use of "concur" in the development pitch seems like it would be better as "conquer" instead.

Draw of Story

The new Christian ideas are innovative and unlike any religious texts beforehand. The idea that three-dimensional beings should try to change to master their eternal self as the key to fixing problems on Earth is also interesting.

Possible Drawbacks

The structure makes the ideas difficult to follow and there is more focus on the characters rather than a clear narrative with an arc for the main characters for the audience to become emotionally invested in. In the same vein where Superman or movies about Jesus struggle to show relatable flaws, not knowing what the Divine's goal and flaws are makes seeing their inner transformation less apparent and supportable. By making the characters and their connection to their different version more clear and showing how their characters have changed not just telling about the change in discussions might help create an easier to follow plot and improve character support.

Use of Special Effects

THE STORY RELIES HEAVILY ON SPECIAL EFFECTS

Primary Hook of Story

The hook is that Jesus and Mary Magdalene are twin flames that have existed in different moments throughout and Bible and history. They have a child which change the traditional views of Christianity on its head to showcase a Devine five member group rather than just the standard three.

Fanbase Potential

Given that this is a religious themed concept this is likely to have a smaller audience. Some Christians may view the innovative ideas as non-Christian so the fanbase within the religious community is likely to get smaller within its small base. Its controversy in the narrative's new ideas may however draw a surprise larger crowd based off media criticism.

Awards Potential

Given its religious overtones this is unlikely to garner awards and because of its alternative viewpoints will likely not get nominated for Christian or religious awards either.

Envisioned Budget

MEDIUM BUDGET

Similar Films/TV Series

ANCIENT ALIENS, THE DA VINCI CODE, GOD'S NOT DEAD, PASSION OF THE CHRIST, I ORIGINS, CLOUD ATLAS

What’s New About the Story

The use of reincarnation to explain destiny within Christianity is definitely inventive. The Divine being instead of five is unique and the use of Angels' perspectives in rare. Focusing more on a chronological narrative showing how the divine came to master the fifth dimension rather than telling how to ascend may make the narrative easier to emotionally invest in and bring a more dimensions to the characters outside of perfection in having already attained ascension.

Lead Characters

The characters of Gabriel and Adaria are wise and confrontational without being aggressive. They speak their mind about their own truths no matter how difficult the change might be that needs to be made.

Uniqueness of Story

This has some inventive ideas, but as a narrative it would need more of a unified internal conflict to create revelations and a storyline rather than a panel discussion about the fifth dimensions. The concepts are more difficult to understand as being told rather than explained through being shown in the characters' actions in a chronological order.

Possible Formats

Film - Streaming, TV Series - Limited Run / Mini-Series, TV Series - Streaming

Analyst Recommendation

WORK IN PROGRESS

Justification

While the story has many positive points, it has room for improvement (see possible paths below). If you can't change the story at this point, my suggestion is using your notes as a guide to highlight the best aspects of it when taking the next steps, either putting a pitch page together, a treatment, or a presentation.

Tips for Improvement

Using the inventive concepts as applied to a linear structure so that the characters show the examples rather than tell about the history, could make the plot easier to follow and create further investment in the characters. Giving the characters an internal conflict that they must overcome before ascension could help show their transformation and allow this life lessons to be shown in order by theme rather than reflected upon.