The Afro Avengers, Savage Justice

Calvin Dixon reedcdixon@gmail.com 4524597051546

SCI-FI FANTASY HISTORICAL FICTION ACTION ADVENTURE

Across Centuries,Future

Calvin Dixon

Logline

Savage Justice is an ageless story that is common to everyone. But it's’ never been told from a black man’s observations and perspective. A tale of hope, love, futility, courage, and camaraderie. Evolution revisited to transform us to a single race. A race of brown people. No black, no white.

Genre

Sci-fi,Fantasy,Historical Fiction,Action,Adventure

Short Summary

Savage Justice is a fascinating story of humanities failures and forthcoming changes. It is a story of evolution revisited. Indiscernible events occurring unseen for the betterment of humanity. It began with the birth of Ytubu Gambizi Jr. He was abducted and enslaved as an innocent child.


It has often been said time heals all wounds. BiggE wondered if time would ever heal the enormous wound inflicted upon black people who had been abducted and taken across the Ocean as sub-human. A wound so viciously carved within their psyche would likely take centuries to heal if ever. Afro Avenge

Setting

Pinnacle Prime, the far side of the galaxy.

Based on a True Story

No

Plot - Premise

Overcoming Monster/Villain,Internal Journey/Rebirth,Quest

Plot - Other Elements

Happy Ending,Coming of Age

Mature Audience Themes

Extreme Violence,Nudity,Sexual Abuse, Language/Profanity

Main Character Details

Name: /Ytubu Gambizi/ Little Thug/ Rodney/ BiggE Thug

Age: 13 to 19

Gender: Male

Role: Protagonist

Key Traits: Masculine,Aspiring,Complex,Confident,Decisive,Heroic,Patriotic,Skillful,Visionary,Secretive,Strong Moral Code,Underdog

Additional Character Details

Name: Shaka,

Age: 15

Gender: Male

Role: Sidekick

Key Traits: Aspiring,Charming,Confident,Underdog,Skillful,Visionary,Secretive,Sophisticated,Strong Moral Code,Leader,Heroic

Additional Character Details

Name: Enoch

Age: 13

Gender: Male

Role: sidekick

Key Traits: Underdog,Adventurous,Aspiring,Charming,Complex,Skillful,Secretive,Sophisticated,Gracious,Heroic

Additional Character Details

Name: Jacqueline Biden

Age: 35

Gender: Female

Role: emotional

Key Traits: Aspiring,Modest,Charming,Complex,Sexy,Religious,Outspoken,Blunt,Engaging,Faithful,Romantic,Sophisticated,Strong Moral Code,Educated

Development Pitch

My Novels should adapt to a movie or tv series rather smoothly. It has good locations scenes, a Protagonist, a primary adversary, sidekicks, and other significant characters. When I visualize the scenes they are easily realized. There are numerous characters that display all types of emotions. There are twist, turns, new words and ideas. It filled with action and adventure. My superheroes are like none before them. They are black champions for humanity. Saving mankind from destroying itself because of petty differences that are presently immutable. There's is Lucifer and his hordes of sinister cohorts who does his bidding. He wants control of the surface world so he can be free to revert the cosmos back when there was no light.

About The Author

Target Audiences

Age: 18-34,35-54,55+

Target Gender: Universal

Group Specific

historical

Publishing Details

Hard Copy Available

No

WGA Number

Information not completed

Genre

DRAMA, FANTASY

Brief

When Ytubu was born, the hope for the liberation of a people was born with him. From the young man's perspective, we see the cruelty of slavery that has endured for centuries and whose marks continue to cause suffering to this day.

Overall Rating

GOOD

Point of View

THIRD PERSON

Narrative Elements

Authors Writing Style: GOOD

Characterization: GOOD

Commerciality: GOOD

Franchise Potential: FAIR

Pace: GOOD

Premise: GOOD

Structure: GOOD

Theme: GOOD

Accuracy of Book Profile

The author could include information about himself. This would help us to understand his profile as a writer.

Draw of Story

Ytubu's figure is quite strong. The birth of this baby in a family with such an abundant culture, love, and traditions and still bringing hope for the race, is something that draws us to the story immediately. The author uses an almost epic, mythological tone, which makes the whole experience of the book more poetic, grandiose.

Possible Drawbacks

Because it has a somewhat mythological tone in some parts, reading is a little confusing at times, but nothing that really gets in the way of our experience.

Use of Special Effects

THE STORY RELIES A LITTLE BIT ON SPECIAL EFFECTS

Primary Hook of Story

In an epic, mythological way, the narrative recounts the history of slavery of the black race from the point of view of a substantial character. It is a mix of realism and fantasy that instigates us to watch it.

Fanbase Potential

I think so. It has the potential to attract a high number of spectators, seeking relevant stories, seeking representation on screen.

Awards Potential

I do see potential. Ytubu is almost a representation of the struggle of the black race in the body of a single man, and the mythological tone that places a black man as the central myth of the story elevates the narrative even more.

Envisioned Budget

LARGE BUDGET

Similar Films/TV Series

BLACK PANTHER: STORY OF A BLACK TRIBE, IN WHICH THE SON OF THE EX-KING CLAIMS HIS RIGHT TO THE THRONE, TOLD IN A HEROIC TONE. AMISTAD: A FILM ABOUT THE SLAVE REVOLT INSIDE THE TRANSPORT SHIP AND THE EFFECTS IN LEGAL TERMS.

What’s New About the Story

The story is quite original because it is told almost like mythology. Ytubu is the central myth of the narrative that recounts the history of slavery through the figure of a single man. The epic tone of accomplishments and events elevates it to an even more original outcome.

Lead Characters

Ytubu is a solid and impactful figure. Although the narrative offers him heroic powers that transform him into a myth, Ytubu's struggle is also the struggle of the entire black race, a legion of ordinary people who fought for survival in completely hostile situations. This strength seen in ordinary beings and elevated to a heroic, mythological character raises an entire race's struggle even more to a heroic proportion. Everyone in the history of slavery ended up being also presented as the hero of their own stories. The secondary characters provide the support and antagonism necessary for Ytubu to shine.

Uniqueness of Story

It is a rare gem due to the epic tone of the narrative, the placing of a black man in the center of a mythological tale, and the figure of a man as a visual representation of centuries of history.

Possible Formats

Film: Studio, Streaming

Analyst Recommendation

CONSIDER

Justification

The central character is a powerful figure and a visual representation of a struggle that lasted for centuries and still leaves its mark on society. The mythical tone of the narrative, epic, is attractive because here, it places a black man as the protagonist of this history. Ytubu is a source of empathy and makes us reflect on history as a whole in a natural, organic way. Giving almost non-human characteristics to some characters, such as the mentor who, from above, assists Ytubu in this sad chapter of history, and of the white race, presented here as cruel, impure non-human beings, is of a very effective fantastic realism of representation. Despite causing some strangeness at first, the jump in time uses elements of Greek mythology, where "gods" would assist the hero on his journey. Ytubu is taken almost lifeless from a storm, healed for years, and sent two hundred years after that moment to resume his story. This jump in time helps us to understand the changes in terms of slavery throughout the centuries. In the 19th century, when the topic of liberation was already beginning to be discussed, Ytubu knows the unfolding of history, in which white men start to see the black race as an equal one, in the figure of the character Franklin. Obviously, the adaptation would require a lot of historical research to retell this period more accurately, and the narrative structure would need further development. However, the tone, the narrative style, the author's intriguing writing, and the characters are worthy of consideration.

Logline

Savage Justice is an ageless story that is common to everyone. But it's’ never been told from a black man’s observations and perspective. A tale of hope, love, futility, courage, and camaraderie. Evolution revisited to transform us to a single race. A race of brown people. No black, no white.

Short Summary

Savage Justice is a fascinating story of humanities failures and forthcoming changes. It is a story of evolution revisited. Indiscernible events occurring unseen for the betterment of humanity. It began with the birth of Ytubu Gambizi Jr. He was abducted and enslaved as an innocent child.


It has often been said time heals all wounds. BiggE wondered if time would ever heal the enormous wound inflicted upon black people who had been abducted and taken across the Ocean as sub-human. A wound so viciously carved within their psyche would likely take centuries to heal if ever. Afro Avenge

FEEDBACK

My Novels should adapt to a movie or tv series rather smoothly. It has good locations scenes, a Protagonist, a primary adversary, sidekicks, and other significant characters. When I visualize the scenes they are easily realized. There are numerous characters that display all types of emotions. There are twist, turns, new words and ideas. It filled with action and adventure. My superheroes are like none before them. They are black champions for humanity. Saving mankind from destroying itself because of petty differences that are presently immutable. There's is Lucifer and his hordes of sinister cohorts who does his bidding. He wants control of the surface world so he can be free to revert the cosmos back when there was no light.

About The Author

Mature Audience Themes

Extreme Violence,Nudity,Sexual Abuse, Language/Profanity

Characters

Main Character

Name: /Ytubu Gambizi/ Little Thug/ Rodney/ BiggE Thug

Age: 13 to 19

Gender: Male

Role: Protagonist

Key Traits: Masculine,Aspiring,Complex,Confident,Decisive,Heroic,Patriotic,Skillful,Visionary,Secretive,Strong Moral Code,Underdog

Character 1

Name: Shaka,

Age: 15

Gender: Male

Role: Sidekick

Key Traits: Aspiring,Charming,Confident,Underdog,Skillful,Visionary,Secretive,Sophisticated,Strong Moral Code,Leader,Heroic

Character 2

Name: Enoch

Age: 13

Gender: Male

Role: sidekick

Key Traits: Underdog,Adventurous,Aspiring,Charming,Complex,Skillful,Secretive,Sophisticated,Gracious,Heroic

Character 3

Name: Jacqueline Biden

Age: 35

Gender: Female

Role: emotional

Key Traits: Aspiring,Modest,Charming,Complex,Sexy,Religious,Outspoken,Blunt,Engaging,Faithful,Romantic,Sophisticated,Strong Moral Code,Educated