Fairies Sorcery and the Devil

Donald Richter donrichter1@yahoo.com 1232192438331

FANTASY ADVENTURE FOLKTALE RELIGIOUS

17th Century or Earlier,2000s,Across Centuries

Donald R Richter

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Logline

Man has been giving powers to save the race of fairies, there are 3 races of fairy. This story brings back Merlin, and the Greek Gods, there is a evil race of fairy with handlers, the Devil just pops in and has a short battle. It has a love story woven in.

Genre

Fantasy,Adventure,Folktale,Religious

Short Summary

Jack and old man, *who grows younger the more fairy dust he handles) saves a Green Fairy from the Blue fairy, then tries to kill him and is saved by a red fairy. He finds Merlin a old man whos wife is dying, and is a fairy guardian he teaches Jack Sorcery and gets Medusa's book of dark magic.


Jack is hunting Blue Guardians the bad guys. He has been told by Mother Mary to search Bobba-Yaga, she was Merlin's teacher, He brings in Zeus, who was sent to kill him, and released Venus, brought in Poseidon, next book Fairies Sorcery and the Greek Gods, then and the Titians.

Setting

State of Washington, then to Holly Wood, Wisconsin, the Caribbean

Based on a True Story

No

Plot - Premise

Overcoming Monster/Villain

Plot - Other Elements

Philosophical Questions,Happy Ending

Mature Audience Themes

Information not completed

Main Character Details

Name: Jack Robinson

Age: 84 to 45

Gender: Male

Role: Skeptic

Key Traits: Masculine,Adventurous,Desperate,Heroic,Educated,Honorable,Leader,Faithful,Gracious,Romantic,Unapologetic,Modest

Additional Character Details

Name: Merlin the Great

Age: 10,000

Gender: Male

Role: Mentor

Key Traits: Adventurous,Badass,Aggressive,Charming,Gracious,Heroic,Educated,Honorable,Leader,Romantic

Additional Character Details

Name: Andre

Age: 1000

Gender: Male

Role: sidekick

Key Traits: Charming,Faithful,Honorable,Obedient

Additional Character Details

The author has not yet written this

Development Pitch

This book brings the old sorcerers and Gods of old, into the twenty first century, it is a set up for the next book fairies sorcery and the Greek gods. Jack devotes his life to saving the Red fairy a race of fairy that have been enslaved for centuries, and want to take over the world. Jack gets his power from God himself, there were no Archangels close by. He kills Medusa and takes her book of dark magic, Merlin teaches him how to use magic. Jack befriends Zeus and Poseidon and brings back Venus Zeus's true love, and promises to bring back Calypso. Jacks wife was killed by Blues fairies this gives him the fire to free the red and destroy the blue. It tells where Merlin got his power, he was saved by Bobba-Yaga and was her helper, aka the dragon slayer. Good story not the best writing but a good story, has a fight with the Devil but he is to crafty to defeat.

About The Author

Don RIchter Retired

Target Audiences

Age: 13-17,18-34,35-54,55+

Target Gender: Universal

Group Specific

Information not completed

Publishing Details

Status: Yes: with a Publisher

Publisher: Xlibris

Year Published: 2019

Hard Copy Available

Yes

ISBN

2019907475 / 9781786936929

Genre

FANTASY

Brief

After inadvertently saving a green fairy from the onslaught of the evil blue fairies, Jack, a recently widowed older man, sets out on a journey to help an oppressed race of fairies, encountering fantastical beings from mythology and even religious ones along the way.

Overall Rating

FAIR

Point of View

THIRD PERSON

Narrative Elements

Authors Writing Style: FAIR

Characterization: FAIR

Commerciality: FAIR

Franchise Potential: GOOD

Pace: FAIR

Premise: FAIR

Structure: FAIR

Theme: GOOD

Accuracy of Book Profile

It does reflect the content of the book, but the descriptions are confusing, somewhat poorly written, and include too much information. It isn't easy to understand the meaning of the logline, for instance.

Draw of Story

The way the narrative throws us straight into the action, leaving explanations for later.

Possible Drawbacks

There are many overly expository dialogues and phrases, which end up breaking the story's rhythm. Furthermore, the excess of events, characters, and fantastic references make the book confusing and challenging to follow.

Use of Special Effects

THE STORY RELIES HEAVILY ON SPECIAL EFFECTS

Primary Hook of Story

The existence of a magical world hidden within our own world, with different versions of fantastic beings and even God and the Devil, mixed in a great melting pot of references.

Fanbase Potential

There is potential to reach a large fanbase, especially for the magical theme, appealing to children and youth. However, as it stands, the story is more confusing than compelling.

Awards Potential

No. The story is not ready and needs revision and major edits; it would hardly be an Awards candidate.

Envisioned Budget

LARGE BUDGET

Similar Films/TV Series

HARRY POTTER - A TEENAGER FINDS OUT HE IS A WIZARD WITH A TRAGIC PAST AND DISCOVERS A WORLD OF MAGIC HIDDEN FROM MOST ORDINARY PEOPLE PERCY JACKSON & THE OLYMPIANS - YOUNG PERCY DISCOVERS HE IS A DEMIGOD AND GOES ON ADVENTURES IN A WORLD INSPIRED BY THE OLD LEGENDS OF GREEK MYTHOLOGY.

What’s New About the Story

The story's unique aspect is that the great hero is an elderly, widowed man who is already emotionally preparing for death. However, the fact that he gets younger due to magic could be avoided, as it dilutes some of the main argument's originality.

Lead Characters

The main character is brave, intelligent, and determined. Despite having lived a long life, he didn't lose his sense of adventure and wonder about things he didn't know.

Uniqueness of Story

It's not a rare gem. The writing and especially the narrative arc demand more attention and extensive revisions.

Possible Formats

Film: Studio, Streaming TV Series: Streaming, Cable

Analyst Recommendation

WORK IN PROGRESS

Justification

While the story has many positive points, it has room for improvement (see possible paths below). If you can't change the story at this point, my suggestion is using your notes as a guide to highlight the best aspects of it when taking the next steps, either putting a pitch page together, a treatment, or a presentation.

Tips for Improvement

The main change is to give more space for the narrative to develop naturally and for the characters to be presented more powerfully, intensifying their relationship. Why not leave some of the characters shown here to integrate the plot only in the following books, since the intention seems to be to start a literary series? Giving the audience room to breathe and emotionally engage with the narrative can be an essential aspect of ensuring that this story succeeds and that there is a general interest in upcoming books. Furthermore, although the merging of several mythologies is compelling, it could be done more moderately. The universe created here has great potential to delight people of all ages. Still, it is necessary to calibrate the ideas and their development, creating a narrative that sounds natural and fantastic without one thing excluding the other.