Coisas de Menino
GENRE
DRAMA LGBT
Core Theme
A VICTIM OF CHILD ABUSE APPROCHES HER ABUER AFTER MANY YEARS WHEN SHE BECOMES HIS NURSE. SHE THEN CONDUCTS A PLOTY IN ORDER TO GET HIM CONFESS HIS CRIME IN FRONT OF HER FAMILY.
TIME PERIOD
Contemporary
COMPARABLE TITLES
EUPHORIA
CHARACTER LIST
ANDREA. 40. LGBT. TRANSGENDER. NURSE. ELEGANT, DISCREET, VINDICTIVE.
RAUL. 30-70.VILLAIN. ANDREA'S/PICCOLO'S ABUSER. PEDOPHILE, EVIL, TWISTED.
LUCIA. 30-70. PICCOLO'S MOM. UNDERSTANDING, LOVING, KING, FORGIVING.
GIOVANNI. 30-70. PICCOLO'S FATHER. STRICT, CHAUVINIST, RUDE, VIOLENT.
CAROLINA. 30-70. RAUL'S LONGTIME WIFE. NAIVE, STRONG MORAL CODE.
FELIPE. 30-35. RAUL'S SON, ANDREA'S LOVE INTEREST.
Logline
Andrea is a nurse and confidant for Raul, a charming sports coach. Heâs stuck in his bed and desperate for redemption, so he decides to share a secret with her. Andrea is now between her professional oath and her will of making justice for Piccolo, the kid sexually assaulted 30 years ago.
Target Audiences
Age: 18-34,35-54,55+
Target Gender: Universal,Female Leaning,Male Leaning,LGBT Leaning
Setting
in the fictional town of Five Hills
Based on a True Story
Yes
Publishing Details
Status: Yes: with a Publisher
Publisher: Illuminare
Year Published: 2016
Starting Description
While Raul is bedridden due to a degenerative illness, he confides to Andrea about a past secret, back to when he sexually arrested a child 30 years ago, the child is his friendâs son, Giovanni. He begs her to kill him, but now she has other plans and wonât have any mercy at all until he agrees on m
Ending Description
Andrea finally manages to compel Raul to confess his crime to his victim and his family. Sheâs the responsible of the arrangements to his reencounter to the boy Piccolo after 30 years. But, what no one could see coming, is that the boy from the past is nowadays Andrea herself.
Group Specific
Information not completed
Hard Copy Available
Yes
ISBN
9788568904336
Mature Audience Themes
Sexual Abuse
Plot - Other Elements
Happy Ending,Twist
Plot - Premise
Overcoming Monster/Villain,Other
Main Character Details
Name: Andrea
Age: 40
Gender: Lgbt
Role: Protagonist
Key Traits: Complex,Skillful,Romantic,Secretive,Educated,Manipulative,Decisive
Additional Character Details
Name: Raul
Age: 65
Gender: Male
Role: Antagonist
Key Traits: Badass,Villainous,Charming,Complex,Engaging,Skillful,Seductive,Educated,Manipulative,Criminal
Additional Character Details
Name: Piccolo
Age: 9
Gender: Male
Role: emotional
Key Traits: Badass,Obedient,Gracious,Insecure,Naive
Additional Character Details
The author has not yet written this
Genre
LGBT, MATURE AUDIENCE, DRAMA
Brief
Andrea is a nurse taking good care of the old Raul. When Raul decides to share his dark secret of having sexually abused a boy, little he knows the nurse is the boy himself who transitioned after leaving the small town of Five Mounts.
Overall Rating
GOOD
Narrative Elements
Authors Writing Style: GOOD
Characterization: GOOD
Commerciality: GOOD
Franchise Potential: GOOD
Pace: GOOD
Premise: GOOD
Structure: GOOD
Theme: GOOD
Accuracy of Book Profile
Book Profile reflects the book accurately.
Draw of Story
The initial setting of the story is compelling due to the mystery of the horrible crime that made Raul's wife leave him in such a delicate moment of his life, and it is also captivating to follow how Andrea manoeuvres the situation in order to get a confession from him.
Possible Drawbacks
Passages describing abuses may be difficult to read and triggering for people who endured sexual abuse; Andrea's attraction to Felipe, Raul's son who looks a lot like him when he was her abuser, may be reconsidered.
Use of Special Effects
THE STORY DOES NOT RELY ON SPECIAL EFFECTS
Primary Hook of Story
I would watch this movie because its premise is unique and deals with a delicate matter such as sexual abuse in children, offering a fictional possibility for the victim to settle a trauma that has profoundly marked her life.
Fanbase Potential
It could have a large fanbase if adapted, especially because the plot is sophisticated and brings along a transgender protagonist.
Awards Potential
It could have awards potential if adapted because the theme is a huge conversation starter for themes that have been latent and are gaining momentum within society.
Envisioned Budget
MEDIUM BUDGET
Similar Films/TV Series
EUPHORIA
Whatâs New About the Story
This story is original because narrative's arc is well built, and there are unexpected pivots into character's line, as per when Andrea reveals herself to be Piccolo.
Lead Characters
Andrea is an apparent dedicated nurse who is actually looking for revenge and a confession from the man who abused her during childhood. The way she slowly reveals herself as the young Piccolo is what ties the narrative together.
Uniqueness of Story
It is a rare gem due to the originality of the plot and layers of characters, but it could also be stylistically improved.
Possible Formats
Film: Studio, Indie, Streaming TV Series: Network, Cable, Limited Run / Mini-Series, Streaming
Analyst Recommendation
CONSIDER
Justification
The narrative is original, characters are complex and plot is engaging; characters could be improved in terms of lines and more powerful dialogues between them.
Brief
Raul is an old man approaching death and being haunted by past secrets when he decides to confess to Andrea, a nurse that is taking care of him, that he raped a child. It is revealed later that Andrea is, herself, the young boy Raul raped, and gets him to confess his crime in front of Andrea's family.
What We Liked
This title is original because the plot is surprising, it deals with themes that are taboo in society, and it is also shocking and engaging. Not only the protagonist is transgender, but this fact is also essential for the narrative.
Film: It would also be a great adaptation for a Film because the plot is engaging and well-tied up from the beginning to the end. Also, protagonist is engaging and characters are complex. Scenes may be visually shocking but are contextualised in order to educate people on how sexual predators may act.
TV: It would be a great adaptation for TV because the protagonist slowly reveals her real identity and new pieces of information are put together.
Even though at first possibilities of Andrea being the child Raul abused don't seem feasible, the puzzle gets solved in a skilful manner by the author.
Key points: Transgender protagonist; pertinent theme; surprising narrative; revenge plot with twists; evil and complex villain.
Synopsis
Andrea is a loving nurse that came back from Europe after the death of her husband, Piero.
She became part of Giovanni's family after taking care of Lucia, Giovanni's late wife, until her last days. She is then referred to take care of Raul, a friend of the family. The man is also mentally disturbed because he hides a secret, and confesses it to Andrea seeking relief for his guilty conscience. When his wife, Carolina, overhears the secret - that he sexually abused a child - she decides to leave him to die alone. However, Andrea stays taking care of him and states that she will hear his story as long as she is able to record his confessions. Raul then talks about his life as an orphan and the various sexual abuses he endured early in his life. Andrea manipulates him to confess his crimes and also tortures him by controlling the drugs he would or wouldn't take. She also discovers a file in Raul's computer filled with child pornography.
We are then transported to the sad childhood of Piccolo, the boy Raul abused. The boy was continuously emotionally and physically abused by his father, colleagues, especially Clayton, brother Luigi and his teacher, Raul. Piccolo is led to believe he was the one causing the abuses, and only had the support of his mom, unable to protect him from everyone. Piccolo disappears when he was 14 and never comes back. Back to Raul's last days and Andrea getting his confession, his son Felipe, with whom Andrea falls in love, begins to suspect there is a secret between his father and Andrea.
After collecting evidences of the crime, Andrea gathers both families in order to reveal not only the crime to everyone, but her real identity as Piccolo. Andrea then reveals her truth and the folder in Raul's computer, which contained images of children being abused by Luigi and Clayton, revealing a net of child abusers, that were readily arrested. Giovanni, in his deathbed, finally accepts Andrea as his daughter.