Wicked Whispers Spoke Their Names

B.J. Kirven

Book Cover

GENRE

DRAMA HISTORICAL FICTION

    Core Theme

    GRIEF

    TIME PERIOD

    Earlier 20th Century

    COMPARABLE TITLES

    LITTLE HOUSE ON THE PRAIRIE

    CHARACTER LIST

    • JENNIE: 20S. LEAD. GRIEF STRICKEN, DETERMINED

    • PERRY: 20S. BRAVE, STRONG, JENNIE’S LONG SUFFERING HUSBAND.

    • RED FEATHER: 20S. A NATIVE WHO HELPS JENNIE AND HER FAMILY.

    • JESSICA/JESSE: CHILD. JENNIE’S OLDEST SON

    • VERA/VERE: CHILD.JENNIE’S MIDDLE SON

    • IRIS/IKE: CHILD. JENNIE’S YOUNGEST SON

    Logline

    When a smallpox outbreak kills her beloved daughter Lizzie, it nearly shatters Coloradan pioneer Jennie Duncan. Consumed with grief, Jennie becomes obsessed with moving to Wyoming to escape the overwhelming memories of Lizzie.

    Target Audiences

    Age: 18-34,35-54,55+

    Target Gender: Universal

    Setting

    Cherry Creek, Colorado to Banner, Wyoming in a covered wagon

    Based on a True Story

    Yes

    Publishing Details

    Status: Yes: self-published

    Publisher: Amazon

    Year Published: 2015

    Starting Description

    Jennie and her family set out on the dangerous trip from Colorado to northern Wyoming in a covered wagon. Besieged by brutal weather, angry tribal entities and emotional trauma, the family secrets unfold in unimaginable events.

    Ending Description

    The battered family arrives in Wyoming where Jennie gives birth to her fourth child she dreamed would replace her dead daughter Lizzie. Upon the revelation that the child was not a girl, Jennie retreats into her former erratic mindset.

    Group Specific

    Information not completed

    Hard Copy Available

    Yes

    ISBN

    1511472251

    Mature Audience Themes

    Information not completed

    Plot - Other Elements

    Twist

    Plot - Premise

    Tragedy,Rebellion Against 'The One'

    Main Character Details

    Name: Jennie Duncan

    Age: mid to late 20's

    Gender: Female

    Role: Emotional

    Key Traits: Adventurous,Secretive,Manipulative,Unapologetic,Complex

    Additional Character Details

    Name: Pioneer gentle husband

    Age: 30's

    Gender: Male

    Role: Logical

    Key Traits: Desperate,Faithful,Heroic,Masculine

    Additional Character Details

    Name: 3 additional children

    Age: 3-6

    Gender: Male

    Role: emotional

    Key Traits: Obedient

    Additional Character Details

    Name: 3 additional Duncan children

    Age: ages 3 through 6

    Gender: Male

    Role: emotional

    Key Traits: Naive,Engaging,Complex

    Brief

    A pioneer woman, stricken with grief after the death of her baby daughter, is determined to get a fresh start. On their journey to a new homestead in Wyoming, the family faces the unveiling of closely held secrets, harsh terrain and hostile natives.

    What We Liked

    - Strong female lead;
    - The character dynamic Jennie sets up with her husband and sons;
    - Interesting setting/locations - very cinematic in nature;
    - The introduction of a native character bridging the gap between settlers and hostile natives;
    - The sweeping, epic feel of the story;
    - It is a character study in the perversion of grief and how it can shape the entire dynamic of a
    family set against the harsh backdrop of pioneer life;
    - The structure could easily be broken down into episodic length featurettes.

    Synopsis

    Still grieving from the smallpox death of her infant daughter, Lizzie, Jennie wants to outrun her grief and get a fresh start. Determined to make it to Sheridan, Wyoming, Jennie corrals her husband, Perry, and their three daughters, Jessica, Vera and Iris, for the cross country journey in covered wagons. While camping out, the family meets a homesteader called Augustine. When Jessica is bitten by a rattlesnake, Augustine tells them that his wife, Catherine was given snake bite medicine by a native and that she can save Jessica’s life. He swifts her away to his home and Jennie follows on horseback. Somehow Jennie gets lost, but is rescued by a young native man. He says that his mother was helped by a white woman and he wants to honor his mother by helping another white woman. He takes her safely to Augustine’s house where the family is reunited.

    At another campsite, the children meet a group of boys their age. Jennie is very stern with the kids and doesn’t want them to interact with others, but Perry wants to give them a chance to be around other kids their own age. While playing, one of the boys discovers that Vera is actually a boy. Vera is humiliated at having to wear dresses meant for his dead sister. When Perry sees the anguish of his son, he decides that he has to stand up for him and the other two daughters that are actually sons. He dresses them in his old clothes, cuts off their long hair and renames them, Jesse, Vere and Ike. The boys are thrilled to be able to be their true selves, but worry that their mother won’t approve. She doesn’t and when it’s time to leave camp, Jennie stays behind. While the boys and their dad travel west, Jennie broods about the situation. However, she decides to rejoin her family and goes after them. She has to pass a harsh night out on the prairie on her own, where she accidentally shoots something or someone, has her rifle stolen and is rescued again by the native man before being reunited once more with the family.

    Jennie discovers that she pregnant and is overjoyed to think she could give birth to another daughter. This buoys her spirits and gives her the last push needed to make to their desired location. Perry is hurt by falling logs at the homestead site and can’t work. The native man arrives again. This time he is injured and needs help. Jennie offers him food and shelter in exchange for helping to build their home. The house is barely built when Jennie goes into labor. With the help of Perry and Catherine, Jennie gives birth to a healthy baby. She once again refuses to acknowledge that the baby is a boy. She names him Sarah and wraps him in pink fabric as the book concludes.

    About The Author

    B. J. Kirven has spent the past forty-five years in Wyoming. A true fan of the state, Kirven served on the Wyoming Travel Commission for two terms, traveling throughout many small communities and promoting the state both nationally and internationally. For the past twenty-two years, Kirven has worked as a real estate broker. When not working, Kirven is an avid photographer and watercolor artist.