Good-Vs-Evil

Book Cover

HORROR ROMANCE RELIGIOUS MYSTERY ACTION CRIME DRAMA SUSPENSE/THRILLER WAR FAMILY

Future,Other

Anastacia Burrell

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Logline

Its about putting two couples relationship back together spiritually which is people out here in the world thats willing to put hexs on you with voodoo which is not right to do so an now you have to call a spiritual healer Christian ritual love specialists to bring positivity back into your life.

Genre

Horror,Romance,Religious,Mystery,Action,Crime,Drama,Suspense/Thriller,War,Family

Short Summary

Well, just because someone have done you wrong doesn't mean down the line they will do the same to the next. Sometimes in life you have to go through different types of relationships in order to find that special someone, the only way you can tell if your making progress in your relationship


I been waiting to publish my book for almost ten years now I started writing in 2014 and now in 2018 I got a chance to publish and it's almost 2019 before I started making payments to Authorhouse I publish with them. I'm so happy now to see my book publish for the first time in a while.

Setting

Bloomington, IN 47403

Based on a True Story

Yes

Plot - Premise

Tragedy,Rebellion Against 'The One'

Plot - Other Elements

Twist,Happy Ending,Meaningful Message

Mature Audience Themes

Extreme Violence,Substance Abuse

Main Character Details

Name: Anastacia Burrell

Age: 33

Gender: Female

Role: Emotional

Key Traits: Faithful,Engaging,Sexy,Outspoken,Romantic,Strong Moral Code,Leader,Educated,Badass,Religious,Charming,Confident,Skillful,Funny

Additional Character Details

Name: Anastacia Burrell

Age: 33

Gender: Female

Role: Emotional

Key Traits: Engaging,Faithful,Educated,Leader,Strong Moral Code,Romantic,Funny,Outspoken,Religious,Sexy,Skillful,Visionary,Badass

Additional Character Details

Name: Anastacia Burrell

Age: 33

Gender: Female

Role: emotional

Key Traits: Badass,Charming,Confident,Engaging,Faithful,Educated,Leader,Sexy,Religious,Outspoken,Skillful,Funny,Romantic,Strong Moral Code

Additional Character Details

Name: Anastacia Burrell

Age: 33

Gender: Female

Role: emotional

Key Traits: Badass,Charming,Confident,Engaging,Faithful,Leader,Educated,Sexy,Religious,Outspoken,Skillful,Funny,Romantic,Strong Moral Code

Development Pitch

Writing was something that I always wanted to do years ago in my twenties and I was like "HEY" it will be good to write a book about Good-Vs-Evil The Truth Speaker Old School, The name and titles I came up with Good-Vs-Evil and the second subtitle and why!? because some people mostly a lot of times don't understand what's the spiritual world between heaven and hell is about and why!? they go through so much negativity around them that's why!? it's good to stay prayed up to have altar table decorated and lit it up with Christianity light candles, crystal stones, flowers, holy water an something with your name or someone you love to remove curses on whichever a jealousy woman put on you like "BLACK MAGIC." You do not want a ritual done with black magic on you because in Bible worshipping the war love diva that had fought for her love of her boyfriend on Friday is the day of the Universel Goddess Freya and the Goddess Venus, both Goddesses of Love and Fertility it is ideal to do this spell on a Friday The QUEEN had died from "BLACK MAGIC." Not "WHITE MAGIC". Don't get it twisted "WHITE MAGIC" is good an BLACK MAGIC is evil, worship heavenly father in your ritual spiritual the name of the father and the sun, holy Spirit because putting voodoo on someone's life ain't worth living around negativity when you can be living a peaceful life and prosperity and positivity blessings on what GOD'S heaven Universe manifest meditate magic protection in Glory to live a long lasting free will.

About The Author

hi, My name Anastacia Bionka Burrell the Author of Good-Vs-Evil, I'm originally from Franklin Louisiana-USA I was born and raised in Franklin LA the Creole boot of Louisiana I was birthed a baby before I move out into the city for a while in Sioux City Iowa an came back when I was-9-years old but to be really honest I really hate this city called Iowa because it's not somewhere I want to stay for eternal, it's not my favorite city I will never move back there again I love my own hometown better then Iowa because Franklin LA, Is Louisiana eternal for me because I just love the Creole in it that Louisiana is my favorite place to stay besides ATL I love "Atlanta Georgia" to as well and some part down New Orleans too but I will never move to New Orleans because it's too much hurricanes down there but I would love to take a vacation to the N.O instead where all the good times roll hotels and Mardi gras And I'm very outspoken on what I wrote about Good vs Evil my book, I'm a very spiritual Christian/Baptist willing to help those that are very into life of getting things fixed with their life cleanse in my book and to ask questions about where and why? to get help at and knowing just basing off the history of talking to a communication txt or call good psychic healer readers to find out about my life to get spiritual help and support and knowing an willing to take forward on life just knowing what wisdom and knowledge can take me far as I concern as looking up into the universe worshipping heavenly father and heavens like lighting candles, crystals, sage incenses, just clearing out all the negativity that cause tragedies and negativity to remove that bad energies out my life and besides me being spiritual, I'm very emotional I just don't like people ticking me off and pissing me off besides the point of me being the solo dolo lay-back back person that I am I hate when people do stupid things which is not in my comfort zone which is a pain in the ass and later on down the line I would love to write more books and achieve more and succeed more.

Target Audiences

Age: 18-34,35-54,55+

Target Gender: Male Leaning,Female Leaning

Group Specific

Information not completed

Publishing Details

Status: Yes: self-published

Publisher: Authorhouse

Year Published: December 28 2018

Hard Copy Available

Yes

ISBN

9781504981118

Genre

ROMANCE, MATURE AUDIENCE

Brief

People have trouble keeping it real in the modern era where comparing each other and a lack of privacy is more prevalent than ever. This leads to more insecurity and jealousy within oneself and causes people to be harmful to others as they do not love themselves. Without patience and understanding and commitment love is unable to flourish, but given time to develop these traits, love can last a lifetime even if it has to evolve to different formats.

Overall Rating

FAIR

Point of View

SECOND PERSON

Narrative Elements

Authors Writing Style: FAIR

Characterization: FAIR

Commerciality: FAIR

Franchise Potential: FAIR

Pace: FAIR

Premise: FAIR

Structure: FAIR

Theme: FAIR

Accuracy of Book Profile

The book indeed gives a lot of advice how to make turn a negative experience into a positive lesson and move on. But the mention that there are two couples and their relationships in the logline is unclear as specific characters in the story. Because the story is about relationships but in a hypothetical sense not defined personalities sense it might be easier to follow the advice by creating clear characters that have an emotional arc and external changes to show the impact of the lessons. Or branding the book as a non fiction self help genre rather than genres such as horror and war and thriller might help the descriptions more closely match the purpose of the story.

Draw of Story

There are a lot of intense situations and complicated relationships that are described and given advice on how to remedy. It is interesting how cruel people can be to each other and to themselves but uplifting that everyone can change just as quickly.

Possible Drawbacks

There is a lot of inner conflict, but it is hard to follow the external rising actions of the narrative. The plot is hard to connect outside of the theme.

Use of Special Effects

THE STORY RELIES A LITTLE BIT ON SPECIAL EFFECTS.

Primary Hook of Story

The hook is that people create their own problems but are just as capable of fixing their own issues. This is something that is relatable to everyone as there are so many problems mentioned that everyone is bound to have lived at least one of the situations before.

Fanbase Potential

As this is meant to have a Christian leaning message the religious overtones might create a smaller fanbase in the shadow of secular Hollywood. However because the values are also mixed with other religions including Buddhism and voodoo this could either shrink the Christian audience or expand the audience based on a wider representation.

Awards Potential

This has a lot of intense situations but without specific characters to become emotionally invested in while on a hero's journey, the narrative will have a harder time getting nominated.

Envisioned Budget

MEDIUM BUDGET

Similar Films/TV Series

THE SECRET, A DOG'S PURPOSE, PAY IT FORWARD, I AM NOT YOUR GURU

What’s New About the Story

The originality is the way that what is wrong in each situation is explained with a wider perspective than just the two people involved in a relationship. Focusing on specific characters and how they change in a positive long-lasting way could better showcase the advice as beneficial. Essentially taking the abstract concepts and turning them into concrete examples would make the situations more emotionally investing.

Lead Characters

A lot of work was clearly put into the piece and the advice is consistent without being pandering. There is no lead character specified outside of the person giving the advice.

Uniqueness of Story

This has a lot of situations that aren't common for everyone, but without main characters with an external narrative arc it is more difficult to follow the storyline and themes.

Possible Formats

Film - Indie, Film - Streaming, TV Series - Limited Run / Mini-Series

Analyst Recommendation

WORK IN PROGRESS

Justification

While the story has many positive points, it has room for improvement (see possible paths below). If you can't change the story at this point, my suggestion is using your notes as a guide to highlight the best aspects of it when taking the next steps, either putting a pitch page together, a treatment, or a presentation.

Tips for Improvement

Using the scenarios listed but adapting them to specific people perhaps in a connected large family could help show the good and evil in everyone but showcase the advice to steer people towards better decisions. Without the clear direction of specific characters and their journeys of change it is less clear how the situations are connected.