My hero El Santo

Book Cover

DRAMA ACTION

2000s

Daniel G. Berber

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Logline

A child who fights a dangerous cancer, is inspired by his father's hero, El Santo, to overcome this disease. The child loses his father in a tragic accident. A fighter tries to help, the child gives him a life lesson.

Genre

Drama,Action

Short Summary

A kid fight cancer for him is not to hard, because have a family who cares about his health., he dreams to be a wrestles want to be like his hero El Santo.


After loss his Father on tragic accident, he meets a wrestler who thinks is the best wrestler of all times , The kid give him a lesson on life, making the wrestler change, The kid dies could never recovered from the death of his father

Setting

optional

Based on a True Story

No

Plot - Premise

Rebellion Against 'The One',Tragedy

Plot - Other Elements

Philosophical Questions

Mature Audience Themes

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Main Character Details

Name: Benito

Age: 6 to 8

Gender: Male

Role: Mentor

Key Traits: Adventurous,Charming,Obedient

Additional Character Details

Name: Charlie

Age: 25

Gender: Male

Role: Antagonist

Key Traits: Adventurous,Badass,Aggressive,Charming,Confident,Heroic,Romantic,Skillful,Sexy,Villainous,Masculine

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Development Pitch

A child who fights a dangerous cancer, is inspired by his father's hero, El Santo, to overcome this disease. The child loses his father in a tragic accident. A fighter tries to help, his an arrogant tell the kid he is the best wrestler of the word . he gets frustrated when the kid tell him, the best wrestler is El Santo, and he try to be like El Santo to please the kid. He learn the lesson, seek forgiveness from all the people he offended, The kid was never able to recover from the death of his father and dies of sadness.

About The Author

Daniel G. Berber I'm an Immigrant from Mexico, I come to USA to find the American dream, one of the was to write a book I gave on my mind for a long time, recently I publish it, an I did the second, One is My hero el Santo an the first is Crushing Bones

Target Audiences

Age: 7-12,55+

Target Gender: Universal

Group Specific

two cultural Spanish and Anglo

Publishing Details

Status: Yes: self-published

Year Published: 2020

Hard Copy Available

Yes

ISBN

Information not completed

Genre

DRAMA

Brief

Benito, a young child, is trying to recover from cancer when his father is killed right before his eyes in a serious car accident. Benito continues to follow his father's hero, the wrestler El Santo for strength to overcome his sadness and cancer. Another fighter, Charlie, tries to help Benito, but ends up being helped by the boy's wisdom. Charlie is able to change for the better thanks to Benito.

Overall Rating

FAIR

Point of View

THIRD PERSON

Narrative Elements

Authors Writing Style: FAIR

Characterization: FAIR

Commerciality: GOOD

Franchise Potential: GOOD

Pace: GOOD

Premise: EXCELLENT

Structure: FAIR

Theme: GOOD

Accuracy of Book Profile

The book profile does accurately depict the story minus that the ending doesn't make it clear that Benito died in the end which the development pitch does discuss. The pitch and the summary are a bit similar so the pitch might elaborate more on the lessons and themes of the story to add further information to the profile.

Draw of Story

Benito saving his anti-hero savior is a heartwarming experience. Benito is strong and full of an incredible amount of emotional investment. The wrestling world's theatrics is also compelling.

Possible Drawbacks

Sometimes the dialogue when Charlie is Charlie as the antagonist before the transformation, his meanness lacks subtext and depth. It is hard to humanize the antagonist without understanding their motivation for treating others so hideously.

Use of Special Effects

THE STORY RELIES A LITTLE BIT ON SPECIAL EFFECTS

Primary Hook of Story

The hook is that Benito's father dies in a car crash shortly after Benito is supposed to recover from cancer. He watches his father's death with his own eyes. His connection to Charlie is vague but heartfelt and the life lessons role swapping is expected but sweet.

Fanbase Potential

Depending on the genre this could be have a medium audience or if Charlie's life is toned down this could have a larger audiences as a family or children friendly drama.

Awards Potential

Depending on the child actor for Benito, there is some potential for their nomination as there is a lot of trauma and strong themes. There would need to be a fine line though of how saccharine and saintly Benito is depicted as to make him fully three-dimensional.

Envisioned Budget

LOW BUDGET

Similar Films/TV Series

A WALK TO REMEMBER, PEANUT BUTTER FALCON, THE ROOM, ME, EARL AND THE DYING GIRL, PAPER MOON

What’s New About the Story

The originality of the story stems from Benito's mentor relationship with Charlie. Even though the adult is supposed to help the child, they are the one who ends up getting transformed. By creating more depth to Charlie's inner conflict at the beginning, his transformation could be even stronger and more realistic.

Lead Characters

Benito is brave, strong and unfailingly kind. Charlie starts out as a certifiable jerk in every which way he possibly could be, but his attempt at selflessness for Benito eventually blossoms to other aspects of his life until he becomes a reliable and accountable person.

Uniqueness of Story

The relationship between Benito and Charlie is special but could use certain adjustments to even out their bond to make Charlie's contributions to Benito more equal.

Possible Formats

Film - Indie, Film - Streaming, Film - Studio

Analyst Recommendation

WORK IN PROGRESS

Justification

While the story has many positive points, it has room for improvement (see possible paths below). If you can't change the story at this point, my suggestion is using your notes as a guide to highlight the best aspects of it when taking the next steps, either putting a pitch page together, a treatment, or a presentation.

Tips for Improvement

Making Benito's internal conflict and emotional arc more apparent with influence from Charlie would help strengthen their bond on a non-idol level. Making Charlie as influential on Benito as Benito is on Charlie would also help their unique relationship seem even more authentic. The motivation behind Charlie's antagonistic beginning could be more refined rather than making him a jerk without context at first.